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Title: HIYA
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2008 13:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
soo sorry it took me so long to friend you I didn't know who you were and I haven't been on myspace for a while lol. yeah a new chapter soon cause I had a good laugh with the others even though I'm too darn lazy to update anymore sigh sorry about that. But I have been reading and just been so excite with each chapter. I lol my butt of when I Sesshomaru reacted the way he did . good thing the wolf was there hmm. Is there love blooming in the air with Sango and the healer??? maybe he can help in some magical demon was for her to be able to have children. Oh and lets not for get the baka Kagome hope a ton of guilt is in it for her keh baka she's worst than Kikyou. any way I really do like how the story between Inuyasha and Sesshomaru turning out they have there ups and downs like any couple. The love the way you ended the last chapter so sweet. Sesshy a spoil prince maybe he's not that grown up after all. ok I this I've taken up enough space hope to see more of Inuyasha new powers. wait we need another heavy petting session with our favorite inu's plz puppy eyes ( look there starting to water.) lol have a good one.
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Title: so excited
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 09:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man I'm telling you. your just exciting me with these wonderful update!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I had to go back to chapter one to reread to understand some of the stuff going on and I'm like oh yeah I remember that! lol as alway I hate kagome ler suffer and these almost lemon are kill in me. Inuyasha new power is so cool I can't wait to read more updates so without me being rude UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol hugs
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Reviewed By: wolfluv [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 02:15 PDT
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I cannot thank you enough for sharing this fantastic story with us!!! your writing style and imagination thrills me to no end another excelent chapter please grace us with more! THANK YOU FOR UPDATING!!!!
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 03:13 PDT
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at least miroku is clear on where inuyasha's affections are. i laughed at the scene where miroku could hear inuyasha's thoughts. i do hope kouga tells miroku, soon. i love the pace and the chapter length in this story. it keeps the feeling fresh and alive. i still enjoy the pov switches. you handle it well. it helps the story be more complete. not many authors could handle it without it being confusing. thank you for another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 04:52 PDT
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now some of the confusion is being cleared up. i loved the tender moments between inuyasha and sesshoumaru. you expressed the emotions so well in your writings. miroku feels lost and alone now, as does kouga. but i don't imagine it will be long before they are together. and now sango has a new interest in her life, even if she can't see it yet. i love where this is going. thank you for a wonderful chapter.
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Reviewed By: yashandkag4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 15:23 PDT
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i am strangly attracted to this bizarre phenominon(sp?) that is your story. i normally don't like yaoi. it makes me feel so uncomfortable and is too weird for me. but something about yours makes me want to keep going. wow, i'm so perverted. i like your writing style and your story even if seeing all these guys as couples creeps me out. keep up the good work. update soon.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2008 04:23 PDT
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so, now that sesshoumaru knows how kouga feels about miroku, i can just picture the great lord of the west playing matchmaker. i love you writing style. i love seeing the same scene from different points of view. there were a couple of verb tense mistakes, but not enough to slow down the feel of the story. great job, and i look forward to the next chapter
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2008 01:56 PDT
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wow, 2 chapters in one day. and there was so much going on in each chapter. it was so much fun reading miroku and inuyasha being able to hear each other's thoughts. but now the emotional stage is even more crowded! my poor brain in befuddled with geometric patterns. are there two triangles--one with inuyasha, miroku and kouga and one with inuyasha, miroku and sesshoumaru, or one square? or it could even be a circle with inuyasha at the center and sango, miroku, kouga and sesshoumaru revolving around him. thank you for all the time and effort you have put into this wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: SakeNaru [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2008 15:24 PDT
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I hope Inuyasha lives but it so sad about the whole inu miroku kouga thing... but I want to read more!!! Update when you get the chance
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2008 14:15 PDT
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miroku finally opens up to inuyasha. now there are hard choices to make, aren't there? i loved the way inuyasha's personality came through at the end of the chapter. i love the sarcastic side of him. this is turning into a very deep emotional ride, and i enjoyed every moment of it. thank you for this wonderful chapter
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Reviewed By: Isis191 On: January 26, 2008 09:00 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has been my favorite story since I first found it here and on FanFiction. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful and well thought out tale.
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Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2007 04:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg!....i luv this chappie!...it's os awesome...but no mating?????!!!!!NOOOOOOOO!...o well...i luv it anyway....hope 2 c an update and sum smut soon!^^
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Title: i luv it!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: BelovedEllie [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 17:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omg i luved it!!!!...i hope 2 c a lemon or sum smut in the next chappie b/c i'll be luving it even more...o and i started a fic...plz o check it out and tell me wat u think about it...my very 4st fic evr...hope u like that as much as i luv this:)
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2007 04:28 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story, and the way you are telling it. not many authors can keep switching the point of view, and still keep the flow of a story. you have kept everyone in character so well. even kagome. while the basic personality is changing, she still shows signs of the kagome we all know. i spent all my free time this weekend getting caught up on this story, and it wasn't wasted time. i thoroughly enjoyed every minute, and i would like to thank you for the enjoyment it gave me
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Reviewed By: grace317 On: September 11, 2007 21:38 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohmygod i feel all fluffy inside!THAT WAS SO CUTE!!! the reason i gave a 9 for spelling and grammar was because there were a few errors, though. poor miroku..i wonder if kouga has the hots for him :S
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