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Reviewed By: blondefox910 On: January 26, 2008 22:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story it was like i was there it was so hto in some parts of the the story keep on writing and i want to know what happen to iunyasha and kagom. Do they tell them what happen or do they keep it to them self. I am looking to hear some more stories like this one and i hope ypu write more so i can read it ok.
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Reviewed By: rinsama---15 On: August 15, 2007 11:50 CDT
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AWWWWWWWEEESSSSSSOMMMEEEEEEE!!!!!! I liked this one excluding Shippo. I really hate his character. Good work!!
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2007 01:37 CST
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Your story has won an award from the Feudal Association for the January 2007 term! Your award can be found in the following location for the period of one month. http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/january2007awards/Best-Lemon-2nd .jpg After that, only first place banners will be available for download, as they are on perminant display, here: http://www.cadkitten.com/feudalassociation/Awards_Jan2007/Awards.php The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. We just finished our fifth term in existence! Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! Please note that each term we also look for volunteer artists to do the awards, like the one that you are receiving today, and we'd be delighted if you want to help out in that manner (or know someone who does). If you happen to be interested, please send the owner an email at inuyashasbytch@gmail.com stating your interest in helping draw the awards for the next term. ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: Dark Avenger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2006 15:04 CST
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Your story has been nominated at the Feudal Association! The Feudal Association is a group that presents awards to fanfiction and fanart in the InuYasha Fandom several times a year. Our official website can be found here - http://feudalassociation.cadkitten.com/ And our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs can be found here - http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ Voting continues through January 19th-20th, 2006. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Daimyo Owner of the Feudal Association
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Reviewed By: velvetarms77 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 15:56 CST
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Ooh that was really hot! I liked how you entwined the story in with the actual happenings in the anime/manga. Well done! ^^
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Title: woot
Reviewed By: quirkyslayer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2006 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah if only Kagome and Inuyasha understood each other that much in the manga. I like how your behind the scenes look at the canon events relieves the tension between the characters. And ZOMG the porn. YAY for good porn. Great job, chica!
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Reviewed By: Lexbubble [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 14:36 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry the review is late. I had been meaning to get it up sooner. Now my Seconding of ur fic is up before the actual review. It was a very sweet story and I absolutely loved it. I keep saying that I have to read more of ur work since I hear so much about how amazing a fanfic writer u are and this one-shot definitely proves that. I have read a the other one-shots as well and would love to read ur continuing story when I get a chance. I have this weird thing about reading fics while I'm writing one...my first actually. I don't want anyone to think I'm stealing their ideas and I don't wanna get some good ideas and want them in my story when they didn't come from me. Besides, reading fics that are just way awesome sometimes kind of makes me feel like maybe my story is a waste of time...sad but true. I promise though once I'm fininsh with my story that I will definitely read all of ur stories because ur work is truly amazing and I hope that this fic wins for best one-shot. Good luck^.^ Lexi AKA Bubble-chan~_^ Oh and I'm sure that ur other fic that was nominated deserves it as well so good luck on that one too.
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Reviewed By: DYquem [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2006 21:53 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really excellent, and just like them to each have second thoughts based on their insecurities of thinking the OTHER one had second thoughts
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Reviewed By: Jester08 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was adorable! So cute.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2006 00:05 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwwww.
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Title: Nasty but nice
Reviewed By: Charmander [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2006 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good keep up the good work. I like how you take a episode and make it your own. It's good and well I'm sure you are never tired of hearing how good you are.
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Reviewed By: Anime Lady PIMP [MediaMiner Member] On: September 28, 2006 08:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wait till they find out they changed along time ago.
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Title: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 21:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And here we go on the second part of the review... I love reviews! They let me tell my Literary Goddesses and God just how much I adore them and admire their writings!! Okay... Bravo!! Bravissimo!! And several big Woots!!! That little speech Inuyasha told Kagome while she was crying was all Inuyasha and straight from his heart. He told Kagome that he felt saddened by Kikyou's "death" and why he tried to search for her. That is one thing Kagome is incapable of understanding at all. The drive, the need, the almost obession at having a body of a loved one. It is needed for closure, for saying goodbye. I wonder if her mother would ever explain that to her.. maybe if she watched something on the news or witness something in the fuedal era of a similiar situation. Then she might understand. but right now... she can't even emphasize with Inuyasha in his grief. ( that is a flaw I have guessed in Kagome.) But the why you ahve written this is so touching and bittersweet. Inuyasha being the one to comfort Kagome. Inuyasha doesn't even know what it was he made the mistake in. That made me cry.. when Inuyasha told Kagome she showed him he has a place to belong and that is by her side. I loved the way you written the Angst the seemingly lose of what was so new. Ouch.. they were both thinking the other was regretting. shakes head... those two are so complex and so dense at the same time. If only they ahd talked before this incident! Again!! My compliments to you for the exquiste way you have written this. Maintaining the tension... building it slowly.. letting us see into the anguished minds of our two favourite and beloved characters.. turly marks of a very skilled craftsman! They both misunderstood each other. and this you executed off perfectly!! Ow! She cracked Inuyasha in the nose... The mood breaker!! lol!! Again.. those two really need to communicate and listen to each other. I loved how Kagome theorized what would happen if the others found out! Urgh! Kagome stuck only with Shippou.. I think Kagome in the end would take up Shippou bonking ever now and then. I loved how Inuyasha brought up the vaild point of not being openly affectionate with each other in or around other villages. Kagome would get harmed because of the ignorance from the people. And so would Inuyasha. I'm glad that Kagome understaood that as well. Kudos!! Bravo!!! Play it by ear.. That was a cute phrase for Kagome to use! I could picture his ears twitching with this. I loved how Kagome assured Inuyasha they will let the others know when they needed to know only after the two of them are ready to let them know. So very kagome-ish! Now Inuyasha can re-assure Kagome the best way he is able to through his actions, his touch! I really love how you build up to the love scenes!! They are always so sweet and tender and romantic. What can I say... I love how frustrated Inuyasha get when he is confounded by that evil of evils The Bra! Now it's Kagome turn to reassure Inuyasha that her words uttered in self loathing were not true. I love it!! How Inuyasha makes Kagome the Luckiest Girl around!! Squeals!! I was so happy when she went for the doggie style for Inuyasha. I love that! Huggles!! I also really love it when Inuyasha's youkai comes out. I don't think I could ever get enough of that!! Can soak up more!! Thank you so much for this! Do you think Inuyasha would ever merge a certain swear word or more into Kagome's name into a scream when he climaxes? The ending was the perfect ending for this one shot!! Tender, sweet and truthful and everyone understanding and accepting. Thank you, Literary Goddess, so much for writing this and for sharing!! This and You Totally Rocks!!! Please keep up the most excellent work!! Can't wait to see more!!
