| "Falling Away" Reviews/Comments [ 68 ] |
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Reviewed By: ShibaInu On: August 01, 2009 01:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your writing, it's practically my fave fan fic so far....but one thing i want to know is exactly WHEN are you going to carry on the story......gods dont leave us hanging like that
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Reviewed By: Jaden_Birdie_Blythe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 19:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great. I can't wait for the next chapter to be out.
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Reviewed By: Phantom_soul_player666 On: January 05, 2009 17:16 PST
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I have read all of this story, your writing has improved as the story progresses. More.. I want more.
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Reviewed By: WolfWing On: December 20, 2008 11:23 PST
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Yay! New chapter!Oddly enough I was just re-reading the rest of this story(cause I ran out of new ones to read) and got to the end of the previous chapter just to find there was a new one! Thank you! It's a great story and you are portraying the characters beautifully. Kinda wish I had a picture of what Inuyasha looks like now ^.^
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2008 05:30 PDT
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i cant wait to find out what happens next, i hope inuyasha's demon doesnt hurt anyone.
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Reviewed By: mcdgoddess On: September 30, 2008 02:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two updates within three days just made my whole week! Talk about the s*** hitting the fan in this chapter. I didn't think it would get this bad and it ended up just exploding. I hope Inuyasha doesn't hurt Miroku, because that would only make him feel worse. I'm glad that Koga finally did something about his feelings. I am so stalking MM now for updates.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2008 15:45 PDT
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this was a great chapter. the action never stopped. almost every character made an appearance. i felt every emotion that you wrote. i think this was the best chapter of a great story. the new growth in inuyasha has brought its own problems with it. now i see why it was necessary, and i can accept it. what else can i say, except that i loved it. thanks for the great post!
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Reviewed By: mcdgoddess On: September 28, 2008 11:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for the update!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 15:44 PDT
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poor sessy, i think it would be best if kaede came to them and fast.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2008 14:29 PDT
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i still can't accept the physical changes, but i love the way the story is going. you're building conflicts all over the place, and then miroku says there's not much time for trouble to happen. that means that it's really going to hit the fan that night, doesn't it? thanks for another great chapter.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: August 15, 2008 03:14 PDT
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i love your story. part of the reason i've been drawn to it was the diametrically oppositional natures of inuyasha and sesshoumaru. now, with the coming of age, you are giving them a parity that isn't what i was looking for. the changes that inuyasha went through have changed his characterization, in my mind at least. i will continue to read and enjoy this srtory, though.
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2008 16:19 PDT
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thank you for the update. little shippo worrying about if sess will love him is so cute, but i'm starting to wonder when kouga will get up the nerve to talk to miroku.
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Reviewed By: wbk [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2008 04:17 PDT
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this was one of the most sensual chapters i've ever read. i loved the lust trance! you wove such an emotional piece with your words. thank you
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Title: giving it as go as you got
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 20:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL you know I thought about Shgure-san When I was reading the parts with Tibade I was like he reminds me of Takara his mate is barren like Sango and he has a wonderful spirt like Takara even if he's more open. So now you have to finish the tale the whole thing. and would the inu boy reaction to it if there not busy ahem lol. Be funny if Inuyasha tired out the great lord himself lol. docile indeed. Now inuyasha just have to get through with telling sesshomaru about the bond. poor puppy or should I say happy face lol. this is just getting way too good.
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Title: you've made so happy
Reviewed By: ladytokyo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 18:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Here I am in my apt. that gets no wifi and i do. waiting all day for some one to update and you do. I'm so freakin happy u don't understand and this chapter was just way to funny and lemony goodness. just because they can't have sex doesn't mean they can't do stuff. lol and boy was it good I couldn't laughing my butt off. I have to tell ya I have become quite a fan of Tibade's he's very funny or at least you make him out to be. lol I have to go back a reread this chapter it was that good. Oh do you hang out on gaia? baibai for now update soon
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