| "Rubies & Sapphires Book 2: Onyx & Citrine" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: spiritwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story and I really like the pairing it is rare to find this pairing please update the story you haven`t updated this stor in a long time s please update SOON
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 04:22 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehe awsome "KAKASHI MY ETERNAL RIVAL, WHAT IS THIS I HEAR ABOUT YOU TREATING YOUR VERY UNYOUTHFUL COLLECTION OF LITERATURE WITH MORE CARE THAN YOU TREAT YOUR ETERNALLY YOUTHFUL OTOUTO? EH? PLEASE ANSWER ME!" rofl never laughed so hard in my life *burst into fits of laughter again* great chapter pls update soon XD
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Reviewed By: gau ban [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2006 08:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i was wondering if you were going to continue this eventually or was it was on haiatus. also this was very well written and enjoyable
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Reviewed By: rasengan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2006 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think youve done an excelent job with this story. I don't really like the way you cut out sakura, I kinda like her but im not going to sit here and bitch about it when im not the one righting this story. other than that this is one of the best naruto remakes ive read keep up the good work.
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Title: rawr...me want more!
Reviewed By: Dreadman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2006 18:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
RAWRRR me want more! picks up a giant polearm Rawr! moree! throws it right through a harmless child More or i shall impale a other chibi! :*(
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Reviewed By: Milton [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2006 20:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG dude i think overall ur fic including the first one are some of the best naruto fics i have read, pleade update soon i feel that this story really shows a lot of the detail and care you put in ur fics keep it up and i hope that ur future fics are as good or better than this.
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Title: Aoidragon
Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awesome! ^^ i liked this chapter, i kinda forgot akiri was there... >.> =) please update soon! be looking forward to it
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 10:26 CDT
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i must know what kurenai's presant is although i have a sneaking suspicion.
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Title: two things
Reviewed By: Lone Kyuubi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 15:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great new chapter for Rubies and Sapphires. I like how Naruto and Kakashi use Gai's loud voice against eachother. Keep up the good work! BTW, coincedentally, I'm currently reading the story about Naruto with the lion, Kogane. It's called Cats and Foxes by king_random. I'm reading it on FicWad.com, but, I'm not sure if the title's the same on MM.org or FF.net
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Title: Katana Haibane
Reviewed By: AuronX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 28, 2006 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just a note: this is a completely different chapter than what you have posted on FF.Net. It is not anywhere close to being the same.
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