Title: Good Job!
Reviewed By: JPandS [MediaMiner Member] On: October 08, 2006 19:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very well written one-shot of the feelings that would arise at the actual arrival of Crystal Tokyo. I was very impressed and thought that it was cool that someone actually went in depth with the feeling behind the sailor scout, which in this case was mainly Sailor Jupiter who happens to be my fav, and depicted all of the thoughts and actions that they would've/could've made when that situation actually came. It really made me think and in a sense makes you more sympathetic to all of the scouts but what I liked most was how you brought the idea that Crystal Tokyo wasn't exactly a dream of Serena's specifically it was more of a duty for her as well. You did well in justifying Jupiter's resolve to leave and did an AWESOME job in getting her to think about the others and how they might have felt. I especially liked how you brought more depth to Darien's character instead of leaving him as more of a flat one. Overall, Good job with this, I really enjoyed it! Well that's all for now, sorry if my review turned out to be longer than your story...but anyways i think it was great and your writing style is awesome. Keep up the good work!
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