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| "The Hybrid" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: artchic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 14:18 EST
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Evil, evil cliffhanger! Here I am, eating my french toast, reading, on the edge of my seat and ... THE END!! Man, you had me going there. :) Can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I can't believe no one else is reviewing. I think it's a cool story with loads of potential. I like the idea of having the story in parts too. And the relationship between Vegeta and his mother is quite interesting. I'd love more insite about that, and all the animosity between him and his father. Please, by all means, keep going. I'll review! :)
| Reviewed By: artchic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2006 19:48 EST
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Oooh! Wouldn't that be an interesting twist, if both Vegeta and Bulma were in Frieza's army. Man, I bet you could have loads of fun writing that! Anyway, wherever the twists and turns lead you I'm liking your direction. Can't wait for the next chapter!
| Reviewed By: artchic [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2006 11:27 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Since you didn't seem to have a lot of reviews I wanted to leave my thoughts anyway, even if you don't necessarily need it to continue writing. I haven't read many "Bulma as a saiyan" stories that are really written with very much depth to them. I think you're doing an awesome job of believability and character development and also with keeping the characters somewhat true to their "nature." It will be interesting to see how they all grow up together and further develop their personalities. Good job so far! Keep it up!
| Reviewed By: chiku [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2006 12:09 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This sounds like its going to be quite a good story, please keep up with it, i cant believe you haven't got any reviews on this site for this story, please dont let the baka's stop you from continuing...good fic
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