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| "The Never Played Symphonies" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] | Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 19:42 PST
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omg. that was like wow. and a spicy lemon that involved biting orange juice ^_^ update soon!
| Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 19:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was so good! I thought that was great about the "only you" part between Itachi and Sasuke. The nightmare was really good and I couldn't stop laughing about the walk-in scene. I wonder what Itachi did that required punishment? Will that be revealed soon? Sasuke's threats are really something now too. That was harsh! LOL!I can't wait for an update! You're doing great!
| Reviewed By: chibisuke [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 18:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm been reading your fanfic for a while, this is my first time to write a review. first thing i want to say is i love this fanfic, it my favorite itasasu fanfic. i love the relationship between the brothers, i feel sad for sasuke, his brother treats him like that but i like that about itachi i hope you will update soon
| Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 11:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I just... really don't know what to say anymore. Every chapter you write is just as good as the previous one, if not better. You always manage to stun me with your skills and amazing imagination. You have some sort of passion for your work, it seems, and that's actually pretty rare in the world of fanfiction. A lot of people just write something for sheer fun and upload it just to see what happens. Not really caring about what they write, what it means to them and their pride as an author. You certainly seem to care a great lot about your work, the characters and the chapters. I know I've said it before, but the way you manage to describe Sasuke's emotions... it's almost scary, how real you make it feel. I'm one of those people who identify with the character I'm reading about, almost to the extent of being the character. Which is why I always cry when Sasuke's sad, or get furious when someone's (mainly Itachi) is cruel to him. I also feel extremely ashamed when something embarrassing happens to him, so I was blushing like mad when Sasuke accidently shot his load onto Deidara's cloak. Haha. But hey, Dei should know better than to just walk into their room. ^^ I also thought that it was really cute when Itachi made Sasuke some breakfast. And Sasuke could tell he was feeling guilty about something (I'm guessing it was because of Sai, who I'm currently hating, even though I generally like him a lot in the manga)... God, I have evil daydreams about Sasuke "accidently" cutting off Sai's arm or something. Haha. God, I cannot wait to find out how this will affect Sasuke's and Itachi's relationship, cuz I mean... somewhere in my mind, I'm absolutely positive that Itachi is really madly in love with Sasuke, even though he refuses to admit it or even hint it. And hey, Itachi did seem to be ashamed of himself. Not to mention the need he always feel for Sasuke whenever he comes home from a mission. It has mean something, right? I hope Sasuke gets furious and yells at Itachi for cheeting on him. Or that Sasuke turns extremely cold towards everyone. That'd be cool. Gods, update soon! :D As usual; You rule.
| Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 19:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the stories I hope to see an update notice waiting in my inbox everyday for. You do a wonderful job of keeping them in character, having incredibly hot sex scenes AND having a plot as well. Don't know how you manage to keep all that going, but I'm grateful for it. (I am completely addicted to this story and ended up downloading it to my ebook reader so I could read it whenever I wanted.) Itachi is still a bastard and Sauske is the emo king. It's nice to see them begin to change a little, as well as their relationship, as the story progresses. It's also nice that they didn't jump right into the sex, but worked up to it. The anticipation made it better when it happened. I know I'm involved in a story when I start yelling at the characters. When you introduced Sai this time I immediately wanted him dead for being the cause of even more emotional hurt to Sasuke. I'm curious to find out if Itachi was upset because he knew Sauske would find out and be hurt or if it was just because he'd have to deal with the aftermath of being found out. I also loved the line when Deidara kept Sauske away from Itachi and warned him that he'd have things done to him even his perverted self wouldn't enjoy. -and having Dei walk in at just the wrong time! Very cute. Needless to say, I can't wait for the next chapter in the new arc!
| Title: LOV
Reviewed By: Sae yaj On: February 18, 2008 06:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i totally love this fic..i have like fallen in love with itachi and his weirdness...i just hope things work out for lil sasuke in the end....keep up the good work
| Title: Simply Amazing
Reviewed By: C y a n i d e [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 20:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so amazing. And you know, despite the fact that they're "changeing", you've done a bloody wonderful job of keeping them in character, really! So far I am totally in love with this story, and I can't wait and eagerly anticipate your next update!!!!
| Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 10:36 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omfg, I loved this chapter. Loved everything about it... And the time-skipping thing is a brilliant idea. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I kinda hope that Sasuke has gotten as cool and calm as Itachi, yet I hope he remains "Sasuke-ish", ya know. I don't want him to be as cold as Itachi. But hey - you're the author. What you says goes, right? ;) And sure, Itachi seems to be a little nicer than he was at the beginning, but I don't dislike it. I'm actually quite happy that he sometimes shows some signs of affection. He's always acting so cruel and heartless... I was beginning to doubt his love for Sasuke... Does he really love him, or is it just lust? Any way... Loved the chappie, loved the lemon, love the time-skipping idea... Update as soon as possible! :D You seriously rock.
| Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 03:14 PST
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Hmmm, this is one story I hadn't even thought to read for a few months, so I had to reread teh entire thing. And then it reminded me, UCHIHACEST!!!! Okay, incest=wrong in my book, but I have to admit, you did this pretty well, with the character-izations especially. Indeed, I look forward to your next update. Don't keep me hanging, update soon! Ja ne!
| Reviewed By: NejixLee [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 22:11 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always it was loverly >< I still enjoyed the lemon no matter if it wasn't really that long. Yeah Sasuke has been whiny but for a good reason, I felt for him, rather than being annoyed by him. Itachi didnt seem that much softer >> maybe alittle but your right as time passes if Sasuke changes, so should he. Poor Hinata, though >< Sasuke or Itachi better not die >_< besides I'm sure you get it alot. Much Love and cant wait for more
| Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2007 15:48 PST
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i thought what itachi said at the end was soo cute :) and it does seem like sasuke has grown alot. Good for him!
| Title: AHHH
Reviewed By: anh On: December 07, 2007 14:03 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this chapter just like the rest.i just beg u..please let itachi stop being a bitch and admit that he love is sasuke...cuz having lil sasuke try and figure out his crap is killin him(listen to me make him sound like a real person..LoL) i literly screamed when i say the update and had my professor look at me like i lost my mind....update soon and keep up the great wk
| Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2007 14:59 PST
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OH MY GOOODNESS!!! so sad hinata :( this story is amazing. Just reading it i felt so many emtions. pity, anger, sadness. please update soon you are amazing!
| Reviewed By: animegirl41491 On: November 03, 2007 19:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so glad you're still updating! Yay! I'm a writer, too, but I never post on websites because I always, without fail, drop the stories. After all, a lot of dropped stories bugs everyone involved. Is Sasori gonna wake up? I mean, you didn't KILL him, kill him, but still! I don't want him to be taken out of the story! *cries* I was miserable when he got killed off in the manga, and you got me reattached to him now, so don't just make him die like that! Besides, Deidara turned into a suicidal mope when he died, and that's the worst! *Sighs* Man, even if he DOES wake up, will he even still like Sasuke? If someone betrayed ME like that, I sure as hell wouldn't still like THEM.
| Title: omg!
Reviewed By: Nejui On: October 31, 2007 20:17 PDT
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Poor Hinata ><
Suprisingly i don't feel crazily bad but still. Yeah your style has changed abit I can tell >< damn I was hoping for some *ahem* you know~ But you did say it was all action so atleast it was fair. Loved it, so sad but very enthralling and for god f#*&ing sake don't take months to update >
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