| "Given The Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 487 ] |
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Reviewed By: koli [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2012 16:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just started reading the fanfic "given the chance" and I must say I haven't laughed and got angry with an oc or a main character like have with your story in a long time.... Amazing I was hopen' that you have written others in a similar style like this and are there anymore Gaara story's you have cooked up or maybe Kakashi or Shikamaru??? Amazing story, you are a great writer, look forward to more work by you. |
Title: ^^
Reviewed By: AmayaxAkatsuki On: August 24, 2009 21:45 EDT
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haha omg that was like the best gaara story ever. Srry i didn't review the other chapters. i like to finish the story before i review so here it is. Good job ^^
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Title: hoi
Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: July 23, 2007 22:47 EDT
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heya new ppl reading this book was awsome she did a splendid job hope u guys check out mine ~A life interupted~ soon to be updated
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Title: Rock Lee
Reviewed By: vegetaslover9 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2007 13:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im not sure if you already answerd this but in chapter 33 you asked if Rock or Lee is Rock Lee's last name. Im pretty sure his last name is Rock because in japenese they say last names first and the americans didnt want to call him Lee Rock. thats what i think, but i think your story is great!
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Reviewed By: wiwuno [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2007 17:07 EDT
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PLEASE write a sequel
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Reviewed By: i'm Hiei81 On: May 09, 2007 02:24 EDT
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good ending to a great story! i love your writing! keep up the good work with everything you do. labor.... ouch, i could only imagin. i bet it hurts like hell.
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Reviewed By: chevy On: May 08, 2007 21:06 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
yeah its me amique and dont laugh my nick name is chevy i got it b4 the chevy vehicles were in so boo!
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Title: cute
Reviewed By: chevy On: May 08, 2007 21:05 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just got 2 idy biddy things to say IT WAS JUST WONDERFUL omg! this is the best fanfic i ever read thanks! great job as i said b4 one trillion cheers for lilpix :-)
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2007 08:54 EDT
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AWW!! This was so awesome! I was actualy planing on asking my English teacher if instead of reading a book if I could do my book report on this story instead. It's so awesome!
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Reviewed By: Wolf22222 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 20:17 EDT
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sob... its over.... D: i'll miss this wonderful fanfiction
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 14:43 EDT
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I just read your One Good Party story, and now I'm thinking forget Kakashi/OC, you've made me love Kakashi and Sakura together. You should definitley write One Extraordinary Child. I really want to read it.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 12:17 EDT
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I loved this chap. AWESOME JOB. I'm gonna go cry now as I try to accept the fact that this story is over. please write more.
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 12:06 EDT
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I just read some other people's comments and I forgot to say that I also think a Neji/OC fic would be so good!
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 12:03 EDT
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I read this last night, but the internet was being stupid so I couldn't review, and now I'm happy cause I finally can. THAT CHAPTER WAS SO GREAT! It did just what an epilogue should, it made me happy and sad at the same time. I really hope you do make some kind of sequel to this or do random one shots like you said. And if you want ideas for new fics, then I think you should do an Itachi/OC fic or a Kakashi/OC fic. You know how some people do short Kakashi fics and make him seem really quick to fall in love (or at least have sex), well I think Kakashi is much deeper than that and a fic where he slowly and cautiously falls in love would be really awesome.
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Reviewed By: theForbidden [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 11:46 EDT
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I-its... Over??? NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *sob* WHY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! No, no, no!!!!!!!!!! It was such a good story *sniffle* though! Why does it have to *voice cracks* END?!?!?!?! Great update!!! I really enjoyed reading your story, so cute and happy... Funny and such... You truly are a fantastic writer....... I am eagerly reading all your other fanfictions aswell, so update those too please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: lilswtheart9811 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 11:12 EDT
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*CRIES HYSTERICALLY IN A DARK CORNER* no it can't be over it just can't I have actually been reading this story since you posted the first chapter. you are the only author in my favorites list! now what am I going to do. I suppose I shall just continue to rock back and forth in utter hysterics! By the way I read the comment below mine and I agree...you should manipulate Neji, he's just always so cold and I think he needs a little girl friend to just warm him up. oh and I'm re reading that school girl story of yours. I really really really really really think you should finish it. I love angst gone lovey dovey. It was the first fanfic I really got into and then you just stopped *tear* but of course it is purely up to you, I do not want to be one of those people who pressure you to update. That's not cool. loong message. Anyways I love your work period. Keep writing, I can't wait till the next fanfic!
