| "The Never Played Symphonies" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: CC On: June 07, 2007 06:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you really like writing the fluffiness in this story (and I do agree that poor sasuke does need some affection from his brother)I have an idea for what you could do for your next chapter, maybe while Sasori is training Sasuke with his puppets one of them malfunctions or something and Sasuke gets struck with a needle, I dont know if you've watched Naruto Shippuden Kankurou (sp?) gets struck and it nearly killed him if it wasnt for sakura, anyway I love your story and i think your doing a great job with it
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2007 06:10 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely loved it! ^^ You're a great fluff-writer, and it was about time. Itachi was almost a little bit too cold... But I love him for that as well. Keep up wtih the fab work! *chu*
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Reviewed By: siya On: June 05, 2007 20:56 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
first of all let me say..dont listen to that idiot that wrote that review..the only advice i think u should take from him is to try and write an original...i think u would do good(just finish this 1 first LoL Love this chapter...good to see Sasuke get some love....
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Title: AMAZING.
Reviewed By: C y a n i d e [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 15:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Creepy stalker I am, I've been checking back every so often to see if you've updated.I was so excited today when I found out you had xD. I really REALLY like this story, and hope that you update soon! And by the way, that persons review was stupid and untrue!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 13:44 PDT
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Who cares what that person thinks. If their opinon was that important then they would have signed a name. I like your stories just fine the way they are. Thanks for the update and can't wait for more. Keep up the GREAT job you are doing now.
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Title: love it
Reviewed By: OhMy...Girl On: May 19, 2007 08:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i soo love the work u do..i have been tring to find a good fic for a while now and i just love this one.please update soon.. poor sasuke u portray him in a totaly different light. showing that he isnt the cool collected one when u really get down to what makes him tick...and itachi....so sick yet so sexy!!! cant blame lil Sasuke for being his whore now can u???lol anyway love ur work..keep it up...
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Title: I fucking love you. xD
Reviewed By: C y a n i d e [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 13:42 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omgomgomg. I am one of the biggest Uchihacest whores there is, and I have been LOOKING for a good Itachi/Sasuke story. I'm amazed by your writing abilities, and how to can keep them in character. I always have issues with that,so I try and stick with originals. I really really reaaallly LOVE THIS so far!! I can't wait to see what else you have in store for the two. Keep up the good work, and and and you're fucking amazing. xD
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Reviewed By: nolongerfunctioning [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 08:28 PDT
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OMIGOD!!! I love it. I can't wait to read more :)
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Title: Please let there be love
Reviewed By: sienta On: May 07, 2007 11:40 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best Uchiha-incest story I have ever read! I love the details and flashbacks! Sasuke has always been in love with his older brother and I believe vice-versa. Regardless of what Itachi says, he is totally obsessively, possessively in love with his younger brother. Everytime Sasuke says" I hate you", I think he is actually saying"I love you". In the first chapter, I actually believe, that Itachi wants Sasuke to love him more. Through this whole story so far, it seems that Itachi is waiting and wanting to hear those three words from Sasuke. I think, so he will fill it's okay to say them too. Also, though I love how jealous and possessive they are to each other, I feel that is an excellent characterization! As far as, Sasuke being weak, he is'nt weak at all. From reading the story, personally, they both give each other pure hell LOL Sasuke has such a temper and mouth on him! Part of the reason why his loves him so much:) I really hope this story does not end like so many others. Where Sasuke ends up with Naruto, or him or his brother end up dead! I really hope this story finally gives them the ending the so really need and deserve. To finally be together again, because that is the only way could be happy. I truly praying for it:)
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Reviewed By: ielenia [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 19:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay i'm so glad you finally updated. CH 10 was so awesome! I can't wait to see what happens to Sasori and Sasuke. Also nice job at the Chidori upgrade.
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Reviewed By: Shiwasuda [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2007 17:37 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*strokes ego* It was awesome. I like how you have the training with Sasori and a new technique with Chidori - that was really cool. And the little bit about how he touches his forehead when he's thinking about Itachi, that was a nice touch. Really cute. And their little reunion. Poor little Sasuke finds out about his brother cheating on him. (Gee... that sounds so odd... >_
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2007 19:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THANK YOU FOR UPSDATING! I can't wait for the next one. This was certainly surprising! Can't wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2007 12:09 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this! I can't wait to read more! I hope you write another one soon. Please hurry!
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Reviewed By: HeeroLover2007 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2007 06:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it!!
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Reviewed By: NejixLee [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2007 02:37 PDT
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A yeah poor gaara all he wants is love ><
I love your chappy, that is one awesome super power lol Itachi really seemed so vulnerable, all nice and stuff. HAH! Sasuke left him, but he's gonna pay. Poor Sasuke Itachi just gets meaner and meaner, how embarrasing to be caught and seen being fucked by his older brother. Well awesome chappy, can't for the next one
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