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Title: Eh..
Reviewed By: princesssirenity2000 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 17:28 CST
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Uhm,this chapter doesn't connect with the previous chapter.... why would kagome go around and act all defensive(yelling at inuyasha) if she didn't deny sesshomaru? I know she would have been mad at inuyasha for making sound as if she were a slut.....but why would she deny being w/ sesshy?
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Reviewed By: inuluver4everhotmailcom [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
im going to have to guess that the only way for that to be broken is for them to actualy mate or for kagome to no longer want seshourmaur( gods that is so spelt worng!) to be her protector.... but could you be just a bit quicker with the updates... no one likes wating to see whats next?!
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Reviewed By: kiraka69 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 09:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEKKK!!! another awesome chapter from my fav author!!!.....what's gonna happen?!?!?!....I can't wait
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Reviewed By: Ethril Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2008 17:46 CST
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...you left it there? I must have more, Ethril Dragon commands you write more!
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Reviewed By: Nyuka [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 17:35 CST
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EEEEEEeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....oh my gosh.....eeeeeeeeeeeeeeee......sorry sorry....*breath deaply* that was crazy XD....I just started reading this and I got really in to the story too *pout* but no more chapters T_T.......please update soon I want to see the romance unfold and I want to see what the Tomato (aka Kagome) is going to do about all that happened as well can't wait.....XD.................................Meow...update soon.....Nyuka
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 21:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i worship you!!! dude that sooooo totally rocked!!!please up date soon!! ja!
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL I love this please hurry up and update soon please I can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Dragon Dagger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2007 23:52 CST
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ROFLMAO! OMG who gave you the ideas for these pranks! they're priceless!! The way you wrote them out and the reactions was great. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2007 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this pink hair!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol LOL please I can't wait please updtae soon.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 22:45 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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*nearly giggles to death* omg!!! thats sooo cool!!! please up date soon!
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Reviewed By: kiraka69 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2007 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEEEEEEEEKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!! omg!!! that was soooo hilarious!!!!plz update soon i can't wait to see what happens next!!!....and will there be lemons later???...omg!!! i can't wait fore the next one!!!....at least ur story is worth the wait(but it's still hard to wait)
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 22:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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YOU'RE SOOOO COOL!!!!!! PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!! ja
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Reviewed By: FxB [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 19:11 CDT
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lol can you have them push jaken off a cliff???? just high enough so he doesn't die but just on the brink of it??? please? o and Kags can't heal him/her/it.
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Reviewed By: pandora-of-the-south [MediaMiner Member] On: October 11, 2007 14:13 CDT
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It would be interesting if you tried to get Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru at the same time by telling Inu that Kag is leaving him for Sess and then she declares that he is HER SESSHOUMARU LOL as for Jaken *he is the easiest to torture!!* clueless when it comes to the other guy though. Good story so far and can't wait for the revenge to continue!!!!
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Reviewed By: inuyasha lov3r [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2007 12:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I love how they are all fighting over Kagome! It's just so sweet! I just wish Sesshomaru would finally do something instead of being such a jerk and not listening to his feelings! Arguh I hate guys like that! Oh well this is gonna be a Sesshomaru and Kagome pairing right??? Please tell me there is gonna be lemons in this story! Anyway keep up the good work and Please update soon! I'm dying to read the rest of the story! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!
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