| "Rubbing The Lamp" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Title: zomg
Reviewed By: sablegloom [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2007 18:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So good! Please please please update soon, I can't wait to read more!!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 20:21 EDT
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I have read all of the chapters posted. and i have got to say this is a Great story. I love it!!! I'm kind of worried... if Haruhi loves all the guys in some sort of way... WHO IS SHE GOING TO PICK?!?!?! if i were to have a choice i would say Kyouya... but this is YOUR story. Actually this is my first Ouran H.S. Host Club story I have read and I have to say it is great. KEEP ON UPDATING!! need more!!! ^.^
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Reviewed By: irishlily On: April 09, 2007 17:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh yay, a new chapter!!! I cannot tell you how happy I was to see this. :D Kyouya was so sweet in this chapter, too. You do an excellent job with their characterisations. Keep up the great work, and I hope there will be another chapter soon!! :D
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Reviewed By: Melodii On: April 09, 2007 17:39 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I love this fanfic! Its so creativee! Plz, continue...
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 13:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice very nice.
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Reviewed By: Fullmetal2007 On: April 08, 2007 11:59 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story. you portray the characters and their inner thoughts perfectly. i cant wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: Honebar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2007 11:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I know is that this story is beyond amazing! This latest wish had me squirming in jaw dropping amazement. You have the both of them pegged to the tea. I could almost see this story being run as a manga it is that good.
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Reviewed By: CaLucEmber On: April 01, 2007 09:34 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fic is absolutely awesome. Usually I hate reading Ouran stories because most people can't make it work...but you did that and so much more. Almost every word I read I got really excited, and I have to force myself to slow down because I'm so eager to find out what else happens. OMGsh, who is she going to end up with?! I don't know who I want her to be with...but if I had to choose, I DON'T want her to be with Tamaki. I'm not sure, but I just feel that way =/. Anyway! This has been one of the best fanfics I've read in a long, long time. No spelling/grammar mistakes (that I've picked up on anyway, maybe I was more focussed on the content? Doubt it though..) Beautiful style of writing, so smooth and flowing and uber exciting. Creativity and enjoyment factor...*(gigglegigglex100)* It's, OH MAN, you should see my palms, my nails have been digging into them since I got waaaaay too excited. Overall factor? EXCELLANT. BRILLIANT. SUPERB. etc =D
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Reviewed By: lyndsie On: March 31, 2007 13:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol i love this story!!! please write more!
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Reviewed By: lyndsie On: March 23, 2007 18:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god. O.O you must be the f'cking god of ohshc fics. it's an honor to read your work.
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Reviewed By: irishlily On: March 18, 2007 21:36 EDT
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I really hope you haven't abandoned this fic, because I really, really love it!
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Reviewed By: cpd3 On: March 17, 2007 21:59 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. You have created a situation based on Ouran that is believable and very enjoyable to read. There are a few minor grammar mistakes, but they hardly subtract from the overall story. The characters are extremly believable and stick to the personalities given to them by Hatorisan very well. Thank you for creating a very enjoyable piece- please continue it as soon as possible!
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Title: BRAVO!!!!!
Reviewed By: emeraldeyes55 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 12:44 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! it's awesome! I myself am a mori/haruhi fan, because he's just so...so...*girly squeal* I hope you chose him to end the story seeing as there aren't many mori/haruhi fics. my second choice would be huni (never thought I'd say that!) I love how you portrayed huni in this. you make him an adult without taking away his personality or boyish looks and without making it disturbing! btw good idea to make him a bit taller with adult thoughts! honestly if he was still shorter than haruhi and having all these dirty thoughts...it would be...weird...and uncomfortable...but, ANYWAYS! moving on. A good idea-just a suggestion-would be to make separate closing chapters, each with haruhi ending up with one of the guys- so that way everyone's happy! *thinking: but that may take longer* *shrugs* oh well just a suggestion-you don't have to do it... just that everyone has a different guy or two that they want haruhi to end up with. WEELLLL! keep up the awesomest work! *tiny whisper voice: please update!*
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Title: UPDATE!!
Reviewed By: AngelChii49 On: February 26, 2007 20:30 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!you have GOT to update this! its one of the best Ouran stories ive ever read! YOU ROCK!!
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Reviewed By: libertyrjac [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 05:31 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy this fic, probably the most amazing thing is that you've kept the characters in their original character when this setting is outside of their norm. I don't think they'd do this in the anime! This is great, please write more. Oh and responding to your note after Huni's massage. I am a massage therapist and that's a fairly normal response. Of course, that ending is not intended, and I definately do not provide or incourage them. The only thing unprofessional is when working the butt never grab, but of course a novice wouldn't know that. I really liked that scene and found it completley realistic, it was very similar to one of my own experiences. Which makes me laugh all the harder!!
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