| "Through the Furnace, Unshrinking" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: kourutusunie (not logged in) On: November 30, 2006 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OK. WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!! AND SOON!!! That is my only request. I loved this scene between Quatre and Trowa. Perfecto! MORE MORE MORE!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Br On: November 28, 2006 21:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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This is a great story. I am a bit confused why Quatre just doesn't go public to a reporter or TV station that he's the missing heir and then tell what his sisters did. Seems rather far fetched that he wouldn't be noticed at all, plus it would be a way to get back at his family and get money needed to help the other 4 get out of their lives. It would also be nice if you would list your pairings somewhere. I'm personally a 1x2x1, though I wouldn't mind 1x2x5x2x1. It's only good writing etiquitte and respect for GW fans if you note your pairings so that those who are particular in what pairings they like won't be disappointed.
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Reviewed By: lolippop On: November 28, 2006 09:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like to hear more about quatre is my fave character...more angst to him!!!!! and lemon to him and trowaaaaaa lovely story
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 08:43 CST
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Alright! Some blood, some violence, and the promise of retribution! Damn this fic just keeps getting better and better! Can't wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Br On: November 07, 2006 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Awe, it feels like Duo is cheating on poor Heero with him and Wufei trying to be all secretive, and after all Heero's done for him to keep him safe. *sniff sniff* Hope to see another update soon.
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: November 06, 2006 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I came back and read some more. That was really something. Wufei was excellent you know how to write him.
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Reviewed By: jukebox_csi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2006 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very well done so far and quite enjoyable. My heart hurts for the boys and all the betrayals they face, but also maintains hope they will get out from under and find retribution. It would be great to see Quatre's sisters fall for what they did while he inherits everything. It would be great to see Heero kill Cecile, but in a way where she has a few minutes to realize he's killed her for all that she's done. It would be great to see Wufei wipe the smirk off Ralph's face for what that twisted man did. And it would really be awesome to see a 1x5x2 (or variations thereof), as well as 3x4 and all the guys living together as a family when it's over. I look forward to seeing where you do take the story and how it turns out.
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Reviewed By: kourutusunie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay!!! I've found another story to add to my favorites!!!! Update soon! i wanna know what develops between Quatre and Tro...and then what is going on in Wu's head. :)
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Reviewed By: kanjil On: October 30, 2006 03:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story. The writing is fluent, the setting is original and the characters are very well described, their emotions are revealed but not in a sentimental way. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Serena1985 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2006 11:33 CDT
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Love the fic. I wonder what will happen between Wufei and Duo but then I also wonder what will happen between Heero and Duo. Lol so many possibilities, can't wait to see what happens. Anyway can't wait for the update!
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Reviewed By: im_alive On: October 18, 2006 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor baby Wufei. What's going to happen to him. I must admit I'm skipping to Wufei sections, I adore that boy too much. I'm not very fond of the 1x2 pairing but your Wufei begs to be read.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: pyrzm [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 13:32 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really coming along well. you capture the emotions of the characters beautifully, especially in this chapter with Wu. Being a Heero fan, I really want to see what happens between him and Duo now.
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Reviewed By: duoqueen02 On: October 13, 2006 19:10 CDT
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i like the story so far! please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Endel On: October 02, 2006 16:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well I really think this is great so far! The characters all seem very IC without being terribly cliched and I like that you made out in this last chapter that the guys aren't always pouring their innermost feelinhgs out to each other. This is realistic and brilliantly written, I especially like the way you've portrayed Quatre and Heero. Please update soon!
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Title: Good start
Reviewed By: VulpesVelox On: September 24, 2006 20:11 CDT
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Nice job setting up the characters and environment. I liked the dark/ominous tone overall, and your succinct way with words. Please continue' aquononascendet A T yahoo.com
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