| "Tsunade's Heir" Reviews/Comments [ 25 ] |
Title: I LUV IT
Reviewed By: naruharemlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2009 14:55 CDT
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ITS GREEEAAAAT
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Title: great job
Reviewed By: Shilohmc33 On: April 28, 2008 20:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say I read all the chapters and I hope you continue them. They make up for what naruto lacks. Closer bonds then I saved you now were friends. I can't say how much it makes me smile that naruto gets a mother in this story. great job keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Bay Area Kid On: January 22, 2008 19:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I rated the way i did because your story is really inresting. Its my favorite fanfic. I like how you kept all the characters names the from the actual Naruto manga. I hpoem you keep writing. bye
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 10, 2008 08:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
thought that you might have given up in this fic, glad i was wrong. good luck at university
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Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2007 23:00 CDT
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Thanks for continuing...I like how you pick up on all of the important themes in Naruto like the Gaara/Naruto childhood issue and bring a upgrade to them (flashback & Naruto's resolve). After seeing the Gaara arch on regular and Shippuden I can really see how much insight you have when it comes to characterizations-with words you bring out the emotions and thoughts that the show presented and really push them to the next level. I can't even express how deep yet enjoyable your story gets other than to say that when I forgot the title, I spent months trying to find this story again. Please don't pay any mind to the rude reviewers. I hate that there are some who don't appreciate that this is something that you chose to share, not a duty, and I personally would love to see Naruto reach 13. It seems like you set the story up to loop back to a place where Naruto will see Hinata, Sakura,Ino, Tenten again and I look forward to seeing it.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2007 00:46 CDT
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The story is really good BUT how comes it takes you months to update hell I hate to say it since you don`t feel like updating often hell I totally forgot about your story until I saw it was update abd I was like Oh My God it has finally been updated oh well please update soon but I doubt that will happen so I cann`t wait months and months later to see and update
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Reviewed By: RoseOfSand On: August 15, 2007 18:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE update soon I really really love this fan fiction. So like I said please update!
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 03:53 CDT
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I love the story I love how Naruto acts with everybody mainly with Tsunade and Jiraiya and I would love to read more SO COME ON AND UPDATE YOUR STORY AND NOT UPDATE IT ONCE EVERY COUPLE OF MONTHS FOR CRYING OUT LOUD JUST UPDATE IT MORE OFTEN please it is a really really good story so please update the story
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Title: Happy to find Quality and Good reading
Reviewed By: Lil_lo [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2007 11:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll probably go back and give individual reviews on the chapters, but as a whole the story was great. I felt like I was getting the spirit of the show, only much more profound as Naruto worked his way through what life presented him with. While I loved every scene, the part that most touched me was the scene with the bird and the following scenes events in the village. It was so uplifting seeing Naruto get inspired like that only to face circumstances that almost seemed to kill his childhood in a sense. I can't wait for more chapters.
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Title: AWESOME!
Reviewed By: yadi_iday On: April 19, 2007 17:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I AM SO IN LOVE WITH YOU! I MEAN THIS STORY! STORY! WELL... THE BOTH OF YOU! YOU FOR MAKING THIS STORY AND THE STORY FOR BEING SO DAMN GOOD! UPDATE DAMMIT! AND KEEP IT UP! UR ALMIGHTY WITH THE PEN.... ERM, THE KEYBOARD!
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Reviewed By: Zara On: March 18, 2007 13:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is one of the best stories i have read plz write some more.
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Reviewed By: aman On: March 07, 2007 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you show Naruto grow as a ninja with potential, but not making him seem like an expert at stealth or assination. I also like the way you keep Naruto's personality relatively the same. In your next chapter I think that you should have naruto learn some basic taijutsu, in-order to take Tsunade's extra strength to a new height. Beside's that I look forward to upcoming chapter's with Naruto facing different dilemna's with his future (Should he become somewhat of a male version of Tsunade or should he sometime during the story begin to show trait's of other ninja, such as Jiraiya or the Fourth).
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 14:31 CST
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Come on and updae I really like this story will they go back to Konoha so Naruto can become a genin or will he become a genin in a different village plese update soon I just ope you don`t decide to only update once every other month if thatis so that just blows SO COME ON AND UPDATE THE STORY PLEASE
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 19:56 CST
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Damn, I didn't review earlier? Suck. Okay, the story is awesome (Naruto with Medical and full chakra control knowledge, all before becoming a Genin? That is awesome.) Not only that, but Shizune isn't the super ultimate successor (though I would like her to be, though she can't use the super-strength, which blows). Neh, it is good, as all things are, and we all like more naruto. So please, show us more insanity. And hey, maybe even a Gaara who gets to have fun when Naruto is around. THat'd be sweet, instead of saddening.
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 17:29 CST
Comment/Review:
That was pretty good ok please update I just hope that you will update more often
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 07:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome cant w8 4 next chapter =)
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 23:50 CST
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I finally finished reading your story I really really lke this story please please PLEASE update soon I cann`t wait to see what happens next and PLEASE don`t be like some authors out there that start a story but never updates so its been well over a month since you last updated so come on an update the story PLEASE
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Reviewed By: spiritwolf30 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2006 00:02 CST
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I was wondering why did you change Naruto`s last name the last name you changed it to sounds stupid I guessthats my only complaint so far what I read
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Title: AAHAHAHAHAAAA!!!!
Reviewed By: shinji_the_good_sharer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 30, 2006 17:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROFLMAO!!!! NICE JOB!!!! I need to see more of this soon so i'll be putting this on my favorites list!!!
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Reviewed By: Hybrid_FireLightning Creature [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2006 17:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hey, hope you don't mind if I use your omake idea for one of my stories.
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Title: great
Reviewed By: Colt 45 On: October 17, 2006 23:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lol idiot ero-uncle classic man that was a great chapter keep it up man this story is the shit
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Title: Scenes
Reviewed By: Hybrid_FireLightning Creature [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 18:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great! My favorite scene in the third chaper (technically chapter 7) was the sancastle scenes. Please continue as soon as possible...I like so many others in this world (I think) hate to wait.
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Reviewed By: jarediz13 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 29, 2006 07:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like your story please continue.
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Reviewed By: Colt 45 On: September 27, 2006 21:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man this story is the shit keep er up im looking forward to the next chapter
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Title: Cool
Reviewed By: Hybrid_FireLightning Creature [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2006 18:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is great please write some more soon!!!
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