| "Explosive Chemistry" Reviews/Comments [ 76 ] |
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Title: Explosive Chemistry
Reviewed By: Scarlet Butterfly On: March 27, 2008 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't tell you how many times I laughed reading this. It was too funny. I was quite surprised myself that Kurama, Kurama of all people, also accused her of having sex with the two guys from the club. I mean really, I'd have thought he knew her better than that but obviously not. It was quite amusing with how Kagome handled the guy though. Of course what was even funnier was the questions Yukina posed at then end. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what Hiei does to the others and how Kagome explains sex to Yukina. Hilarious. The part when Hiei thought of Kazuma with Yukina was bonus, too funny.
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Reviewed By: sesshomari [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 12:01 CST
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Hey nice story! I never even thought that Hiei and Kagome were possible, but you seem to make it work! Anyways update as soon as possible! ~!*sesshomari*!~
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Reviewed By: sesshomari [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 11:59 CST
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Hey nice story! I never really thought Hiei and Kagome was even possible, but you seem to make it work out! Anyways update as soon as possible! ~!*sesshomari*!~
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Reviewed By: crazy-punk-gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 20:25 CST
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Nicely done as always. I hope your having a better time with these stories then I am having. Anyway, you've updated and you brought everything to the table which is good. I hope you have a a nice day! See ya later!
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Reviewed By: animeangel47 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 09:48 CST
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this is great
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Title: Marvelous!
Reviewed By: Pretty in Pink [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 21:57 CST
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Hahahaha I love the way you ended this! Very clever! Simply marvelous!
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: Pretty in Pink [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 21:42 CST
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Oh, my. Hiei certainly screwed himself over on that one, didn't he? But I like to see a guilty Hiei. -shrugs- Maybe I'm just sick that way. Poor Kagome. What a romantic way to lose your virginity. Hehe
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Title: Chapter 1
Reviewed By: Pretty in Pink [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sleeping alone in a tree getting friendly with his hand. -winces- That was a low blow. Hehe Liking Hiei's irritation with the whole situation. It's cute and ever-so-telling.
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Reviewed By: tsukiko786 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2007 03:07 CDT
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Lol, the gods seriously must be laughing at her. but please update soon and good luck w/your medical issues!
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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2007 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Interesting. UPdate soon. Can't wait to see what Hiei does and if Kagome actually explains to Yukina.
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Title: lol
Reviewed By: Seciley2k On: March 02, 2007 17:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE love this chapter. i espacially love the way it ended i was lmao. any plz continue I wanna know how kagi is going to explian this to yukina
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Title: yays!!!!
Reviewed By: Mysterious_Tears [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 04:53 CST
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WOW... this chapter was great!!! it was sooo angsty and full of drama at the begining but then it changed towards the end.. and i cant find any better word then "FUNNY" it made me laugh the whole time!!! Yukina was sooooo cute and poor Kagome.. o well it always seems that she gets stuck with the .. interesting jobs ;) o well keep up the good work!!! ~JaNe~ Mysterious_Tears
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Reviewed By: Angoli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2007 03:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Exellent, as always:) great job!
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Reviewed By: Snow Ahriman On: February 25, 2007 21:55 CST
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I started this fic on another site and found it by chance here. I have to say I love this pairing and even if it have a few rough spots this was a really good fic. I think teaching Yukina sex-ed would be a really hard thing for anyone, seeing as she's a-sexial.
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Reviewed By: anonymous78 On: February 25, 2007 17:07 CST
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Yay!!! Another master piece!!
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