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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 10:47 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DAT WASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS DA BBBBBBBBBBBBBBBOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBBB !
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Reviewed By: Valinor's Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 10:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think it's cute Gaara and Cassie are getting together, but you're right. It needs another chapter to be complete. Maybe taking place after Ryuu is born.
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Reviewed By: Yonder On: April 14, 2007 09:24 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyy best story EVAAAAAAAAAA
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Reviewed By: gaara252 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 08:09 EDT
Comment/Review:
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!they're getting married!finally!and no, you can't end the story yet!i love it too much!update soon!
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Reviewed By: AnimeGirl214 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 22:45 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Job. I realy don't want it to end, but now that you're finishing up, do you think you coulod help me with "Legends Academy"? PLEASE?! ~Chelsea
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Title: wait.....
Reviewed By: Im SupersexyPooka!!! On: April 12, 2007 23:06 EDT
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Wait....the very last thing that you said......does that mean your ending the story. nooooooooooo. my life will become pointless...*cries*
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Reviewed By: Wolf22222 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 21:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful!!! absoulutely perfect!!!!! I couldn't stop reading this fanfic!!! *cries* T.T ohhhh they're together again!!!
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Reviewed By: Gaara Freak [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 17:31 EDT
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YAY! This is so sweet! Gaara's got his memories back and knows he's in fact a daddy. I wouldn't have expected his reaction to be any different.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 16:05 EDT
Comment/Review:
So happy!!!! This is my fav chap by far!!!! though I am sad that there'll only be two more chaps. Awesome job. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: Valinor's twilightevenstar On: April 07, 2007 14:11 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter.
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Reviewed By: theForbidden [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 13:07 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!! You are so talented!!! I don't want the story to end!!!!!! This is so cute and sad with the tears and the Gaara and the memories and the BABY!!!!!!!!!!! I am gonna freak near the end but the story is fantastic!!! So cute and heart warming... I can't wait to read the next chapter and I am way excited to see the way you end it!!!!! YOU ARE AWESOME!!!!!!! -Willow
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 10:06 EDT
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some one call da doc quick am kinda having a heart attack GAARA BABY? GAARA? BABY? hes gona have a bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbaaaaaaaaaaaaabbbbbbbbbyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy yes yes yes yesssss!
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Reviewed By: Amique [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 09:57 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOHHHHH MMMMMMMMMMMMMMYYYYYY GOSHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH DAT WAS SO DAMN CUTE AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW WWWWW NEST CHAPTER QUICK! LOL :-)
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 21:07 EDT
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Awwwwwwwwwwwww! I love this chapter so much. I actually cried a little when Garra and Cassie reunited in a way at the end. I loved the whole reaction to Cassie being pregnant, especially Kankuro's. I'm so sad the story's gonna end soon, but I can't wait either.
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Reviewed By: gaara252 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2007 20:54 EDT
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