| "Enemies & Lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kitsune1818 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2011 16:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
A great fic! well planned, without detours, and a concise plot the perfect touch of humor and angst. I do not like the 2x1, luckily, you do not put anything important in lemon scenes, so that I can skip them without worry. I really enjoy your work, I go through your profile to see what else I can not find. |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: August 29, 2006 07:31 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I don't know how I can not review. This story is fabulous. Easily one of my favorites. It's funny, romantic and overall, it's well done. Congrats.
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 17, 2003 15:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch. 1 was hilarious, the way both parents were lecturing their sons made laugh all the way through. Ch. 12 Quatre passing out was really funny and then, ch. 14 Merian's attitude towards wufei and the way he grumbled was priceless. Ch. 16 was both comical and sweet. The epilogue was sweet. Heero was wayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy possesive but I still love this fic. Keep up the awesome job.
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Reviewed By: Shinigami_sama02 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2003 17:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. |
Reviewed By: Annoying Review Girl On: March 21, 2003 11:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your plot has been used a few times, I'm afraid, but WOW!! This story almost made me skip school to read. I mean , OMG!!! The Duo/Heero pairing is great, and you just made it greater. WOnderful writer. Make more stories!!! Ja!
-ARG |
Reviewed By: sugar On: October 18, 2002 13:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sniffles... that was just too sweet... like nice chocolate fudge brownie with chocolate sauce... oh and vanilla icecream... oook ignore that... just goregous... loved it to bits and beyond... sighs... posessive heero, aww... i luve them together too sweet
beautiful ending too... nicely done
c ya
Sugar |
Reviewed By: mandy200 On: July 20, 2002 12:36 EDT
Comment/Review:
it gave me warm fuzzies inside! it was so sweet!! i love it! |
Reviewed By: Virago [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2002 02:58 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:: sniffs:: Awww... that... was... so... sweet...I loved it! |
Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2002 01:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is fantastic! I loved it! It had just the right amount of everything: Fluff, angst, etc...
*sigh* I really love Duo/Heero fics. This one, however, really topped my fluff list. It's wonderful.
I was moved at how you could really show how they were feeling...It takes a wonderful author to be able to make the readers
actually feel the emotions felt by the characters. As said before, is said again, this was wonderful.
Ja~
Anata |
Reviewed By: Sasha Janre On: July 14, 2002 16:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh ... my ... God. This is an amazing fic. You had everything a good story should: a plot that surprises the audience, great characterzation, and best of all, a happy ending! I only hope I could write a GW yaoi fic as good as this one. LoL, who knows, time will tell. Good luck on any of your future stories!
*~Sasha Janre*~ |
Reviewed By: Meinu On: July 14, 2002 16:16 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good, some repetitive spelling/grammar problems. The happy ending was cliche, but I love happy endings, so it's all good. ::wink:: |
Reviewed By: shi_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2002 10:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
Beautiful story and a wonderful ending. Great job! |
Reviewed By: A.K.A. Anonymous [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 22:16 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey! Nice story! Interesting twists throughout and a cute ending; especially Duo's somewhat-botched plan. But I like how things worked out. Sap, sappity, sap, sap, sap!
--Anon=) |
Reviewed By: Ruby_Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2002 14:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a beautiful story, i never get tired of romeo and julliette(don't no how to spell, stop bugin me!)stories! u r an amazing author! i expect to see more stories from u!!! |
Reviewed By: shi_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2002 16:22 EDT
Comment/Review:
I love the way this one turned out. This was a great story, good job! |
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