| "Given The Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 487 ] |
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 11, 2006 21:49 EDT
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Ahh, please please tell me you haven't abandoned this story! I love this story so much!
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Title: pixieme
Reviewed By: pyropixie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 18:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You better update soon cause this is amazing!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: ren-hatake [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 21:44 EDT
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i love this story!! so update soon!
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 21:36 EDT
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Oh btw, you did have some grammar/spelling errors, but they didn't really take away from the story since they were such small errors. Not something to fret about.
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 21:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update! You capture Gaara's character so well! Heh, I didn't think Cassie was that bold. It's very entertaining to see her talk to Gaara, especially since he's the Kazekage. And Gaara's reactions are just as amusing =D. Update soon! I'm a big fan of this story now =D.
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Reviewed By: Rosaline [MediaMiner Member] On: September 04, 2006 20:44 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is interesting. I like the idea of this sand nin falling for someone completely different, a person who treats as a normal person.(kind of like Naruto) I like Cass's character. Look forward to the next chap.
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Reviewed By: ClassicalTwist [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2006 21:06 EDT
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I love the storyline so far! Update soon, I'm excited to see what Gaara does. You have a lot of small grammar errors and some spelling errors, but it doesn't bother me too much. You did have a big error though: "...and her brother was gone on a mission it was only she and the dogs had to do so grabbing the dogs' leashes she slipped on your jacket and headed out the door." Great story, keep going!
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