| "Given The Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 487 ] |
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Title: Excitement
Reviewed By: wolfram01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 00:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa!!!!! I can't help but not pace back and forth from wondering what will happen next?! And your right when you a put a dog and a person they don't like each other, nothing good comes from it.~_~ I can't wait for the next chapter.(Still pacing back and forth on floor which is causing a narrow tunnel.) Keep up the EXCELLENT work.
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Title: !!!!!!!!!!!!! O M G!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: wolfram01 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 00:32 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Oh Man !!! NOW I'M getting worried about what happened to Cassie.I hope nothing bad happens to her. Your doing an awesome job!! I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: I'm Hiei81 On: February 04, 2007 21:57 EST
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Of course i'll prase you... i lovr this story!!! keep writing please!!! the no face thing is kinda freaky... but it's all good!!!
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Reviewed By: pyropixie(notsignedin) On: February 03, 2007 20:07 EST
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8O Oh my!!!!! *Laughs head off* You got my response about right. Now I dont know what to say......*squee!*
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Reviewed By: SupersexyPooka [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 18:29 EST
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omg poor cassie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 13:37 EST
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This chapter was so good. Faceless is so creepy and I feel kinda weird cause I'm worrying so much about what's going to happen to fictional characters. But that's how much I love Cassie and Garra. I also loved in this chapter how it showed again how much Garra loves Cassie. It sucks that your friend is moving, but maybe writing a new chapter will help get your mind off of it.
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 13:09 EST
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Me: YOU THINK YOU'RE SO DAMN CLEVER! OH ARE YOU WRONG! *whistles* Shukaku: *comes running in a fit of snarling* Me: *points to you* SICK HER BOY!!! KICK HER ASS! Shukaku:*bounds after you snarling and growling* Gaara: O.O Remind me not to piss you off. I really don't want to be dog food. Yeah... Next time Send your demon after her. I'm sure it would be a lot more fun for you if you sent Kuro after her. Me: Maybe... But for now... KICK HER FUCKING ASS SHUKAKU! Gaara: ... *sweat drops* You're horrible.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 10:36 EST
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i really like this chap. great job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 09:31 EST
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am in such a good mood.................i got nothing to do but fool around on my imvu page so excuse me
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 09:29 EST
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what the hell is going on with cassie that chap freaked me out and the woman she g2 be ah freak she got no face and the steal meat wateva it is on her face what is she BUT............IT WAS GREAT LOLS
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 08:58 EST
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oh amma read it now i havent lol then i will review
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 08:52 EST
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guess who's back? back back back again gen gen CHEVERNS BACK BACK BACK TELL UR FRENZ (YEAH DATS MA RITE NAME YALL)
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2007 08:51 EST
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yesssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!! another one who hooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: MizzSandman1 On: February 03, 2007 03:03 EST
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OMG NO WAY I MISSED THREE WHOLE FREAKING CHAPTERS!!!!!!!????????!!!!!!??????!!??!!??!?!?!?!?! *kicks self* I thought that the Lemon was the end... *kicks self again* I didn't figure it out until Pooka told me today T_T oh well. I like the last few chappies. :D lol shirtless gaara in teh snow... I'd like to see that... I wouldn't know how cold that would be though... As you can see I over use "..." .... lol. Umm well ...yea. sooo...ummm ......... GAARA IS TEH SANDMAN!!!!!!!! TEH SANDMAN ROX >.
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2007 23:24 EST
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Faceless is going to be so sorry she (it?) messed with Cassie. God, I love Gaara. Can not wait for more. Please, oh PLEASE, write more soon!
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