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Title: Dead?
Reviewed By: Sprinda [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2010 03:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why had you not updated. I love this story. I gave you a 1 becuase you have not updated. PLEASE FOR THE LOVE EDWARD PLEASE UPDATE. I do love this story
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Reviewed By: anf600 - toni On: October 23, 2009 00:21 CDT
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Very intriguing story line. I like it that it isn't the typical yaoi. I hope you update soon.
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Title: Long Time...
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: September 11, 2009 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
(My review diden't make it all the way ^^') My gosh time flys! Started college, got a new kitten, and before I knew it months had gone by! Im terribly sorry for being so late! I did love this chapter though and have to wonder if Edward is developing a split personality? It's interesting to say the least and I can't wait to see what happens next! ~Passing Reader
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Title: Long Time...
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: September 11, 2009 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My gosh time flys! Started college, got a new kitten, and before I knew it months had gone by! Im terribly sorry for being so late >__
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Title: Monthly Prodding...
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 28, 2009 12:40 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi, just making sure your alive. I figured it was time for some motivational prodding ahaha! I figure your busy, but I just wanted to assure you that you still had readers here waiting on baited breath for the next chapter :p It really is a wonderful story and I just want to ensure that it's not abandoned; so I figured I'd review every now and again even when you haven't updated to let you know that 'yes it is worth the time and effort, someone is still reading!' Or at least, thats what I'm hopeing to convey ^^; Typing has no real sense of feeling D: ~Passing Reader
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Title: I have internet again :3
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: June 01, 2009 20:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I finally got internet, bout a week ago, and had to come see if you'd updated! I'm so happy and yet a little sad, since after reading this chapter I'm kinda in "Poor Edward!" mode :p I'm sorry I didn't review sooner! Work, family birthdays, planting evil roses and Irises that want to stab and maim me... ^^' All that then getting sick :( I can't wait for the next installment, Roy said something about a test to be passed so we could move ahead yeah? And Eddie passed it! I'm dying to know what will happen next! Till then here's waiting (to the end of time if need be lol) ~Passing Reader
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Reviewed By: Clipsed [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2009 21:46 CDT
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I never thought I'd say this, but I LIKE the irregular updates - makes for a nice surprise ^^;; I must say, though a part of me is happy that Eddie seems to be coming along well, another part misses Ed terribly. Another well-done chapter =)
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Title: Showing Support! :D
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: May 01, 2009 11:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just figured I'd come review to remind you that you do still have readers who are most desperatly in love with your story and are wondering/hopeing that there is going to be a next chapter? It's just been a while since you updated and I'm starting to get reader insecurities ^^' I really do come by at least once a week to see if you've updated and would very much like for you continue. Would it help if I reviewed once a week as well and bombard you with all the mush I can spew off about this readers affection for your story? (That's embarrassing to type, but true!)If so tell me and I'll do as you wish, just please finish so I'm not left wondering any more T_T Take resposability for the obsession you started lol! On a side note, I'm moving this upcoming monday so I won't be able to read/review till we get internet an our new place which is why I;m doing this now :3 Do please continue this brilliant story, I'm still hanging from where you left me before and my arms are starting to hurt hahah ^^' Here's still waiting and hoping to inspire! ~Passing Reader
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Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 26, 2009 22:11 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yaaay! You updated! I wish this had been the reason I was late for work today rather than my stupid alarm clock. Damn thing didn't go off this morning and to add to it my clumsyness was in full effect! Totally worth it if I get to read another chapter of this story! This has brightend my day considerably! ThankyouThankyouThankyou! I do have to wonder if you have posted this on adultfanfiction.net (Mediaminer's sister site) If you haven't I would recommend you do so for the meer fact that you'd probibly get more reviews there. People tend to update more, so reviewers are abundant. (I know Mediaminer has had some dead days :p) Just passing the advise, don't mind me too me eh ;p Beautifully written as always, I can't wait for the next chapter! Here's waiting for the next update! ~Passing Reader
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Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: March 22, 2009 21:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just wanted to add a fresh review and to say that i'm still eagerly awaiting the next chapter to this fic, so if your uninspired, at a loss for what comes next, or just don't have the time to write, please, please, PLEASE don't give up! I'm sure there are several other readers waiting with me and even if it takes a year, which I really hope it dosen't, I can promise that I'll still be here waiting to review the greatness that is your story! Till then ~Passing Reader
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Title: Morbidly Fantastic!
