| "Given The Chance" Reviews/Comments [ 487 ] |
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 15:40 EST
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Most definitely worth the wait. I think the lemon was really good, especially for your first one. I love that they love each other and are finally admitting it. They are so cute together and I love both of them and I really want to know what's gonna happen next. So please post a new chappie soon. Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: adriannrod [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 13:33 EST
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Nice Chapter, and Cassie and Gaara are so cute together. Maybe he can convince her to go back to the academy. That would be cool, and then she would be able to protect herself better, leaving Gaara more at ease. Just a suggestion.
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Title: Hiei81
Reviewed By: Hiei81 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 01:07 EST
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Don't worry, for a first lemon you did good. Nice and fluffy.... i just hope Gaara's brother doesn't find them in the morning.
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Reviewed By: BakaHanyouRahvin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2007 00:56 EST
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They make the cutest couple ever. If this had happened earlier in the fic I would have thought Gaara to be OOC, but now it seems natural. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 21:23 EST
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i really liked this chap. great job. please update soon.
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Reviewed By: pilar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 21:17 EST
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I really loved how all the couples paired up! Gaara finally realized his lovs..........made me so happy. I just loved this chapter. It was very nicely done and well you only get better with practice. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!
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Reviewed By: SupersexyPooka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 20:21 EST
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AAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!! it was so cute!!!! it was really good!!! omg omg omg ive been waiting so long thankyou thankyou
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Reviewed By: Mizz_Sandman1 On: January 24, 2007 20:17 EST
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... I feel like such a bad fan. I only read half the lemon! I was like o_o then O_O then I just stopped halfway... I'll go back and read it though once I come back to life. lol drunk Lee! I thought it was really cute too!!!-Aw sorry your teachers are mean. Mine are too.*hugs*-btw im not logged in to MM cuz I forgot my pw... so ya... sry...- did I mention it was cute?!
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Reviewed By: Mizz_Sandman1 On: January 24, 2007 20:11 EST
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...*dies*
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Reviewed By: SupersexyPooka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 19:34 EST
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Thats it. Ive officialy lost my mind. I didn't have that much of a mind before...but know its officially lost!!!!!!! UPDATE SOON OR IM GOING TO GO COMPLETALY INSANE!!!!!!! O.o
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 16:34 EST
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i cant wait.................................so hurry ok ok i can wiat but not alot longer
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Title: u kno
Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 16:32 EST
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omg omg omg omg update update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! or u will just recive a river of tears cum onnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 16:30 EST
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sweet jesus its all i can think of cummmmmmmm onnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn review
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2007 14:40 EST
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I'm going CRAZY! We need a new chapter. But I guess it will be worth the wait. Happy Writing! Happy and quick that is.
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Reviewed By: ash-bash On: January 23, 2007 23:58 EST
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please write more...i love this story
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