"The Realisation: Sequel" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Tails_Worship14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2007 13:10 CST Comment/Review: I never evem knew you had written this Lori. ell, I read it now, and it's impressive; if you do ever read this, I would like you to continue your work.
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Title: kool Reviewed By: TheRealScootTh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 11:56 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: kool a sequel huh well you keep a' addin i'll keep a' reviewin k really good
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Title: sorry Reviewed By: iamsomeone [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 17:09 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ya know lori i neverd realised that you had made a sequal and im sorry for not reviewing it i probably missed it because i went on holiday anyway once agin sorry carry on with this pleassssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee i mean if you want to lol i really liked the first one BTW you probably guessed it but i became a member and well its me i.am.someone but i wasn't aloud to have the dots (or full stops if you wanna be smart) in my name DAMNIT lol *BYE* P.S il be very upset if you don't carry on :'( hehe
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Reviewed By: j320 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 16:00 CDT Comment/Review: hawt sonamy action! yay! rlly good job plz continue!
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Title: yay!! Reviewed By: xEmbeRx On: September 09, 2006 16:18 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: OHMIGHOSH!! OHMIGOSH!! OHMIGOSH!! a SEQUEL?!?!?! yipee! I'm so happy and excited! Usually, i dont read lemons, but I clicked on this because I know from your past fanfic that youre an incredible author, although I was a tad bit dissapointed in this lemon. It was oddly short, where usually, the sex scene goes on for three pages with a great deal of in-depth detail. It was pretty well done though, considering it was your first attempt at a lemon. I cant wait for you to continue this (that is if you are planning to) I've been waiting for a sequel to 'the realisation' for quite some time now. (its the only story ive actually reviewed on here! I only have an official account of ff.net, that's why) Anyway, please continue this soon, kay? =] and overall, i think you did a fantabulous job!!
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Reviewed By: Samantha1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 26, 2006 23:54 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10 Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review: This lemon is sweet, the only problem I had is the sex scene is too short. It was over as soon as it got started. Can I give you a bit of advice though? If you add anymore future lemon/sex scenes, can you make them a bit longer next time? I enjoy long written lemons, it makes the sex scene more believeable. ^^ Anyway, please keep going and I'm awaiting for the next chapter. ^.^
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Title: Excellent! Reviewed By: Emperor Sun Hai [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 16:23 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: That was excellent! please continue...
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Title: sweet Reviewed By: DIPLOMATIC_FOX [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2006 15:05 CDT Comment/Review: yeah lemons are good thats coolbut if you like i can help btw love ya
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