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Title: I'm glad u finished it.
Reviewed By: mortalshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2016 23:04 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I finally got around to reading the final chapter and the ending
made me feel so,so sad!But a good fic should make u feel,the more u
feel the better the story I think. I do understand u ending where u
did this whole story was about the epic love Itachi and Sasuke had
for each other and they were 2 halves of the same soul.I would
think Sasuke would feel incomplete and broken for the rest of his
life until they meet again in another time and place. I know it
took years but thankyou for not abandoning this fic and taking the
time to finish it.It's one of my favourites despite the sad ending.
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Title: I'm glad u finished it.
Reviewed By: mortalshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2016 23:04 PDT
Comment/Review:
I finally got around to reading the final chapter and the ending
made me feel so,so sad!But a good fic should make u feel,the more u
feel the better the story I think. I do understand u ending where u
did this whole story was about the epic love Itachi and Sasuke had
for each other and they were 2 halves of the same soul.I would
think Sasuke would feel incomplete and broken for the rest of his
life until they meet again in another time and place. I know it
took years but thankyou for not abandoning this fic and taking the
time to finish it.It's one of my favourites despite the sad ending.
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Title: I'm glad u finished it.
Reviewed By: mortalshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2016 23:03 PDT
Comment/Review:
I finally got around to reading the final chapter and the ending
made me feel so,so sad!But a good fic should make u feel,the more u
feel the better the story I think. I do understand u ending where u
did this whole story was about the epic love Itachi and Sasuke had
for each other and they were 2 halves of the same soul.I would
think Sasuke would feel incomplete and broken for the rest of his
life until they meet again in another time and place. I know it
took years but thankyou for not abandoning this fic and taking the
time to finish it.It's one of my favourites despite the sad ending.
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Reviewed By: mortalshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2016 20:51 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can understand Itachi not telling Sasuke things.Sasuke is way too
emotional whereas Itachi acts rationally most of the time.Of course
Itachi would make out Sasuke was nothing to him otherwise the
Akatsuki and whoever else could use Sasuke as his weakness.Sasuke
should realise this and realise Itachi has done what he could to
make Sasuke as strong as possible because I think the only thing
Itachi really fears is losing Sasuke,even though he doesn't say
it.But Sasuke doesn't think things through a lot of the time.Now
Sasuke is caught and I'm hoping Itachi saves him b4 anything really
bad happens again because as it is they're both already damaged by
what happened when Naruto attacked Sasuke.I'm assuming Itachi has
the same power to shift out of the way of damaging attacks just
like Tobi/Obito now he has the same eye not to mention he has
Shisui's eye in his crow Itachi will be crazy powerful and
extremely pissed I don't think any of them have truly seen the
extent of his true power but I look forward to seeing it at some
point.
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Reviewed By: mortalshadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2015 11:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm absolutely wrapt that you've decided to finish this fic.I Loved
reading it and was really disappointed when it stopped.I adore
Itachi and am hoping for once someone will give the poor guy a
happy ending where it all ends well for him.They may both be
totally dysfunctional but they Love each other and that's what
counts.Keep up the great writing,as I already said I Love this fic
:)
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Title: more than 5 stars!
Reviewed By: I/S On: November 24, 2013 02:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Author-san! You have a talent for writing ItaSasu lemon |
Reviewed By: LBA On: August 27, 2012 20:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic was one of my favorite Itachi x Sasuke fanfics out there, actually it still is. It's been 4 years and this is the only site left where you haven't deleted it. Not that I really can say anything about updating, I've taken years to update something myself. I remember reading somewhere that once you finished Wayward Servant you would go back and finish this one. I wonder if it's true. I hope so. I'm not even sure if you'll read this but if you do I want you to know that your work is not forgotten and I hope someday you'll return to fanfiction and finish this incredible story. |
Title: I loved it.
Reviewed By: Randomyaoifan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2009 18:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is that it or does it go on because it's been a year.the suspense was unbarerable even when all i had to do was keep reading.
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Title: Oh my god.
Reviewed By: Dionna On: March 27, 2009 05:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just got done reading Chaper 15 and Sasuke fucking killed Hinata.. Like that was pretty fucked up... I'm a little mad But I know that it wasn't just for the sadis... Btw I don't like how weak sasuke can seem sometimes. I mean he joined the akasuki hes supposed to me MACHO MAN!!! Or maybe I'm being obsessed. I cried when I thought Sasori died in that last chapter. But anyway... If people I love keep dying or having near death expierences I'm gonna chew on your soul.... Keep up the good work!!!
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Title: Holy shit!!!
