| "The Never Played Symphonies" Reviews/Comments [ 97 ] |
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 15:36 PDT
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aweee sasuke really loves him!! itachi is such a fuckin asshole! doing that with sai in him and sasuke's room and then trying to fuck him when he's that angry.
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Reviewed By: maegerakawaii [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2008 14:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! It was so full of drama that I loved it. Normally I love Itachi and am indifferent towards sasuke. After this chapter, however, I think Itachi is such a damn bastard. Thank you for the new chapter. Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: mis luv On: April 04, 2008 08:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic....everytime i open my mail and see an update i scream and put everything down to read!!!! Please let itachi say those 3 little words to this loved brother before sasuke becomes one of those lovers that snap (more than he has in that last chapter) and kills him over heart break....cuz the way he is now i think he well.....LoL
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Reviewed By: Cat Happy [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 20:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
if you dont finish this stroy i will so cry this story is so good i love it and cant wait for more thanks so much for making this stroy keep it up
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Reviewed By: C y a n i d e [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 17:29 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you sucked me in. I normally don't like fanfictions and I tend to just read original fics, but man am I glad as hell that I found this one. You're really good at developing characters, and I am majorly impressed with everything over all. I am really looking forward to your next update, but take your time so it's just as amazing as everything else has been so far! Keep up the awesome work!!!!!
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Title: 5 stars? pssh! I give you a clear night's skyful!
Reviewed By: ilurvramen_2 On: February 27, 2008 16:42 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really pleased that you've started another arc...honestly you're writing has gotten even better! I was hesitant to start reading this again but your smut is sooooooo good I couldn't resist a peek and now the plot's got me hooked once again. Keep it up! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! P.S. the only reason I was hesitant to start reading your fic again is because I'm a softie - character death always irks me, and you did Hinata's so fantastically! You write with such skill; I actually felt depressed after!
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Title: awesome!
Reviewed By: NxLee On: February 22, 2008 21:52 PST
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Thank god an update @-@ Well love it as always. I personally don't believe you have a run off tendency but meh, people's opinion. Jeez, Sai's gonna get his ass kicked lol I'm really interested as to how Itachi is going to respond whenever Sasuke confronts him about the obvious implications. xD Have a feeling it's gonna be across the line as "you don't own me otouto" lol I'm guessing is because of their resemblance Itachi needed what he could get. Wonder if Sasuke will rebel >> and I'm sure people complain about Itachi still being mean or something but pfft! He's always hot as a bipolar, overly jealous and homicidal brother >> what more could an angsty teen ask for? lol I nearly choked on the cum shot BTW lol! That sure as hell is embarrassing! I would have died in his position that is just...jeez...lol it spoke for itself really. Really can't wait for more >
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Reviewed By: animegirl41491 On: February 20, 2008 19:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You updated! YAY! The walk-in part was so funny! You'd think Deidara would know to KNOCK FIRST before barging into anyone's bedroom--considering he was having an affair with his own partner, he of all people should do it automatically. On that note, do none of the bedroom doors have locks, that anyone can walk right in? And worse yet (for Sasuke and Deidara both), I thought partners have to share a room (or is that just me assuming for the sake of many yaoi opportunities? ;) ). *Ahem* All I can say about the Sai part is. . . OUCH. If there's one thing Sai knows how to do, it's push people's buttons. Somehow, he instinctively knows exactly what to say so that he'll get punched in the face, which is not only hilarious, but also a little scary. He's seriously sadistic. I'll ask one last time: is Sasori ever comming back into the story (Yes. I'm obsessed. uu')? I think Deidara's torn between horror, embarassment, and jealousy, seeing all the PDA between Sasuke and Itachi. After all, his own boyfriend's in a coma. This new chapter just made my day--pleeease update again soon!
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Reviewed By: sesshys numba1 gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 19:42 PST
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omg. that was like wow. and a spicy lemon that involved biting orange juice ^_^ update soon!