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Title: Inu Hanyou Nikkie NSI
Reviewed By: Inu Hanyou Nikkie [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a sweet and wonderful birthday Gift!fic this is!! The song in my head as I read this is from 'Starlight Express' (by Andrew Llyod Webber) called 'Only You'. It seems to fit I think. Thank you so much for writing me a one shot Literary Goddess! Blushes!! Woot!! Whoot!! Awesome!! Okay.. review time! I loved how the beginning started! So tense and Angsty!! I loved how you captured Inuyasha's awe and child like wonder at Kagome joining with him. Allowing him into her body. "he understood that he truly belonged with her, and that she wanted him there." that sumed it up so beautifully and poetically. Very touching! Very sweet! I congratulate you on Inuyasha adopting Kagome phrase for what it is that they do. Make love. He may not even known there was a word for it before he meet Kagome. They fell out of bed?? smirks.. what were they doing to fall out of bed? Kagome really wanted to show her obession of Inuyasha's body didn't she!! Go get him Kagome! I loved how Inuyasha pleasures her! I chuckled at the Festival reminder!! I was thinking about Inuyasha high-tailing it out of there when he scented the curry.. Curry the one thing that will make Inuyasha run away from something without even a hint of a fight or protest... (Don't like Naraku know about this..) And with the Play.. I can see Inuyasha on the stage and doing his thumbs up gesture. (addition from Icons... the cackle) giggles!! So I had inserted my own humourous mind into the scene! And the part about destroying the Gym.. also so funny!! lol!! Thank you.. It was a sweet chuckle! lol Demon hunting turns Inuyasha on and into a Kagome Ravishing beast.. not that she minded at all.. I think she approved of it. How did he know about the unused classroom? ... hmm.. from the old musty scent of disuse? perhaps but it was lucky for Kagome! Inuyasha he does try hard with his actions to tell Kagome... but she can so very dense at times and over analyizing things. bangs head on desk... those two sooo need to get some communication skills and use them!! Kikyou re-appeared and Kagome self worth and insecurities come crashing in like a tsunami. And Poor Inuyasha... blissfully dense at times and clueless... get the brunt of it. And Kagome telling Inuyasha she hated him was the most immature and mean spirited thing for her to do to him. Wanted to smack Kagome up side the head with a rolled up paper. But with this you have maintained the perfect balance of the characters personalities, keeping them true to form! Kudos!! I commend you!! That is a really awesome job!! Thank you!! Will Kagome realize her mistake and apologize for her awful behaviour? And Inuyash approaching the subject the usually way he knows how... Nice, very nice how you captured Sango, Shippou and Miroku. That is Awesome work!! You certainly have the way with writing and masterfully blending a masterpiece from words that draws the reader into the story allows them to be a part of the characters as the scenes are played out! I love that in stories!! It keeps me coming back again, again and again!! Kudos!! Bravo! Bravo!! Bravissimo!!! Ouch.. So Inuyasha heard every word they were saying about him. I love your stories and one shots!! They are just what the soul calls out for!! I wonder what insecurites in KAgome has made her jump to wrong conclusions again? At least where they are now Kagome can't run off to her time. At least Miroku was the voice of reason in that little scene. Poor Inuyasha Kagome is giving him the cold shoulder act. The Angst is soo thick you can cut it!!! Shivers in anticipation!! What an awesome why you have at showing off Inuyasha's intelligence. HE knew that even though he never had expericence or skill using words or could talk like that slick tongued monk, he needed to say teh words to Kagome that she needed this as much as she needed him. It must be one of the rare times I have seen Inuyasha comforting Kagome while she cries without him getting all freaked out and panicky.
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Title: It's another hit!
Reviewed By: Nikkie23534 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 26, 2006 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great story from a great writer! I just love to read your fanfics! You are one of my favorites!~B reading U!
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