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Reviewed By: ledfan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 18:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great lemon for your first try... heck for any try you did a very good job :D
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Title: Truly the best
Reviewed By: Arch Knights Tribute On: June 11, 2007 16:43 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am going to try and make this brief...I have read tons of Fanfiction.. And I have to tell you that you need a bit of polishing here and there. HOWEVER, This is the BEST I have read in this Category! There is an actual attempt at a plot the characters still fit within what they were created to be...You gave it a nice believeable spin I have told all of my other friends of your story and the agree...You could easily keep this going as a regular storyor ongoing hentais either way PLEASE!! write more of this story or simply write another one doesn't have to be hinata...as long as it is a female character/s Eitehr way keep up the good work. There ar emany that are eager to read more of your work good luck and take care ^_^
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Reviewed By: hannibal221 On: June 05, 2007 13:56 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i would like for you to turn this into a story if not a story then atleast another chapter. i mean Hinata hasn't taken it in her ass from Naruto yet! and nobody has found out about them yet so it would be nice
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Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2007 08:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to say, this was a nice refreshing change from all the other crap Naruto lemons out there. THe story was VERY original. I especially enjoyed how you portray Hinata. How she slowly got into it. Very in character. Nicely done. I look forward to reading some of your other works. ~Toby
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Title: Destenyne
Reviewed By: Destenyne [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 11:12 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it because that seemed like a Naruto fanfic not jst a random story with those characters. oh does kiba end up in squad 7.
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Reviewed By: Chevyluvr On: January 11, 2007 19:02 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
...holy freakin crap... wow... that was amazingly se- imeanwellwritten. >ahem< i'f you'll excuse me i have some business to take care of. >ahem
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Reviewed By: creitros [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2006 19:15 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Most certainly one of my favorite fanfiction stories (one-shot or otherwise). Wonderfully done.
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Reviewed By: thanos [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 20:16 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will say that I thoroughly enjoyed this fic simply because I can actually see this happen if Hinata ever got the courage to actually ask for help. I really hope that you decide to continue this fic and take off of the one-shot only pile. I would love to see the interaction of Anko's genin team with the rest of the R9 and TG. Not to mention how Kakashi would eventually find out that formally shy, meek, and unassuming Hinata had actually stolen his 'precious'. As well as how the other teams Jounin instructors would react.
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Title: animeking_01
Reviewed By: animeking_01 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 02:45 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awsome fic if I found it sonner I would have reveiwed earlier and I love thi fic by far my favorite Lemon fic out of everyone here I really would like to see a continuation of this fic.
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Reviewed By: Y_Yonder [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 22:28 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really should continue this i would read it
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Reviewed By: PoisonedWit On: November 27, 2006 01:41 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Definitely a great fic. If you do decide to continue, which so many people have asked you to do, here's a suggestion: Switch Shino and Ino out on the teams, and get her in on the action. She adds to the espionage/assassin nature of the team, and she's just plain sexy...But anyway, loved the story, loved the sex. Great job!
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Reviewed By: VahnDeathHeart [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 11:27 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thhis is a very enjoyable story and i think it should be cont.
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Reviewed By: Genesis D Rose On: November 09, 2006 23:35 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I REALLY think you should continue this
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Reviewed By: Scarre On: November 07, 2006 13:06 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost never review anything, but by the time I was halfway through this work felt that I had to make an effort to ensure that your talent be emplyed in this manner again. Zomg!!! moar!!11! *Hrm.* This piece was marvelous! It's almost perfect and I enjoyed it thoroughly(sp?). You may notice that I put a 9 for style of writing and the cause of that is that some of the descriptions were a little long winding. Too much description is not nearly as bad as too little, but I lost interrest a couple of times and jumped in the story. That is not something you want your readers to experience if you can help it. On the other hand; I have a short attention span and tend to jump in stories anyway. That is why I gave you a nine after all. On the spelling & grammar front, I could not find one single spelling or grammatical error. That is more than I can say for almost all othe fanfiction out there today. That I read, anyway. Great job! Originality/Creativity: Naruto + Hinata has been done before, but not like this in any fics I have read. The way you used Anko in the story was just brilliant. Enjoyment Factor: As I said, I enjoyed it thoroghly. And that's because: Not A Single Person Out Of Character! That is not something you see in every fic and something authors should pay more attention to. You, my talented friend, passed that test with flying colors. (Unless you count 12yrs old having sex, but it is believable.) I liked it and I think you can make a name for yourself in lemon fanfiction if you continue to produce works like this. Scarecrow approves! b(^-^)d
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Reviewed By: narusaku4eva [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2006 09:57 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome! man this fic kicks ass pls pls pls continue it, it would be soooo good a a long fic pls think about it... dont make me beg =P
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