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Reviewed By: Star Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 19:28 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was so good! I thought that was great about the "only you" part between Itachi and Sasuke. The nightmare was really good and I couldn't stop laughing about the walk-in scene. I wonder what Itachi did that required punishment? Will that be revealed soon? Sasuke's threats are really something now too. That was harsh! LOL!I can't wait for an update! You're doing great!
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Reviewed By: chibisuke [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 18:37 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i'm been reading your fanfic for a while, this is my first time to write a review. first thing i want to say is i love this fanfic, it my favorite itasasu fanfic. i love the relationship between the brothers, i feel sad for sasuke, his brother treats him like that but i like that about itachi i hope you will update soon
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Reviewed By: Ciiah-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 11:53 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow... I just... really don't know what to say anymore. Every chapter you write is just as good as the previous one, if not better. You always manage to stun me with your skills and amazing imagination. You have some sort of passion for your work, it seems, and that's actually pretty rare in the world of fanfiction. A lot of people just write something for sheer fun and upload it just to see what happens. Not really caring about what they write, what it means to them and their pride as an author. You certainly seem to care a great lot about your work, the characters and the chapters. I know I've said it before, but the way you manage to describe Sasuke's emotions... it's almost scary, how real you make it feel. I'm one of those people who identify with the character I'm reading about, almost to the extent of being the character. Which is why I always cry when Sasuke's sad, or get furious when someone's (mainly Itachi) is cruel to him. I also feel extremely ashamed when something embarrassing happens to him, so I was blushing like mad when Sasuke accidently shot his load onto Deidara's cloak. Haha. But hey, Dei should know better than to just walk into their room. ^^ I also thought that it was really cute when Itachi made Sasuke some breakfast. And Sasuke could tell he was feeling guilty about something (I'm guessing it was because of Sai, who I'm currently hating, even though I generally like him a lot in the manga)... God, I have evil daydreams about Sasuke "accidently" cutting off Sai's arm or something. Haha. God, I cannot wait to find out how this will affect Sasuke's and Itachi's relationship, cuz I mean... somewhere in my mind, I'm absolutely positive that Itachi is really madly in love with Sasuke, even though he refuses to admit it or even hint it. And hey, Itachi did seem to be ashamed of himself. Not to mention the need he always feel for Sasuke whenever he comes home from a mission. It has mean something, right? I hope Sasuke gets furious and yells at Itachi for cheeting on him. Or that Sasuke turns extremely cold towards everyone. That'd be cool. Gods, update soon! :D As usual; You rule.
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Reviewed By: Lirilith [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 19:23 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of the stories I hope to see an update notice waiting in my inbox everyday for. You do a wonderful job of keeping them in character, having incredibly hot sex scenes AND having a plot as well. Don't know how you manage to keep all that going, but I'm grateful for it. (I am completely addicted to this story and ended up downloading it to my ebook reader so I could read it whenever I wanted.) Itachi is still a bastard and Sauske is the emo king. It's nice to see them begin to change a little, as well as their relationship, as the story progresses. It's also nice that they didn't jump right into the sex, but worked up to it. The anticipation made it better when it happened. I know I'm involved in a story when I start yelling at the characters. When you introduced Sai this time I immediately wanted him dead for being the cause of even more emotional hurt to Sasuke. I'm curious to find out if Itachi was upset because he knew Sauske would find out and be hurt or if it was just because he'd have to deal with the aftermath of being found out. I also loved the line when Deidara kept Sauske away from Itachi and warned him that he'd have things done to him even his perverted self wouldn't enjoy. -and having Dei walk in at just the wrong time! Very cute. Needless to say, I can't wait for the next chapter in the new arc!
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Title: LOV
Reviewed By: Sae yaj On: February 18, 2008 06:44 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i totally love this fic..i have like fallen in love with itachi and his weirdness...i just hope things work out for lil sasuke in the end....keep up the good work
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Title: Simply Amazing
Reviewed By: C y a n i d e [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2008 20:32 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so amazing. And you know, despite the fact that they're "changeing", you've done a bloody wonderful job of keeping them in character, really! So far I am totally in love with this story, and I can't wait and eagerly anticipate your next update!!!!
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