| "OH BABY!" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: jireland [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2007 10:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love these stories, but I hate cliffhangers! Oh well, guess their a necessary evil. The story moves and flows so well,that I just can't get enough. Keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2007 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for the new chappie! I loved it as always it just gets better and better^-^
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 14:41 CDT
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8 chapters to go. I don't know if I should be happy or sad. XD
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: August 14, 2007 13:38 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a cute chapter and cant believe how close its getting to the end. Until next time keep it up.
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Reviewed By: jireland [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2007 03:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story line! I hope that you continue this arc for a long time to come, it's wonderful!
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 03:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god they named one of the sons Makoto! I thought of that name before I even read that part. It's one of my favorite names. How kickass is that? XD
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Reviewed By: Methos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Kurama and Hiei are very generous with their friends and family. I wish I had friends that generous. Great chapter, I'm pretty sure if you had left it there and not posted the next chapter, some people may have been a little irate!!!
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just seems to be getting better and better. I've never stay with a story this long before which means that your doing a great job. Keep it up cant wait till the next chapters.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 17:36 CDT
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Yay! More chapters added to the story!
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Reviewed By: tengoamorparati On: May 31, 2007 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything is supurb except for the random mix up of are and is but the only reason I think I caught it was because it bugs the heck out of me!! The rest though makes me want to laugh one minute and cry the next, be it for happyness or sadness... Regarding what you said about purhaps going too far... You made me belive that THAT was the only way for it to work out without fatalities. In fact I think it was kind of sweet that they have such a close bond even if they are so young... You have a great style of writing that draws the reader in and you originality is so incredible that I find myself in awe...! So to the great author ss dragon lady... I bow before you *bows* However, If this fic does not have a good ending... After I'm done crying my eyes out I promise me, Hiei and Kurama and whoever else wants to join in will hunt you down and force feed you brusselsprouts!
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Reviewed By: intrestedpersonofgrief On: May 31, 2007 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original and I loved the whole thing... I mean LOVE the whole thing. the style is a bit... can't think of the word it's not the best but by far not the worst! one question about Karama though... What with him drinking the tea and then the jelly incident 0,0 then the sudden nausia and odd (really odd... Hiei is to be expected but to me Karama was the more what's the word? Oh yeah 'Normal' of the two!) cravings... Is he pregnant too? guess I'll just have to keep reading huh?
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this story is just full of surprise's. I can't believe Kurama's having twins. I hope they are girls as well just to make him happy. Can't wait till the next one.
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Reviewed By: AIMQP On: May 26, 2007 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kurama's having twins, he's not having twins, he's having twins! I can't keep up! Your story is so awesome,I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree she should divorce him. He's no good. Can't wait keep it up.
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Reviewed By: fire_lily_fox(not logged in) On: May 13, 2007 21:27 CDT
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Can shiori get shuichi when she divorces that bastard? I would think it to be very good for the kid that his father be taken out of the picture. I wonder though what bulma saw though.
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