| "Shadow Leaf Dance" Reviews/Comments [ 42 ] |
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Reviewed By: DA Anon On: October 16, 2023 20:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it's very weird to find a fic that an acquaintance in middle
school claimed he had written and let me read in printed out in 40+
page form. I'm genuinely not sure if he just found it and claimed
it or if he was the author, but cool reading a lemon from way back
when that would make fandom babies today whine about. If you are
the guy, hope you are doing well.
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Reviewed By: Akuma-Heika On: September 15, 2013 10:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The style of writing I cannot accurately measure with one read. FOr me that is based on how often you can reread something. If it keeps pulling you in and you have read it half a dozen times it is good. bumping lightly against her cervix. With how the female body works I am doubtful he would reach her cervix at shorter than 5 inches. Her body is no longer that of a child and thus it can be hypothesized that it would react as a woman. Some of their mixed juices spilled out around his cock, as it filled the small girl so completely there was almost no space left for his seed to go. If he is reaching her cervix than he is most likely coming into it and I doubt he could overfill her womb. Only saw this review button at the end so I know I missed some things, but I really hope you continue this! Your team 9 (what happened to Gai) is usually one of the modified Team 9 scenario's (best shown in the fic Team 8 which got an update after a few years finally!) but Anko as the sensei is new. |
Reviewed By: thedigger On: February 23, 2011 18:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was quite the ride! What makes this fic so great isn't just the great sense of humor, the fine mix of sensual and smut, or how creative and yet true to the actual series this is, but how great of an inspiration it is. Seriously, I've gotten a great load of inspiration from this for my series, 'Nudist?' on fanfiction.net, and Anko's character was just such a treat. I also admire how much you took your time with this. Most people are too afraid they'll hit the character limit and rush the story in places, but for this, the only dissapointment I feel is the fact that it ended. XD |
Title: Great in addition too...
Reviewed By: NuitTombee On: April 17, 2010 22:53 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed the fic and thought that it could be the stand-alone that it is now or it could be part of a larger story, it was that good. Anyways I decided to add a link to this story on my FF.Net page incase some others want to read a Naruto/Hinata/Anko story! Hope you like the review and goodbye!
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Reviewed By: donroho On: August 11, 2009 22:55 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Loved It! I thought it was very imaginative and well thought out. Unlike most smut it actually made it seem believable...up to Hiashi that is. I don't think a father would reac...well yes they would ignore the previously unfinished statement. I give it a ten, a FUCKIN' ten!
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Reviewed By: Ankofan On: December 23, 2008 16:14 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bloody excellent! Thank you for writing this story. I greatly look forward to seeing more work from you in the future.
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Reviewed By: .yuwa On: July 12, 2008 04:09 PDT
Comment/Review:
very very nice!!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: nocontact [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2008 21:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... That was awesome. Creative, well written, filled to the brim with lemons. Seriously, wow...
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Reviewed By: GS On: May 04, 2008 00:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it XD
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Title: well done
Reviewed By: hinata_fanboy On: April 10, 2008 20:59 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
a very well done fanfic, i found amusement in some parts am i correct in noticing the "La Blue girl" reference(with the Miroku clan bit), or was it something completely different?
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Title: Amazing
Reviewed By: Faoron [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2007 23:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an amazing little piece of smut. Well-written and great plot. I think you've got they're characterizations down perfectly. Heh. "I mean, she goes around conking people on the head and kidnapping them in broad daylight... that's suspicious!" That's so Naruto. This definitely rates five thumbs up.
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Title: Totally Awesome
Reviewed By: MandalorianJedi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 05:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I tell you, this was an awesome fic! Please, Please, Please don't keep this a one shot, or please write a sequel. A fic like this of the highest quality demands it!
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Reviewed By: jin_the_wind_master_420 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 03:10 PDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This has got to be the best One-shot I've ever read.The sex seens wer very well done, the charicter developement was good, and you managed to stay in charicter with everyone. There were a few misspelled words but they weren't really enough to bother me to much. I defenitly think this fic deserves at least another one-shot sequal, and if you tried you could probably get a full-length story out of it.
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Title: Um...
Reviewed By: korbaton [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2007 20:55 PDT
Comment/Review:
Immensely creepy, but not bad. Seems to me to be one of those fics that you find under someone's mattress, look shiftily to both sides of you, read it quick quick quick, then shove it back under before anyone sees.
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Title: Holy Shit
Reviewed By: Yrael On: July 17, 2007 21:24 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy shit. This is... amazing. One of the best lemons I've EVER read. Remarkable fluidity, incredible detail, and such... passion. It's outright amazing. You have crafted a wonderful, wonderful thing here. I am dying to see the universe surrounding this story furthered. I'm a little sad it's only one chapter... In any case, kudos to you, and kudos to Rx7 for encouraging the writing and posting of this.
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