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Reviewed By: yaoi_lover On: December 14, 2006 11:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i just can't stop reading this story, it's soo good!! I just love all ur fanfics. keep on updating steph!! **see ya at school!!** xP
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Reviewed By: bakurasgirl (too lazy to log in) On: December 07, 2006 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so heartwarming! I think you should post your other stories here. I would love to read them. I have stories that have been in the works for a year or more on here that I don't update regularly, just when I can find the time.
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Reviewed By: bakurasgirl (not logged in) On: December 07, 2006 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy your style and story structure. I'm impressed with the maturity of your writing, and I was very interested to know that Malik (probably) wore a kalarsis. I didn't know what that was called, now I do. Thank you for putting research into your work and continue doing an awesome job...onto to chapter 3!
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Reviewed By: sglily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 11:40 CST
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Wow. When Bakura claims something as his, he does it in a rather grand way, eh? ; ) I particularly liked Ryou's mind rant there where he was trying to think of a proper way to explain what all had happened to him/Bakura. I had to agree with him that it probably wasn't a good idea to tell the whole truth in such a straight forward manner! But, Bakura rescued him and said it all with a very possessive kiss anyway. Nice chapter! Loved the Ishtar's habit of annoying the hell out of Bakura - on purpose, I might add! So sad to see a good fic end. However, you've opened yourself up to a whole realm of follow-up possibilities... Hmm... now that the "misunderstandings" have been laid to rest, there would be room for "Compromises" and any number of one word appropriate titles for living with and attempting a relationship with Bakura! Regardless of my own rantings... this story was a great read! Thank you for sharing!
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 08:43 CST
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Good chapter. I'm glad Bakura came around and is going back with Ryou.
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Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2006 22:34 CST
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AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW... I think I have a toothache... It was soo sweet Bakura kissing Ryou in front of everyone and claiming... OMG soo sweet! Too much Sweetness... it would have been better if you had of done a mile high lemon ;)
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Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2006 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY a update... what a wonderful lemon scene... I just couldn't stop drooling..... wow once again sglily beat me to the punchline of my whole review... now if only she would update... but anyways... I'm not sure I want to read the last chapter... I don't want it to end yet!! *stomps foot* Make it longer!!! This is too good to end... Gah! I finally find a good story that gets updated regularly.... and the author is pure evil by ending such a good story soo soon... *runs off crying* (forgive my rant... I'm sorry... so sorry... just ignore me... can't wait to read the last chapter.)
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 16:13 CST
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Damn that was hot. Though truthfully the feelings communicated between the two of them were as enjoyable to read as the actual lemon was. Great job. I really like how you portray the characters, you keep in mind not only who they are but who they could be as well. So the next chapters the last? I look forward to it, yet I'm a little sad this has to end. You could make me happy again by working on some of your other wonderful fics as soon as you can. (lol)
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Reviewed By: sglily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 15:18 CST
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There's a big difference all around in this chapter. I liked that you mentioned - whether intentionally or not - the changes that were made to the style of love making Ryou and Bakura engaged in this time 'round. Meaning that Bakura wanted to look into Ryou's eyes and saw nothing but want, lust, and love there. Where before, he had Ryou blindfolded because he didn't want to see what he thought would be loathing there. Also, instead of gagging his light to keep from hearing possible protests, he was encouraging his light to be vocal and in particular - to beg for it. Also in regards to the opposite of being blindfolded was when Bakura stated he wanted Ryou to look at him while in the throes of passion. The love scene, by the way, was very well done, tasteful and HOT! I thought the Ishtars were hysterical! Oh, my! Their bantering back and forth was really amusing and naturally Bakura stayed nicely in character once outsiders were thrown into the mix. I liked how you said that Bakura tried to shift so that Ryou wouldn't be open for scrunity! Nice job and look forward to how you intend to wrap this all up...
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2006 13:30 CST
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Great chapter. I'm so glad they admitted what they feel.
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Reviewed By: Mimikosayachi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2006 23:20 CST
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you.....must.......continue!
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Reviewed By: Saiyamaru [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 22:05 CST
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Yes, yes you are evil. Now be un-evil and update! *lol* Another great chapter. Heh, poor Ryou! What did he ever do in his past life to deserve falling in love with such a difficult ass? Though I must admit, it's a mighty fine looking ass indeed. I guess things *Almost* Equel out.
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Reviewed By: dragonlady222 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 08:31 CST
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Good chapter. I hope they admit their true feeling to each other. Poor guys.
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Reviewed By: Tjay Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 19:05 CST
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Once again I totally agree with sglily... however she wrote everything I was going to write... but how dare you leave it with a cliffhanger... you're just as bad a sglily... but at least you update more than once a millennia... ^^; also I do hope you post more of your fanfiction... however I will only read the Bakura x Ryou fanfic's... so please tell me you have more... please!!! I'll be waiting for the next chapter... and if you take too long I shall hunt you down and... and... so something really really bad... I don't know what yet... but it'll be BAD!!
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Reviewed By: sglily [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 15:06 CST
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Another great chapter! I really love how you have captured Bakura's blend of nasty, middle finger saluting callousness with his own unique way of showing compassion - well, for him, that would equate to anything that might resemble feelings, I suppose! Bakura is not one to bare his heart and soul, is he? He'd have to admit he as one of each! ; ) Regardless, I loved the interaction between light and dark. From both points of view at the beginning of the chapter, we as readers got a taste of what each character was feeling in regards to the situation. The sudden dashing of hope that Ryou felt when he was being pushed away (both physically and emotionally) from Bakura was heart wrenching - especially when he was left to think that that night meant nothing to Bakura. Funny that Bakura thought Ryou clueless as to why the dark one had done what he had to Ryou as far as binding the young one up and taking pleausre in his body, then leaving, and yet, the physical evidence was laid out before him, how Ryou was looking so thin, haggard, and worn down. Bakura was just as clueless as to how his actions had affected his light. Perhaps the misunderstandings between the two are now cleared up? I look forward to the next installment to find out! A few other things... first off, TJ (who reviewed before me) loves to exaggerate... doesn't update for years! Bah! I'm surprised she was yelling about the cliffhanger YOU left us with! Ha ha ha! As far as other stories you have written, I'd personally love to read them! Especially if those stories would be about Ryou and Bakura... you have some more of them, right, right, right??? ; )
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