"Enemies & Lovers" Reviews/Comments [ 33 ] |
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Reviewed By: TsukiAnya [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2002 13:56 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This story I thought, was very very good. I read all 15 chapters in the same night bicause this was so good. Let's just say I went to bed pretty late ^_^; . I hope to read the next chapter very very soon!!! |
Reviewed By: fox of death On: June 27, 2002 09:47 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is awesome. I wanna read more!!! |
Reviewed By: shi_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2002 16:13 EDT Comment/Review: Very sweet chapter. |
Reviewed By: shi_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2002 15:11 EDT Comment/Review: Wow! You're really leaving us hanging here. Can't wait to see the next part! |
Reviewed By: shi_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2002 16:13 EDT Comment/Review: Getting even more in depth! This is a great story, I really can't wait to find out what happens to them! |
Reviewed By: Asuka Kureru On: May 25, 2002 20:35 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: You DARE to stop there?! ;__; I want the rest of it, preferably now (but i'll settle for very very soon ^__^) (err, just a question, is everyone bi in the yuy and maxwell families? ;p not that it bothers me... hehehe)
The ratings are what they are because, ( IMHO No one deserves a 10 I think, not even professional writers... or only the best ^^) you haven't got a bad style of writing, tho I've seen better I've also seen far worse (and more often, too -__- ). You don't make grammar and/or spelling mistakes often, or not that I can see, apart from the occasional typo. The overall originality, well... I would have put a five (meaning not good nor bad) or something because after all this kind of romeo and juliet plot is used so often it's gotten slightly cliché, but as it has been rather well developped and the world it takes place in has creativity, it would have deserved an eight. As for the enjoyment factor, I read it all in one sitting and my eyes hurt now, so I guess it can answer to the question ^___^ All in one, it's a quite good fanfic and I hope to read more of it soon... especially since the confrontation between the parents is approaching... mwehehehehe (insert diabolical laughter here) |
Reviewed By: shi_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2002 00:59 EDT Comment/Review: Great story! Can't wait to read more! |
Reviewed By: Flame_of_Ignacious [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2002 08:33 EDT Comment/Review: hurry up hurry up hurry up! i need to read more! mwa ha ha ha |
Reviewed By: Flame_of_Ignacious [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2002 14:54 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: i love this fic! it's great!!!!! writemore writemore writemore |
Reviewed By: Element_Rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2002 16:11 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wot do you think u r doing?!?! im sittin here waitin 4 u to subit another chapter and...nothing. im going to review every chapter so the process will be sped up!!! DAMMIT!!! ^_^* |
Reviewed By: Shinigami2 On: May 05, 2002 05:13 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: WOW!-
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!.
Awwwww!- I wish you didn't end it there- it was REALLY! good!,
Plzplzplzplz- I LOVE Heero/Duo fics!,
MORE!
IT WAS FANTASTIC! |
Reviewed By: Element_Rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: May 04, 2002 14:46 EDT Comment/Review: nicely done!! hehe IM BACK!!! must...have more |
Reviewed By: Element_Rogue [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2002 11:25 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: *Stares at screen in awe* 0...0...o...o WOW!!! i'm a grat lover of heero/duo fics, this is great! plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz writ more or i'll come during the night and kill u... *thunder rumbles in the backround*....i'm your wordt nightmare!!!! ^_^ k? |
Reviewed By: Virago [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2002 14:02 EDT Comment/Review: Must....have...more.... |
Reviewed By: Daz On: April 22, 2002 03:12 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Another great chapter! I'm so glad Trowa and Wufei were introduced. Hope a new chapter comes out soon *hint hint* |
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