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| "Knights of the Realms" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] | Reviewed By: cyzay [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 13:53 CDT
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I forgot to mention - the action scenes were absolutely awesome! You wrote them amazingly well - I wish I had that type of skill. It's a lot easier to envision great action scenes, than to actually put them into words "pen-to-paper", so to speak.
| Reviewed By: cyzay [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2009 13:49 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I have to first say - as i'm a huge DMC fan - you captured Dante awesomely - easily the favorite character and a great source of comic relief - Dante style of course! Now then, this story is very interesting, how you move with the concept is pretty interesting. At times it can be a little confusing, and there are spots where I was a little lost (the drow ranger mostly); some aspects called for a little more descriptions; the little things that can be left out when writing for one fanfiction world, the things that don't call for much explanation since everyone already knows it, can't always be left out for cross overs, as not all the readers may be of the same level of familiarity with the other series involved. There were things like this: Clouds comment about "them always having silver hair" which was really funny if you know the FF7 world, but works still even if you don't, since it was played out really well. But, some people may not know what Mythrill, is, or know what a drow ranger is, (I know Mythrill, but not what a drow ranger is) for example, so the importance of that, might be lost on some. Also, the scene where the ranger and Link meet for the first time, and the thing about the swords was a little on the confusing side... such things as this would call for a little more padding in descriptions - unless I missed something while reading it (it was rather late at night). Despite being occasionally lost, it's a really engaging story; I knew it wasn't finished when I found it, but it was intriguing, so I had to check it out. I do hope to see it finished one day, it'd be a shame if it wasn't.
| Reviewed By: servant of K-sama On: November 07, 2008 01:47 CST
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Actualy, the Forgotten Realms setting is connevted to the Spelljamer setting, and there are Tinker Gnomes on Aber-Toril so people have gone to stars in that world.
| Title: Huh?
Reviewed By: Ghostley On: July 10, 2007 10:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Is... this a parody? Cause.... yeah... It must be a parody lol. Nice dude very funny.
| Title: Nice
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2007 23:31 CDT
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More updates. I liked the latest chapter since the title fit in well with the story. Please updates as soon as you can.
| Title: my title?
Reviewed By: FunkeeMunkiDaJunkee On: April 12, 2007 14:17 CDT
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ha! nice touch. very interesting way to tie everything in together. i was goddamn speechless. keep at it. i'm looking forward to more chapters.
| Reviewed By: amalita On: February 06, 2007 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really enjoyed the story so far. the first two chapters, short as the were, really pulled me in. as someone who only has the vaguest knowledge of the characters it was still easy to follow the plot. so far i have to say that dante is my favorite. almost every time he opened his mouth i had to laugh. can't wait till the next chapters where i hope to see all the boys finally meet. keep up the amazing work!
| Title: Been awhile
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2006 20:13 CST
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Still waiting on updates and I was wrong. It was the Black Mages who did Otherworld.
| Title: Decent
Reviewed By: Psychlone [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
A Very decent story, bravo. Bravo. A diamond in the rough, few, if any spelling or grammitcal mistakes, the characters remain in character with little break away. I commend this story, its a very good one. However, your descriptions, even though we know these people, or most of them, some description would be nice, just to make it more, customary. Other than the lack of detail, you can feel the smooth flow of the plot and the hardly noticable transitions. Bravo, again. And, between you and me, its finally nice to see a decent story involving the Prince Of Persia. I look forward to reading the next chapters.
| Title: Pretty cool
Reviewed By: Titan of Twilight [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 02:27 CST
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I really like this story, and I eagerly await any and all updates.
| Title: Info
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 20:24 CDT
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Hello again. I am a little confused at some of the names and I notice not all are familiar. I would appreciate it if I was filled in on who they are.
| Title: Not bad
Reviewed By: FFXInuyasha1 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 16:14 CDT
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I really like this story and I have to say that the most interesting part was the summary though but even that was good. Keep it up and you have my attention
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