| "Inheritance" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: W/B!
Reviewed By: Wolfyz1 On: December 05, 2010 00:32 EST
Comment/Review:
Glad to see you've started to write again ^^. I've been away for a while but it's great to see you back. Top notch on the latest chapter I'll be watching this story more often now. Thanks! Wolfyz |
Title: Chapter 8
Reviewed By: Thanks On: October 20, 2010 09:40 EDT
Comment/Review:
I came back to check the site on the off chance that chapter 8 had been re-uploaded after hoping against hope that the author was still around to see my earlier review. I was delighted to find chapter 8 waiting and ready. Thanks very much. :)
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Title: Chap 8
Reviewed By: Chap 8 On: October 15, 2010 04:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright, so this is a super long shot considering how long ago this story was posted, but I remember a long time ago reading this on the original pokegirls website. I distinctly remember there being a chapter 8, but the last time I went back to the pokegirls site it had been wiped and this story hadn't be re-uploaded. If you (the author) would be so kind as to reupload chapter 8 on this site (or the whole story on pokegirls.org) I would be super grateful. I remember chapter 8 being the chapter where Tobias and Keri finally have sex and afterwards he has her hug him without restraints on to show just how much he loves her. (Just a small tidbit to show I'm not just fishing for a new chapter but that I still remember a little about the chapter that's missing.)
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Reviewed By: P0P On: July 13, 2010 17:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the best pieces of fanfiction I've ever read, and it makes me sad that you don't update it. So update it!
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Reviewed By: anime_game_lover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2009 19:03 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
please updade this soon this is one of the best pokegirl fics i have ever read
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Title: Cliffhanger? NOOOO!!!!! lol jk
Reviewed By: ninjabob333 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 13:46 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your stories are awesome. Incredibly well thought out and detailed, the characters are amusing and believable, and the story is very interesting. Keep up the good work and update soon, ok?
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Reviewed By: Shades Mcgee On: April 01, 2008 00:15 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the fic. Well thought out, many different characters, but one thing i would mention, how about going to www.angelfire.xcom/mn3/pokegirls/main (take out the x) so that you can get pokedex entries for each of the pokegirls that Tobias has tamed already, it would give a bit more insight. Overall, good story, hope you update soon so I can see some more tamings :P
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2008 19:03 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! quick update ^^ i hope they all will be this fast, you do, afterall, have a LOT of pokegirls left to screw ^^
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 17:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
glad this fic is still going, thought you might have stopped it, happy to be proven wrong ^^ good chptr i look forward to the next 1
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Reviewed By: Soul of the Phoenix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2007 14:19 EDT
Comment/Review:
The more I learn about pokegirls, the more I'd like to learn. This is a great story. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: LancerLead [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 08:31 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's a great story so far and I'd love to read more. Please don't abandon it!!
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2007 15:29 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
pls update soon enjoying this a lot =)
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Title: To Lazy to log in...
Reviewed By: KeyToby On: October 02, 2006 22:25 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this chapter alot. You're starting to show the complex relationships that have developed inside the house. I'd be very interested to see a complete bio list of all the pokegirls, I think its be interesting to see what kind fo verity Tobias has at his disposal. The format makes it a little hard to read however. Need to work on that man.
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Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2006 09:02 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thouroghly enjoy it! I look forward to Tobias's choices of which pokegirls to bed. I hope he has a few rare ones.
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