| "OH BABY!" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: jamc On: May 12, 2008 14:30 CDT
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Loved it! I can't wait to read what happens in the next story....even if it doesn't sound all sunshine and rainbows. :)
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2008 14:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very good ending. This was an amazing story to stick with full in and full out. So many surprises and I think your an awsomw author. I can't wait to read what happens next just hope the title doesn't mean someone dies, that would be sad.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2008 23:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
My net's been off for a while. Don't stop writting! I'm still reading!
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Reviewed By: jireland [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2008 16:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please keep on writing!!! I love this story line. I can't wait until they get back to demon world to see how the next romance goes and who they hire to be nannies/bodyguards. I can't wait to read the rest of your stories. Your writing and story line flow so well that I quickly become engrosse3d and lose track of time. I never get enough with just one chapter and have to reread the stories already written over again and again. Please, don't give up because of lack of reviews. Others like me don't like reviewing because we never know what to say. Just keep writing, we are out here reading in the quiet, enjoying everything you send out to us. Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: Wolvesbane39 On: March 08, 2008 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the past few days I've been enjoying this fic. And what can I say, I absolutly loved it! You've got a truely great talent in story telling. It's a beutiful story with incredibly cute parts. I especially like your descriptions, I myself do descriptive writing. So, in the most professional way I can put this, I loved it! Really, I am quite picky. I will either not finish a story, or rate it and leave a message if I didn't. I saw the twist with the triplits and the girl coming, though. I couldn't turn my eyes away when the babies were born. Kuramas no all of the babies are extremely cute! I wish that when I have children they'll be just as cute! That was quite a twist when Kurama gave birth naturally. I was caught quite offguard, and for Shiori becoming a demon! It's an interesting and fun tale told in a wonderful and respectful matter. Ah whatever! It rocked! I hope you continue with your skills as a writer. As will I. In fact this very story has inspired me to renew a nearly forgotten tale. Actually quite a few! I'll create a profile and start writing right away. I haope you'll do the courtasy and rate mine, just as I have done with yours. One tip, watch your grammer and spelling. I caght quite a few mistakes. It's a good idea to double check your work to make sure you don't confuse the reader. I double checkeed this comment. That is a very proffesional bit of advice I can give to you. Most readers will either ignore or become annoyed with the mistakes, sometimes even both! Yet I still stick with my first decision, you have a wonderful talent that should not be taken lightly. Have you considered writing a novel? Not a fanfic of course. Yet you can take an idea of a fanfic, then switch the characters with your own, and put them in the situation you wished for the designated character to expeience. I have done that on many occasion! I look forward to the next chapter! Hoefully I wont be awake for hours with my eyes glued to the sceen. LOL . This was such a good story, I'll have to catch up with one of my own newly revived ones! Keep up the amazing work! Seriously!
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Reviewed By: Wolvesbane39 On: March 08, 2008 00:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For the past few days I've been enjoying this fic. And what can I say, I absolutly loved it! You've got a truely great talent in story telling. It's a beutiful story with incredibly cute parts. I especially like your descriptions, I myself do descriptive writing. So, in the most professional way I can put this, I loved it! Really, I am quite picky. I will either not finish a story, or rate it and leave a message if I didn't. I saw the twist with the triplits and the girl coming, though. I couldn't turn my eyes away when the babies were born. Kuramas no all of the babies are extremely cute! I wish that when I have children they'll be just as cute! That was quite a twist when Kurama gave birth naturally. I was caught quite offguard, and for Shiori becoming a demon! It's an interesting and fun tale told in a wonderful and respectful matter. Ah whatever! It rocked! I hope you continue with your skills as a writer. As will I. In fact this very story has inspired me to renew a nearly forgotten tale. Actually quite a few! I'll create a profile and start writing right away. I haope you'll do the courtasy and rate mine, just as I have done with yours. One tip, watch your grammer and spelling. I caght quite a few mistakes. It's a good idea to double check your work to make sure you don't confuse the reader. I double checkeed this comment. That is a very proffesional bit of advice I can give to you. Most readers will either ignore or become annoyed with the mistakes, sometimes even both! Yet I still stick with my first decision, you have a wonderful talent that should not be taken lightly. Have you considered writing a novel? Not a fanfic of course. Yet you can take an idea of a fanfic, then switch the characters with your own, and put them in the situation you wished for the designated character to expeience. I have done that on many occasion! I look forward to the next chapter! Hoefully I wont be awake for hours with my eyes glued to the sceen. LOL . This was such a good story, I'll have to catch up with one of my own newly revived ones! Keep up the amazing work! Seriously!
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2008 17:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, it was well worth the wait. I just can't believe its finally coming to an end. It's been a long journey. And as for your other story's go I love Naruto fic's so if you were to put it up I would be sure to read it.
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Reviewed By: Sy On: March 01, 2008 06:12 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly like your stories and really hope that you continue posting them. It is a great series with a well thought out plot that you can really get into.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2008 01:44 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm not losing interest!
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Title: jamc79
Reviewed By: jamc79 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2008 12:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm soooo sorry! I am guilty of reading and not reviewing. I just want you to know that I love your story arc and would hate to see it end. You may be a slow typer, but your writing style is excellent and I don't recall any glaringly obvious typos. Rest assured, you are on my author watch list and every time I receive an e-mail saying you have added a new chapter I'm right there reading it as soon as I can. If you keep posting, I will definitely make it a point to review so you don't become this discouraged again!
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2008 13:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay for the new chapter and Happy New Year. This has been an amazing story to read it will be sad to see it come to an end. Hope there's a sequel to it, I bet it will be just as great as this one.
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2007 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awsome chapter, you've done a very good job with it. I can't wait to see how things play out with all the babies. Until next time.
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Title: Cute!
Reviewed By: Tiffy On: December 16, 2007 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is Sooooooo cute! I love all the little babies they are so precious! can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2007 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the most awsome chapter ever. The surprise was great I kinda got the feeling he was goin to have a girl and I was right. I wonder what will happen now that they have 5 babies to deal with ^-^
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2007 14:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic!! This story is sooo mind bogoling. I can't believe were getting closer to then end of this story it will be sad when its over. T_T but that's ok its a great story and I would read it again and again.
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