| "OH BABY!" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 13:14 CDT
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Yay for updating!
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that was a very sweet ending. Not a bad chapter. I hope it just get's even better.
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for not reading lately I have been busy. Anyways I always read a stiry even if it gets bad. I just have to say that, that was a shocker for me. But I kinda always knew from the begining that they would end up together. Well just to let you know I always stick to my stories so this won't effect me. Until next time I have one more to read.
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Reviewed By: Fire lily_fox ( not logged in) On: April 23, 2007 13:14 CDT
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It was a nice chapter and I liked how you put in the difference of human and demon rituals. You mentioned earlier about it and I like how you also gave shiori a good wake up call
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 20:06 CDT
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Yay for updating! I was waiting on edge for the next chapter! *reads name before the story starts* Woohoo! I've been recognized! I shall remain your loyal fan.
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Reviewed By: F2K On: April 13, 2007 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, even if it might have been......a little racy, yeah. But I really enjoyed it, keep up the great job!!!
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Reviewed By: fire_lily_fox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 03:18 CDT
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oh my god!!!! how could you?!?! You gave kurama a pissed off mother!!!! are you insane????? Did ou even think before putting that in there. poor kurama and hiei. I know that this would have come up later and I am not going to comment on it but you could have at least had the poor woman leave the scene. I mean, I think you have traumatized her. I can understand why you don't like the the chappter too so I cant complain.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 20:59 CDT
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Oh and 100 boxes of pocky for originality!
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2007 20:57 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all, I'd like to say thanks for the update. Second: I'm pretty sure that you will get criticism and flames for this chapter, but whatever you know? You did give multiple warnings before and in the middle of the story. I feel that you do not need to apologize for this chapter. Come on you said it yourself, it's a free country and it's your story therefore you can do whatever you want with it. Quite frankly, I enjoyed it and cannot wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work.
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2007 14:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This sorry is just awsome. And don't worry if your late I'm a patient person. Well keep going this is turning out really good.
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2007 22:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is ever so exciting keep going.
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2007 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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That's so sweat I'm glad it all worked out.
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: February 06, 2007 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG that is sooo sad.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2007 03:51 CST
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Ok I really was not expecting something like that to happen. Leave it you to add such a twist XD. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2007 15:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is getting really really exciting keep it up.
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