| "Rubbing The Lamp" Reviews/Comments [ 234 ] |
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Reviewed By: IncognitoOtaku On: November 18, 2007 17:06 EST
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Wow! What a huge update! I'm a bit disappointed she ended up picking Kyouya...I really thought Mori was going to win. BUT I think Kyouya works in this case and I thought you did a good job of "humanizing" him by emphasizing his vulnerabilities and all. I'll be a little sad when this wraps up since I've been following since the beginning. Great story though!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 23:17 EST
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YYYYAAAAYYYYY I got my wish Kyoya and Haruhi are together... I love the pairing. I have got to say when I saw soo many updates I thought I was dreaning.... BUT i love the way that Kyoya and Haruhi get together....LOVED IT
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Reviewed By: fightingpheonix36 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2007 16:30 EST
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Amazing, completely and utterly amazing. I cannot tell you how happy I was when I randomly checked to see if there was a new chapter and saw that there were SEVEN new chapters since the last time I had checked. I love how you made everything play out, Haruhi and Kyouya are such a great couple, and having Kyouya all freaked out and not eating and everything was great. It was pretty OOC, but that's what I loved about it. I just hope that isn't the last chapter, I want at least a little more!
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Reviewed By: Sybil On: November 16, 2007 21:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yah! I was actually kind of annoyed at you when you had Kouya freak out like that when the other guys wanted out of the deal - it just seemed so unlike him to lose control. But you explained it so well that I can't be mad - Kouya/Haruhi is my favorite combo. I was a little surprised that you didn't go with Mori as that was the direction I saw you going in, but it was just so well written and a great twist. To see Kouya crack under the pressure of the heart was so perfect. I hope to see more in this tale and future new pieces!
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Reviewed By: chaoticdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 13:02 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finding the new chapter alerts in my email was really exciting. Yay! She picked someone! And she doesn't hate anyone!
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Reviewed By: Maloy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 04:49 EST
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*happy dancing* Yesssss! ha-ha! I'm so happy that you made this massive update! You're great! And Kyouya is the one I predicted would 'win'. Very nice) I can't wait for you to update! I hope Kyoya is back to his old self soon))
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Reviewed By: Literati77 On: November 16, 2007 01:29 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so fantastically well-written. I love how the story turned out. I also can't wait to see what the others' reactions will be. Thanks for updating!
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Title: Tonight's Update Has Been Amazing
Reviewed By: Sej On: November 16, 2007 01:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
;_; I love HaruhixKyouya. I love that you put so much into this all at once. And I love where you've taken this. They really are perfect for each other, and this was worth staying up late to read. I hope you follow up with wonderful lemons. God knows we've all been waiting long enough.
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Reviewed By: theaprilbaby [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 01:01 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So unbelievably sweet. Haha. Are you going to update anymore or are you going to just end it here? I think it's fine if it ends here because it's nice, but personally I want more cute-ness. xD Lol.
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Reviewed By: randyfan On: November 14, 2007 19:15 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its wonderful, please give me more!
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Reviewed By: Literati77 On: November 14, 2007 19:13 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story. Usually when it comes to a HaruhixHostClub pairing, the storyline and the characters' feelings kinda takes a dive while the writer only focuses on Haruhi making out or whatever with the other host club members. But honestly, this story has a great plot and I love how everyone stays pretty much in character. So, please update! Because I really want to know what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Rin_chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 22:45 EST
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Nononononono update pleaseee!!! The suspense! It's killing me!!!!!!
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Title: OMFG
Reviewed By: ddddEEEEEEEE On: November 01, 2007 17:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THE ABSOLUTE BEST!!!!!!! UPDATE RIGHT NOW AS SOON AS YOU READ THIS I DONT CARE IF IT IS NOT COMPLETE JUST UPDATE BECAUSE I LIVE FOR THIS STORY!!!!!!! IT IS LIKE MY AIR AND WITHOUT IT I WILL DIE!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS YOUR FAULT IF I DIE DO U HEAR ME YOUR FAULT!!!!!!!!!!!! *GASPING* I CANT BREATHE GIVE ME AIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: new one On: October 24, 2007 22:08 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hoooo shiiiiit!!! Wow. Just wow. The entire time they were talking and I knew that Haruhi heard every word, made me feel the betrayal as much as she did. It was very heart breaking. I also LOVED how you described Kyoya. From going angry and desperate from his plan going awry, and then guilty and horrified when he saw Haruhi. God, I can't WAIT to see how this turns out.
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Reviewed By: z On: October 23, 2007 16:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOOO! Mori!! he finally put his moves on! best chapter YET!
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