| "OH BABY!" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Methos [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 11:22 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, Kurama and Hiei are very generous with their friends and family. I wish I had friends that generous. Great chapter, I'm pretty sure if you had left it there and not posted the next chapter, some people may have been a little irate!!!
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2007 13:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story just seems to be getting better and better. I've never stay with a story this long before which means that your doing a great job. Keep it up cant wait till the next chapters.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2007 17:36 CDT
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Yay! More chapters added to the story!
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Reviewed By: tengoamorparati On: May 31, 2007 18:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Everything is supurb except for the random mix up of are and is but the only reason I think I caught it was because it bugs the heck out of me!! The rest though makes me want to laugh one minute and cry the next, be it for happyness or sadness... Regarding what you said about purhaps going too far... You made me belive that THAT was the only way for it to work out without fatalities. In fact I think it was kind of sweet that they have such a close bond even if they are so young... You have a great style of writing that draws the reader in and you originality is so incredible that I find myself in awe...! So to the great author ss dragon lady... I bow before you *bows* However, If this fic does not have a good ending... After I'm done crying my eyes out I promise me, Hiei and Kurama and whoever else wants to join in will hunt you down and force feed you brusselsprouts!
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Reviewed By: intrestedpersonofgrief On: May 31, 2007 11:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very original and I loved the whole thing... I mean LOVE the whole thing. the style is a bit... can't think of the word it's not the best but by far not the worst! one question about Karama though... What with him drinking the tea and then the jelly incident 0,0 then the sudden nausia and odd (really odd... Hiei is to be expected but to me Karama was the more what's the word? Oh yeah 'Normal' of the two!) cravings... Is he pregnant too? guess I'll just have to keep reading huh?
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow this story is just full of surprise's. I can't believe Kurama's having twins. I hope they are girls as well just to make him happy. Can't wait till the next one.
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Reviewed By: AIMQP On: May 26, 2007 15:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kurama's having twins, he's not having twins, he's having twins! I can't keep up! Your story is so awesome,I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: May 15, 2007 18:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I agree she should divorce him. He's no good. Can't wait keep it up.
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Reviewed By: fire_lily_fox(not logged in) On: May 13, 2007 21:27 CDT
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Can shiori get shuichi when she divorces that bastard? I would think it to be very good for the kid that his father be taken out of the picture. I wonder though what bulma saw though.
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2007 13:14 CDT
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Yay for updating!
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 21:35 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well that was a very sweet ending. Not a bad chapter. I hope it just get's even better.
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Reviewed By: Naako [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2007 21:07 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for not reading lately I have been busy. Anyways I always read a stiry even if it gets bad. I just have to say that, that was a shocker for me. But I kinda always knew from the begining that they would end up together. Well just to let you know I always stick to my stories so this won't effect me. Until next time I have one more to read.
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Reviewed By: Fire lily_fox ( not logged in) On: April 23, 2007 13:14 CDT
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It was a nice chapter and I liked how you put in the difference of human and demon rituals. You mentioned earlier about it and I like how you also gave shiori a good wake up call
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Reviewed By: Helcat805 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2007 20:06 CDT
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Yay for updating! I was waiting on edge for the next chapter! *reads name before the story starts* Woohoo! I've been recognized! I shall remain your loyal fan.
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Reviewed By: F2K On: April 13, 2007 16:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it, even if it might have been......a little racy, yeah. But I really enjoyed it, keep up the great job!!!
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