Reviewed By: Passing Reader On: January 10, 2009 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't even know where to begin! Beautifully written and very captivating! I coulden't stop reading once I started! The rebuilding of Ed's mind and watching Roy's slowly decay....its beyond words! The characters really do seem to be changing, though perhaps into something slightly twisted, but overall one can see the bond forming here. I think this is one of the more...sureal fics that I've read and can't wait for more! Heres' waiting for the next update, and please make it soon! ;p
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Reviewed By: E-Marie On: January 06, 2009 12:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like your story, it kept me interested and i couldn't believe i read all 11 chapters so fast!, it left me wanting more i hope you continue soon.
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Reviewed By: graypheonix85 On: November 12, 2008 00:29 CST
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Well, a several month wait (was that 6?) is a pain in the ass. Neh. Continue to update though, it's an interesting story. Ja ne.
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Reviewed By: Darksuccubus30 On: August 30, 2008 16:44 CDT
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This is an awesome story i hope to read more of it in the future, if it isnt too big of a thing to ask could you email me when you have a nother chapter for this? thank you
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Reviewed By: Clipsed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
VERY well done. Update soon?
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Reviewed By: kitsunesan*nsi* On: June 07, 2008 16:23 CDT
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omg plese update soon@ im in love with this story. it brings tears to my eyes :') please update more.
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Title: YAY
Reviewed By: Love this so much On: May 01, 2008 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So glad you updated, I really love this fic. Please write more :)
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Reviewed By: Britni Fullmetal Otaku [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2008 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. you make ME almost think Ed's thoughts!!! I love your choice of words and the way you describe things. all the awkwardness, sense of pride, and security seems so vivid and alive! you've made a really good story that i've become addicted to!
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Reviewed By: Kathy lee [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 19:51 CST
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Where the HELL ARE THE SEX SCENES!!!!!
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Title: Nooo!
Reviewed By: Kathy lee On: February 19, 2008 13:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
FINISH OR YOU'LL SEEEEEEEEEEE!
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Reviewed By: ElegantPaws [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 22:29 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BINGO! It took Edward aka Eddie to get there finally. Oh yes, Roy benefits too, but finally that big brain of Elric is working. Nicely done. This entire was masterfully done. I enjoyed it immensely. A great character study. MAGNIFICENT. EP
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Reviewed By: ElegantPaws [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Superb. Was very happy to find I could go on reading for a bit more at MM.org. Thank you for the heads up. Hmmm, in this instance enjoyed Ed or should I say Eddie working through the dynamics that are unfolding. Equally Roy's own growing perception. Well done. Thank you for another great chapter. EP
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Title: update soon!
Reviewed By: Britni Fullmetal Otaku [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 19:38 CST
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when art thou going to update next? soon i hope o.o
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Reviewed By: sankekorafi On: November 29, 2007 20:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent fanfic! A little on the strange side, granted, but you've definitely caught my interest! I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Title: edsgirl10310
Reviewed By: lyndac. On: November 20, 2007 21:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i felt like crying at some parts...you have to continue soon...i know, i know your busy but i love this fic so much..though i dont like edward in this state of being...have somthing exciting hapen too..(and no im not saying that this story is boring either..)thanks ^^
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Title: poor eddie
Reviewed By: Britni Fullmetal Otaku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2007 16:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm surprised at myself. usually i wouldn't like a story where ed gets...well...tortured in a way. but you wrote this SO GOOD that...it's just amazing! and so easy to get into!! really really really good job! i cried when ed got his hair cut off and shaved and had to be called eddie.... please keep updating. you're a wonderful writer!
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Title: Hey
Reviewed By: Makai [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2007 21:04 CDT
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Why havn't you updated?? It's been forever!!!! I love your story though
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Reviewed By: catherine! On: October 10, 2007 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!! damn a GREAT story but poor roy and ed.. u have a thing for them? i do 2! lol plz update soon ur an excellent writer!! :D
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Reviewed By: JungleBunny On: September 24, 2007 20:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You're chapters are coming so slow-you're making me crazy! You're story is awesome, and I have it saved in my favorites so every few weeks I open it and check for new chapters. *cries* I can't take it. Please post!
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Title: WOW!!
Reviewed By: Ed On: August 16, 2007 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is ssssssssooooooooooooo intense!!!! I LOVE your story!!! you need to write the next chapter as soon as possable!!!! Have you written any other stories on media minor? If so e-mail me the names! My e-mail is luvdragon475@aol.com
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