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 10:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story. Let me know when you do some one-shots for this fic, I'll check them out.
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Reviewed By: jetset6 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2007 18:49 EDT
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i sudgest that the next character you "manipulate" should be Shino, Lee, Neji, or Shikimaru.
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Title: HI!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: IM SUPERSEXYPOOKA On: April 25, 2007 20:40 EDT
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LIKE OMG I LUV THE STORY WHY WONT U UPDATE...WAIT...IS IT OVER...NOOO...IT CANT BE....AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH...I HAVE NO POINT IN LIFE...SUICIDE IS ONLY OPTION..................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... .................HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA HHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.............................. ........................................................................... ......NO! LOL...ARENT I FUNNY!!!!!!!YES I AM!!!!! YES I AM...NO...IM NOT....BY THE WAY...MIZZ SANDMAN READS IT TO BUT SHE JUST DOSENT COMMENT ON IT ANYMORE........................YEAH I DONT KNOW WHY....LOL .............................................................AHAHAHHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.............. ...................................................NO...LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL...
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Title: HI!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: IM SUPERSEXYPOOKA On: April 25, 2007 20:40 EDT
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LIKE OMG I LUV THE STORY WHY WONT U UPDATE...WAIT...IS IT OVER...NOOO...IT CANT BE....AAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHH...I HAVE NO POINT IN LIFE...SUICIDE IS ONLY OPTION..................................................................... ........................................................................... ........................................................................... .................HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHA HHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.............................. ........................................................................... ......NO! LOL...ARENT I FUNNY!!!!!!!YES I AM!!!!! YES I AM...NO...IM NOT....BY THE WAY...MIZZ SANDMAN READS IT TO BUT SHE JUST DOSENT COMMENT ON IT ANYMORE........................YEAH I DONT KNOW WHY....LOL .............................................................AHAHAHHAHAHAHA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH AHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA.............. ...................................................NO...LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL...
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Reviewed By: theForbidden [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 11:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! God... You are really good with writing!! :) My sister says you are her idol (Damn it, I wanted that role!!).. She is going to try to write in your style.. She is 13... I think.... Anyway, Gaara is nineteen?!?! Awesome!!! I start college next year... I am so excited!!!!
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Reviewed By: theForbidden [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2007 11:37 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!! God... You are really good with writing!! :) My sister says you are her idol (Damn it, I wanted that role!!).. She is going to try to write in your style.. She is 13... I think.... Anyway, Gaara is nineteen?!?! Awesome!!! I start college next year... I am so excited!!!!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2007 19:03 EDT
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I love this chap. awesome job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: April 16, 2007 22:39 EDT
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This story is my favorite Gaara pairing and I can't stop reading it. I'm completely addicted. Please update soon!!
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Reviewed By: i'm Hiei81 On: April 16, 2007 21:27 EDT
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oh my gosh!!!!! i can't believe you're almost done!!! this story was very thought out and i liked the plot!!! please keep writing!!!!!
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Title: YES!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Wolf22222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 12:53 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes!!!! He proposed!!! (sorta kinda) yay!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 12:05 EDT
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THAT WAS GREAT!!!!!!! It was so adorable and awesome and I just don't have all the words for it. I'm so sad that the story is basically over, but I can't wait for the epilogue! It's hard to believe that I started reading this fic when Garra still wanted to kill Cassie. They've come so far.
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Reviewed By: GaaraLuva [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 20:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWSOME!!!!! Yay Gaara-kun!!!!! I love Gaara!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 15:23 EDT
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AWWW!! Gaara asked her to marry him! That's so sweet! I can't wait to read the final chapter!
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 10:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow wow wow wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwoooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwww! it just cant end like this it needs a lil bit more kk :-) u did a great job on this
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