| "The Never Played Symphonies" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 19:07 PDT
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I loved this chapter! It was great! I can't wait for an update! It was so much going on and I look forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: maegerakawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 19:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was such an adorable chapter. I feel all warm and fuzzy now.
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Title: whoo!
Reviewed By: NejixLee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 21:45 PDT
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Man this update seemed faster to me oo, hope it continues to be that way xD. lol damn Itachi sure had to get his point across >> though it wasn't fully there. I really feel bad for Sasuke lol along with everyone else I'm sure. Just ;-; *holds Naruto plushie* my poor fox boy, what will become of him??? I hope I dont end up crying ;;;;;;;------;;;;;; till next time!
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Reviewed By: DancingMoonLeaf On: April 11, 2008 15:58 PDT
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Yes you finally updated, your writing as usual is amazing. I can not wait for what comes next. *screams like fangirl*
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 19:45 PDT
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Okay, that was weird, fucked up, and highly interesting. It'd actually be finny if it weren't so deadly serious, to be honest. Heh. Keep updating, this story gets the gold medal for being the most fucked up story I've read so far. Even more so that Sasuke is such a fucked up prick. Neh. Update again soon, ja ne.
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Title: Greatness.
Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 16:07 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. Sasuke's reation was exactly as I had imagined! :D God, you have no idea how many times I've daydreamed of Sasuke beating the shit out of Sai, and yelling at Itachi. I didn't really like the chapter... I would've liked to see more emotions from Itachi. Sasuke was all torn up, for crying out loud. But I think Sasuke was cool in this chapter. Thruth to be told, sometimes you make Sasuke seem like a wimp. But he was awesome in this chapter. I LOVED it when he knocked Sai unconcious. I could taste the anger through the screen! And "Don't you know how much I love you!?" was simply great. The only thing I didn't like was the ending. Cuz now I'm afraid everyone will blame Sasuke. I mean, Itachi cheated on him! Of course he would be angry! If it was the other way around, Itachi would've killed anyone who even dared to lay a finger on Sasuke. I'm glad we finally got to see some of Sasuke's improved powers. He's definitely not a child anymore. Itachi should know that. And Sai, you have got to stop acting like such a prick! (although I like you in the manga! ^^) I also liked the fact that Sasuke managed to keep a cool face towards Itachi when Itachi woke him up and asked him if he had been crying. I've been daydreaming about that too. But I would've loved to see some regret from Itachi's side. Shouldn't he feel at least a little bad about cheating on Sasuke? Ok, feels like I'm repeating myself... God, I seriously love this fic! Update soon, ne? (ok, we all know it's gonna take a month.) This is so original and well-written! The plot is just amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter! What's gonna happen to Itachi? Will he ever apologize to Sasuke? Will everyone get angry at Sasuke for nearly killing Itachi and Sai? (probably)... Until next time! Ja na.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 00:13 PDT
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This chapter was so deep! I loved it. I thought Sasuke was seriously going to do some killing for a minute there. He went to the extreme up in this one. I can't wait to see how it continues from here. LOL! Until next time, great job!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 15:36 PDT
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aweee sasuke really loves him!! itachi is such a fuckin asshole! doing that with sai in him and sasuke's room and then trying to fuck him when he's that angry.
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Reviewed By: maegerakawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 14:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! It was so full of drama that I loved it. Normally I love Itachi and am indifferent towards sasuke. After this chapter, however, I think Itachi is such a damn bastard. Thank you for the new chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: mis luv On: April 04, 2008 08:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic....everytime i open my mail and see an update i scream and put everything down to read!!!! Please let itachi say those 3 little words to this loved brother before sasuke becomes one of those lovers that snap (more than he has in that last chapter) and kills him over heart break....cuz the way he is now i think he well.....LoL
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Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 20:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you dont finish this stroy i will so cry this story is so good i love it and cant wait for more thanks so much for making this stroy keep it up
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Reviewed By: C y a n i d e [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 17:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you sucked me in. I normally don't like fanfictions and I tend to just read original fics, but man am I glad as hell that I found this one. You're really good at developing characters, and I am majorly impressed with everything over all. I am really looking forward to your next update, but take your time so it's just as amazing as everything else has been so far! Keep up the awesome work!!!!!
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Title: 5 stars? pssh! I give you a clear night's skyful!
Reviewed By: ilurvramen_2 On: February 27, 2008 16:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really pleased that you've started another arc...honestly you're writing has gotten even better! I was hesitant to start reading this again but your smut is sooooooo good I couldn't resist a peek and now the plot's got me hooked once again. Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! P.S. the only reason I was hesitant to start reading your fic again is because I'm a softie - character death always irks me, and you did Hinata's so fantastically! You write with such skill; I actually felt depressed after!
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: NxLee On: February 22, 2008 21:52 PST
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Thank god an update @-@ Well love it as always. I personally don't believe you have a run off tendency but meh, people's opinion. Jeez, Sai's gonna get his ass kicked lol I'm really interested as to how Itachi is going to respond whenever Sasuke confronts him about the obvious implications. xD Have a feeling it's gonna be across the line as "you don't own me otouto" lol I'm guessing is because of their resemblance Itachi needed what he could get. Wonder if Sasuke will rebel >> and I'm sure people complain about Itachi still being mean or something but pfft! He's always hot as a bipolar, overly jealous and homicidal brother >> what more could an angsty teen ask for? lol I nearly choked on the cum shot BTW lol! That sure as hell is embarrassing! I would have died in his position that is just...jeez...lol it spoke for itself really. Really can't wait for more >
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Reviewed By: animegirl41491 On: February 20, 2008 19:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated! YAY! The walk-in part was so funny! You'd think Deidara would know to KNOCK FIRST before barging into anyone's bedroom--considering he was having an affair with his own partner, he of all people should do it automatically. On that note, do none of the bedroom doors have locks, that anyone can walk right in? And worse yet (for Sasuke and Deidara both), I thought partners have to share a room (or is that just me assuming for the sake of many yaoi opportunities? ;) ). *Ahem* All I can say about the Sai part is. . . OUCH. If there's one thing Sai knows how to do, it's push people's buttons. Somehow, he instinctively knows exactly what to say so that he'll get punched in the face, which is not only hilarious, but also a little scary. He's seriously sadistic. I'll ask one last time: is Sasori ever comming back into the story (Yes. I'm obsessed. uu')? I think Deidara's torn between horror, embarassment, and jealousy, seeing all the PDA between Sasuke and Itachi. After all, his own boyfriend's in a coma. This new chapter just made my day--pleeease update again soon!
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