| "Rubbing The Lamp" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Reviewed By: flameblessed On: February 23, 2007 22:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm absolutely in love with this fic it has got to be my favorite in a long time! My favorite date so far was the twins first date though that is probably because I am a major Haruhi/twins fan but I really do love this story can't wait to read more!^_^
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Reviewed By: sesshysluver101 On: February 13, 2007 22:05 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it is a really good story and i hope you continue to write more chapters for this story its really good so keep it up. i cant wait for the third wishes.
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Reviewed By: YonderTiger [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2007 22:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahaha! I loved that! I can just imagine that happening too... Haruhi being completely clueless on the matter... classic. Her dad as well, I loved how you wrote his reaction to her story.. and his last line was priceless.. loved it. Until next update...
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Reviewed By: sasuluvssaku4now [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 22:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good fanfic ^_^ but some places lacked detail and can be quite confusing on who your talking about, while others are overwhelming with descriptions and strays away from your real meaning which tends to mess with what your trying to say. I like how you keep Haruhi in character but I'd request for more interaction with Tamaki and Kyouya. I'm looking forward for the rest of the fic
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Title: thanks! plz update soon!
Reviewed By: kitt90 On: February 05, 2007 19:10 EST
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omg nice ^_^ can't wait till ur next update!!! plz update soon! i think that it would be really cute if haruhi did end up with huni ^_~
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Reviewed By: *kairi* On: February 03, 2007 01:51 EST
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omg this is an awesome fanfic! I really like the interaction between Haruhi and all the members of the host club and how they all get a chance with her. I'm really impressed so just keep up the good work :)
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Title: *sigh*
Reviewed By: chosuki [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2007 17:28 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have really enjoyed this fic so far. It kinda pains me, because I'm a big Tamaki/Haruhi fan, but I do like the interaction between her and all the characters. But geez! If only she had a little more chemistry with Tamaki than Huni! Then I'd feel better about the whole thing. But yes, I can totally see why he didn't kiss her, with her always shrugging and pushing him away and stuff...GAH! But don't get me wrong. It's a really good story, and definitely an original idea. Every fangirl's dream right? lol *sigh* I shudder to think of the twin's second wish, and I do look forward to Kyoya's and Mori's, but probably more Kyoya's though. Her dreams are a stroke of genius, by the way. Letting her subconscious inner "girl" come to life, trying to give her hints as to what she really wants. I really am enjoying this and hope you continue to the end. PLEASE continue and finish it out! *sigh* If only there was a way she could be happy with all of them. Is it possible to be IN love with 6 guys at the same time? They make it so difficult to choose! In any case, it's a well written, original, creative and enjoyable work of fanfiction! Good luck on the updates(cuz I'm always checking, just in case) and thanks for reading all my ramblings. I look forward to the coming chapters. ;) ~chosuki
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Kawii-Love [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 06:45 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow her dad is so weird. she practicly said it was her. well please update soon =)
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Reviewed By: TheDemonQueen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 01:10 EST
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OMG!!! That was so funny! I can't believe... Huni... I will never be able to look at him the same again. And Haruhi... she is so naive! Well I hope you update again soon! I can't wait to see the next wish! Until next time, ja ne!
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Title: Choose Mori
Reviewed By: akuryo [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2007 00:25 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very cool story I really hope you choose Mori for the fan one as there aren't enough MoriXHaruhi Fics about, at least not good ones... Really enjoy reading your fic, and hop eyou update soon! Akuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 13:13 EST
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I've been enjoying this all along. It's so hard to choose; they are all such nice boys. Except Kaoru and Hikaru who have their own charms. I especially liked Huni's "It was better than cake." thought.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 02:01 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL well done. well done. *S*
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Reviewed By: RyousGirl567 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 20:15 EST
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*nods* Yes, yes, this is most definitely an excellent story. Great conventions btw. ^^;;; I just can't wait for the story to "advance". ^_~ It's an interesting concept and a most original story line. Keep up the great work! Happy writings! ^_^ ~Tori-chan~
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Reviewed By: LadyLark [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2007 16:31 EST
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This is an interesting story that I am glad I stumbled into. I like how you aren't taking the easy way out with things and not going straight for the smut. I like how you stay true to the characters although I think that Haruhi is a little off - probably because of the circumstances that she is in. I especially love your scene with the Twins and Mori. I look forward to seeing the next part.
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Reviewed By: inuyashagirl5 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2007 21:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! This story is super cute! I love it so much! Please update soon I want to read more!!
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