"Against All Odds" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] | Title: Very, very, very nice Reviewed By: Kieron [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2010 07:25 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Before I actually start...am I really the only one that's reviewed this while/after reading it?!?!?!? Whatever, let them go on in dismay without having read a great story. I absolutely loved this, even though I am a Rei/Usagi fan at heart, it warms me to read a well-written Usagi/Mamoru. Most of the time, if it is a U/M fanfiction, the story is either short, or the people just don't seem real. You put great emotion into your characters, not only telling us, but showing us in great detail how the characters felt. How pissed Usagi was when she found out that Mars and Jupiter, who, as I notice, you never gave personal names for, tourtured Endymion before sending him to Earth. You didn't really cover why Venus was in jail when the attack happened...I can only assume that's because she disobeyed her queen's orders to not allow Usagi out of her sight. The epologue was a little unusual, but still, your story was great, and in my opinion, just like any Usagi/Rei fan can't call themselves that until they've read Absence(I very, very powerful Usa/Rei fic), I daresay that no one can call themselves an Usagi(Serenity)/Mamoru(Endymion) fan without reading this story. Thank you for this wonderful work of literature, I will never forget it. Kuronosa Kunsai
| Reviewed By: Kieron [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2010 01:24 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: At this point in time, I can make a conjecture that Endou(Endymion Sr.) is the true heir to the throne of Earth and its powers. However, he does not know that...
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