Reviewed By: PlushiesxX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2009 02:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so like i haven't actually read the whole thing. I'm at like chapter 12 or something.. But all I know is that if Sasori dies.... oh my frikkin god... I know he dies in the anime and everything but that was bad enough.. This story is like mega bomb and If he dies ....... Dun even wanna think about it. Good job so far btw I'm hooked
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2008 18:31 PDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, honestly, I do love this story, but Itachi's cruel manners are really starting to annoy me. Every single chapter is loaded with rage and hatred and angst. And why do you always make Sasuke seem so weak? Sorry if I sound pissed, I'm just being as honest as I can. I swear - this is without a doubt one of my favorites, but still! There are definitely things that annoy the hell outta me. You're the author, so your word is law, but I'm the reader, and I'm letting you know what I think. I love blood and violence and angst, and so far this story has been nothing but pure brilliance. But somehow, the rage took over the romance. At least there were sweet moments before. I liked the first few chapter the best! Lately, there's been nothing but darkness, and it's eating me up as I read it. Don't get me wrong, I love dark and evil fics, but not when it gets too much. You know? I think your writing style is amazing, and you are definitely one of the few authors that I actually look up to, in the world of fanfiction, and I think Itachi's behavior is understandable - Sasuke nearly killed him, but it's not like Itachi is a saint either. Hell, even though Itachi told him about Sasuke's perversions from his childhood, I still think that Itachi way darker than his younger brother. And THAT's why I just can't deal with this rage! Sasuke tries so hard, and he gets shit in return from that longhaired bastard! And now Naruto's back in the picture, and he's way hotter than before and he's Sasuke's best friend and yadi-yahoo, and STILL Itachi doesn't seem to consider Sasuke's feelings at all. Dear god, why does this fic piss me off every time I read it?! Probably because you're so good at stirring emotions. Which by all means is a good thing, but seriously... I want to see some affection. But I'm slowly starting to realize... You're not gonna give it to me, are you? This isn't one of those fics. My god. I'll cry my eyes out eventually, aren't I? You evil, coldhearted, yet so incredibly awesome author!! And what's gonna happen to Naruto? Will Itachi ever show some kind of emotion? Will Sasuke grow up? Please let him mature a bit, won't you? I mean, you make him seem like a total lame-ass. Even though Sasuke's not even close to being my favorite character, I don't think he's THAT weak. I think he's usually pretty cool. But that's just me. As always, splendid. Horrible, but awesome. You confuse me.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2008 00:02 PDT
Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter! I can't wait for an update. This is one of the best chapters yet. I look forward to a new one.
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Reviewed By: DancingMoonLeaf On: May 02, 2008 16:07 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yosh! You wrote more I can not even tell you how happy I am. Your story is amazing and very creative. I can wait for the next installment. Question... Is Itachi ever going to be uke? *big puppy dog eyes* pretty pretty please.
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2008 11:22 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool! :D As usual; great chapter. But woah, Itachi is so cruel to Sasuke! Stupid Big brother... I'm kinda hoping that Sasuke's gonna cheat on him or something. Just once, to let Itachi know how it feels. And what's gonna happen to Naruto? Naruto is my favorite character, so don't you dare kill him! God, I'm still pissed with Itachi... Why does he always have to act so coldly towards Sasuke? It's no wonder Sasuke beat the crap outta him. He should've seen that one coming. And Itachi won't even admit that he did something wrong. Isn't he even sorry for hurting Sasuke's feelings?? He KNOWS how much Sasuke loves him, even though they don't speak of it. I just want Itachi to, just once, admit that he loves Sasuke. That kiss-it-better-flashback was really interesting and showed a much more human side of Itachi. I mean, I doubt that he wanted to fall in love with his own baby brother. That must've been tough. But still, Itachi was obviously the one who feel first, and then he more of less forced Sasuke to fall in love with him, and now he won't even admit that he loves Sasuke? Wtf. Stupid Itachi. And yet, I do love him... I just want to see Sasuke happy for once. You're a genius, even though this fic has gotten me slightly depressed. Update soon, ne? Ja na.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 19:07 PDT
Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter! It was great! I can't wait for an update! It was so much going on and I look forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2008 19:07 PDT
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I loved this chapter! It was great! I can't wait for an update! It was so much going on and I look forward to reading more!
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Reviewed By: maegerakawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2008 19:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was such an adorable chapter. I feel all warm and fuzzy now.
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Title: whoo!
Reviewed By: NejixLee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2008 21:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
Man this update seemed faster to me oo, hope it continues to be that way xD. lol damn Itachi sure had to get his point across >> though it wasn't fully there. I really feel bad for Sasuke lol along with everyone else I'm sure. Just ;-; *holds Naruto plushie* my poor fox boy, what will become of him??? I hope I dont end up crying ;;;;;;;------;;;;;; till next time!
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Reviewed By: DancingMoonLeaf On: April 11, 2008 15:58 PDT
Comment/Review:
Yes you finally updated, your writing as usual is amazing. I can not wait for what comes next. *screams like fangirl*
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 19:45 PDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, that was weird, fucked up, and highly interesting. It'd actually be finny if it weren't so deadly serious, to be honest. Heh. Keep updating, this story gets the gold medal for being the most fucked up story I've read so far. Even more so that Sasuke is such a fucked up prick. Neh. Update again soon, ja ne.
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Title: Greatness.
Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 16:07 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it. Sasuke's reation was exactly as I had imagined! :D God, you have no idea how many times I've daydreamed of Sasuke beating the shit out of Sai, and yelling at Itachi. I didn't really like the chapter... I would've liked to see more emotions from Itachi. Sasuke was all torn up, for crying out loud. But I think Sasuke was cool in this chapter. Thruth to be told, sometimes you make Sasuke seem like a wimp. But he was awesome in this chapter. I LOVED it when he knocked Sai unconcious. I could taste the anger through the screen! And "Don't you know how much I love you!?" was simply great. The only thing I didn't like was the ending. Cuz now I'm afraid everyone will blame Sasuke. I mean, Itachi cheated on him! Of course he would be angry! If it was the other way around, Itachi would've killed anyone who even dared to lay a finger on Sasuke. I'm glad we finally got to see some of Sasuke's improved powers. He's definitely not a child anymore. Itachi should know that. And Sai, you have got to stop acting like such a prick! (although I like you in the manga! ^^) I also liked the fact that Sasuke managed to keep a cool face towards Itachi when Itachi woke him up and asked him if he had been crying. I've been daydreaming about that too. But I would've loved to see some regret from Itachi's side. Shouldn't he feel at least a little bad about cheating on Sasuke? Ok, feels like I'm repeating myself... God, I seriously love this fic! Update soon, ne? (ok, we all know it's gonna take a month.) This is so original and well-written! The plot is just amazing. I can't wait for the next chapter! What's gonna happen to Itachi? Will he ever apologize to Sasuke? Will everyone get angry at Sasuke for nearly killing Itachi and Sai? (probably)... Until next time! Ja na.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2008 00:13 PDT
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This chapter was so deep! I loved it. I thought Sasuke was seriously going to do some killing for a minute there. He went to the extreme up in this one. I can't wait to see how it continues from here. LOL! Until next time, great job!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 15:36 PDT
Comment/Review:
aweee sasuke really loves him!! itachi is such a fuckin asshole! doing that with sai in him and sasuke's room and then trying to fuck him when he's that angry.
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Reviewed By: maegerakawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 14:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! It was so full of drama that I loved it. Normally I love Itachi and am indifferent towards sasuke. After this chapter, however, I think Itachi is such a damn bastard. Thank you for the new chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: mis luv On: April 04, 2008 08:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic....everytime i open my mail and see an update i scream and put everything down to read!!!! Please let itachi say those 3 little words to this loved brother before sasuke becomes one of those lovers that snap (more than he has in that last chapter) and kills him over heart break....cuz the way he is now i think he well.....LoL
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Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 20:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you dont finish this stroy i will so cry this story is so good i love it and cant wait for more thanks so much for making this stroy keep it up
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Reviewed By: C y a n i d e [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 17:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you sucked me in. I normally don't like fanfictions and I tend to just read original fics, but man am I glad as hell that I found this one. You're really good at developing characters, and I am majorly impressed with everything over all. I am really looking forward to your next update, but take your time so it's just as amazing as everything else has been so far! Keep up the awesome work!!!!!
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Title: 5 stars? pssh! I give you a clear night's skyful!
Reviewed By: ilurvramen_2 On: February 27, 2008 16:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really pleased that you've started another arc...honestly you're writing has gotten even better! I was hesitant to start reading this again but your smut is sooooooo good I couldn't resist a peek and now the plot's got me hooked once again. Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! P.S. the only reason I was hesitant to start reading your fic again is because I'm a softie - character death always irks me, and you did Hinata's so fantastically! You write with such skill; I actually felt depressed after!
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: NxLee On: February 22, 2008 21:52 PST
Comment/Review:
Thank god an update @-@ Well love it as always. I personally don't believe you have a run off tendency but meh, people's opinion. Jeez, Sai's gonna get his ass kicked lol I'm really interested as to how Itachi is going to respond whenever Sasuke confronts him about the obvious implications. xD Have a feeling it's gonna be across the line as "you don't own me otouto" lol I'm guessing is because of their resemblance Itachi needed what he could get. Wonder if Sasuke will rebel >> and I'm sure people complain about Itachi still being mean or something but pfft! He's always hot as a bipolar, overly jealous and homicidal brother >> what more could an angsty teen ask for? lol I nearly choked on the cum shot BTW lol! That sure as hell is embarrassing! I would have died in his position that is just...jeez...lol it spoke for itself really. Really can't wait for more >
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Reviewed By: animegirl41491 On: February 20, 2008 19:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated! YAY! The walk-in part was so funny! You'd think Deidara would know to KNOCK FIRST before barging into anyone's bedroom--considering he was having an affair with his own partner, he of all people should do it automatically. On that note, do none of the bedroom doors have locks, that anyone can walk right in? And worse yet (for Sasuke and Deidara both), I thought partners have to share a room (or is that just me assuming for the sake of many yaoi opportunities? ;) ). *Ahem* All I can say about the Sai part is. . . OUCH. If there's one thing Sai knows how to do, it's push people's buttons. Somehow, he instinctively knows exactly what to say so that he'll get punched in the face, which is not only hilarious, but also a little scary. He's seriously sadistic. I'll ask one last time: is Sasori ever comming back into the story (Yes. I'm obsessed. uu')? I think Deidara's torn between horror, embarassment, and jealousy, seeing all the PDA between Sasuke and Itachi. After all, his own boyfriend's in a coma. This new chapter just made my day--pleeease update again soon!
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