| "Explosive Chemistry" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Reviewed By: Adorkablebanana On: February 24, 2007 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoot! This chapter is off the hook.
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Reviewed By: Seiteki_Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 10:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOL...thats just priceless. poor kagome having to explain sex to innocent little yukina.
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Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 05:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love how your write when you cAN PLEASE UPDATE.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 01:26 CST
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Nice ending! Loved the humor in it. Sorry to hear about your medical issues -- I wish you all the best.
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Title: Ch. 3
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 22:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome end, loved it a lot, and i cried about three tyms reading the thing over again... I'm such a cry baby sometyms! XP Hope 2 read more of your awesome stories! :D
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Reviewed By: _Sorami_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked it!! thanks for finishing it...^^ i like the ending, too. hope you get to feeling better! -Celeste
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Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 20:05 CST
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Brava, brava!
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Reviewed By: Kawaii-KeKe-Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 19:10 CST
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Yay! An update! Fab as always, and equally delish! Hope you're feeling better soon! You have all our support and take your own time!!! xxxx
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Reviewed By: Takhisiss (nsi) On: February 23, 2007 18:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww, thank you *hugs*, it's a pleasure to help. I like how you wrote this chapter and how you worked out the differences between Hiei and Kags. LOL, it would have been interesting to see Kag's explanation but I also love the place you chose to end it. As far as the sounds go and another reviewers remarks... I at least caught the part in the story where sound made it thru when the wards were removed off the door and not before. Overall great job :)
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Reviewed By: bzuh On: February 23, 2007 18:48 CST
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Wait...the rest of the group could hear Hiei and Kagome through the walls in chapter 3, but in chapter 2, you state that Genkai's ward doesn't allow sound through.
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2007 17:53 CST
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HAHAHAHA! That was funny! Iwas kida hoping that Kagome would stay mad at Hiei for a while little longer, but then I remembered that this is a short story. You've written it very well! Happy Writings!
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Reviewed By: _Sorami_ [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2007 21:13 CST
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kawaii desu!! please update soon! ~Celeste
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Title: reimei-kage (nsi)
Reviewed By: reimei-kage [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2007 18:34 CST
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Ahhhhh! Update! Please, please, please, please, PLEASE update! Too long have I been waiting to see the exciting conclusion to this story. Too long have I been wondering what the hell is going to happen! Don't keep me in the dark any longer! *melodramatically passes out*
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2007 00:26 CST
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Just going through some of my favorite stories, and couldn't resist another read-through of this one. I have to confess, I'm hoping you start out the new year with a fantastic ending for this fic! Hope the new year treats you well!
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Reviewed By: jj On: December 07, 2006 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GO!GO!GO!GO!!! Write more and dont let your adoring fans down!!!!! Im gonna leave a comment for every new chapter you create! your a wonderful artist. Can you image your painting with words? hard to believe to me!
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