| "Training Edward Elric" Reviews/Comments [ 59 ] |
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Title: oooh! update!
Reviewed By: xXx_Wings_of_a_demon_xXx [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2007 19:15 CST
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WOW! I love it! It's a great story line. rather awkward, But a great storyline, never the less. please update! I'll pester you until you do ¢¾
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Reviewed By: Kagome_the_Yorkie (Not Logged In) On: January 08, 2007 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Noveber 12?! Sheesh! Come on, update! You can do it! Please?
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Reviewed By: Insomniac Owl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 19:02 CST
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That's very... interesting. Well, I think I know what's going to happen! Yeah... though I really do think that they should have given poor Ed some more information on what he'd be getting himself into. Ah well. Update soon!
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Title: please update!
Reviewed By: Britni On: November 09, 2006 15:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
your story is kinda awkward (with ed being naked and all) but overall i love your story! u seriously HAVE to update. i need to know what they did and what happened to Ed?!
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Reviewed By: Slayer66 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sigh* Such a lovely story. Just the thing to help me refrain from telling my mom that yelling at the TV will not help the Steelers win.
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Reviewed By: XO9-C On: November 04, 2006 13:28 CST
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whoa, exciting. what does roy mean, "I'm definately a ladies man.."? ohh, this is getting GOOD! WRITE MOR PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Queenphoenix7 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 19:20 CDT
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Ah, no fair! I was just getting hooked too! You just HAVE to write more soon!
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Title: For Chapter 3.
Reviewed By: Child Xylia [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 23:28 CDT
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"I just want you to know that I didn't except this because of… some things… that will probably take place during the training. I'm not like that. I'm definitely a ladies man…" Yeah, this definitely should have been X-rated. XD XP =D
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Title: yay!
Reviewed By: black_bengal_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 17:37 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon! ....for some reason I keep thinking of the 'training' and 'punishment' from loveless. Oo i know I'm strange.
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Reviewed By: vincents_lover_ffall [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2006 07:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is really good! Keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Child Xylia (I haven an account.) On: August 20, 2006 14:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Damn, you're really stringing us along here! XD I'm guessing that we find out about the training in the next chapter? ...Please? Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: BloodyBlack [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2006 11:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is awesome please update as soon as possilbe i can't wait to find out whats going to happen Though i do wish it was x rated as well tehe oh well. Again please up date soon!
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Reviewed By: whoa On: August 20, 2006 11:03 CDT
Comment/Review:
pllllzzzz finish it its getting interesting!!! oh ands its good!
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Reviewed By: Child Xylia (I have an account) On: August 09, 2006 23:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well, this seems mighty interesting. I'm almost sad that it's not X rated because - whoo boy! - that would be great fun! =D Haha, hope you let us know what's happening next soon! I can't wait to read what poor Ed will have to do.
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Reviewed By: ranjn On: August 09, 2006 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this a really great opening for a story, and I'm very intrested in seeing what the training actually is. I would definately like to see this story continue.
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