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 Title: Continue
Reviewed By: Vampire Kitty  On: December 06, 2006 15:07 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I realy enjoy this fic PLEASE CONTINUE IT!!!!!
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 30, 2006 01:29 CST
Comment/Review:
Had to read it all again. (And again -- a few times.) LOVE IT! This is one of my all-time favorite shorts. Can't wait for the last chapter! Just have to comment on Hiei's assertion there at the end -- "You are mine." Such a satisfying little statement. When it comes to great Hiei/Kagome fics and my favorite authors, YOU are definitely one of mine.
 Reviewed By: airwalk55 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 30, 2006 00:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Ahhh kawaii! I love it. Perfect atmospheric setting. ^-^
 Title: ...
Reviewed By: PureMiko_Kagome69ner *offline*  On: November 28, 2006 11:03 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
... Wow. Please hurry up and update because I want the lemon!!!! PLEASE!!!
 Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 28, 2006 00:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Cant wait to read the rest!!! Lovin it!!!! Update soon!!!!!
 Reviewed By: somethingelse2  On: November 26, 2006 22:33 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
smouldering. Like your fic.
 Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 26, 2006 19:10 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Christmas came early! Yay --thanks! Gotta comment: "While he hadn't outright told the man to drag Kagome back by the hair,... Hiei had thought the man could read between the lines." CLASSIC! Gee, Kurama was so quick to condemn her. At first glance, I can see it, but he didn't sense she was lying and she DID tell him 2 drunk guys tried to have a Kagome sandwich on the dance floor. He didn't believe they would drop their pants there,huh? But, how normal is it for there to be semen stains on the OUTSIDE of a dress? (Miss Lewinsky aside.) Seems like Kurama was operating on a bit of jealousy himself, perhaps. I don't think Kagome should be so forgiving of him OR Hiei for a while. Makes me wonder how long she's known them -- how long has she been training at Genkai's? How did they meet, etc? They knew she was a virgin when she left, right? And Kurama at least knew she was crazy about Hiei. Shows a real lack of trust and friendship. Her vehement denial and disheveled appearance should have made him question what might have happened. Leaving that part for now, let's swing over to the deflowering: she should have REALLY been a lot more angry at his actions. Even if he was just going to "take advantage of what she offered," (damn towel!), he didn't bother to see if she was aroused enough to enter. Again: even if he still thought she'd been with 2 guys, he KNEW she had been innocent just earlier that evening. And if he was looking to actually cause her pain, well, he's guilty of a quite heinous act,ne? How could she let it go so easily? He took her virginity rather brutally. I would have thought she would run to the door and screamed bloody murder -- even if she couldn't get out, someone would eventually SEE her, right? He should have had to coax her back, apologising profusely all the way. And, afterwards, he was "no longer certain" SHE had been the one to instigate what happened at the club? Hoo boy! THAT shouldn't matter at all. Oh, this is SUCH a beautiful set-up! Now she knows he's been "stalking" her, but thinks he must have been really disgusted with the thought of being with her to have acted the way he has. I'm hoping for a good heart-to-heart talk revealing why they have been acting and feeling the way they have towards each other. Can't wait to find out where Yusuke and Keiko were -- what happened with Daichi. I know it's going to be good! When they get back, depending on what all they know went on, might they not demand Genkai take the wards off to make sure Kagome is okay? You know, the old broad was really taking a chance there -- Hiei COULD have killed her or she COULD have purified him. So, they've come to an understanding, huh? I think Hiei still has a lot of making up to her to do. Looking forward to the lemon, (of course!), but she should be very wary of him. (Maybe she'll just think he's totally unskilled. Ha!) Seriously, she should have some second thoughts about wanting that kind of relationship with someone so brutal. Oh, there's still SO MUCH great story to come in that last chapter, and I know you're going to do it justice! I can't wait! I can't wait! When a story generates this many thoughts, feelings, comments on my part, you KNOW it's GOOD! I'm just loving it!
 Reviewed By: bloodbunny [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 26, 2006 17:03 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this story! Please update soon!
 Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 26, 2006 07:00 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
wow I can't wait for the next chapter. *S*
 Reviewed By: Kawaii-Keke-Chan(NLI)  On: November 26, 2006 06:44 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh wow! Even better than the first chappy, and i didn't think that was possible! That was incredibly hot, and i totally love the interaction between Kagome and Hiei! You've portrayed them both so well!!
 Reviewed By: Book Butterfly [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 26, 2006 02:45 CST
Comment/Review:
update! please!
 Reviewed By: KagHieiLuver  On: November 26, 2006 02:19 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awesome i luv this story!!!!!!!!
 Title: Ch. 2
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 26, 2006 01:03 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
We needs it! My precious! *evil cackle* (sorry, watched LotR b/4 reading this) *blush* Anyway, now that THAT'S out of my system, i am totally sycked (sp?) 4 the next chapter! ^_^ It's gonna be awesome! *dances* We needs it! We wants it! My precious chapter!
 Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 26, 2006 00:37 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Yay! New Chapter! I'm so happy! I love this story. And see Hiei learned his lesson have all the facts before jumping to a conclusion. I can't wait to read more please Update Soon!
 Reviewed By: astcat [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 25, 2006 22:35 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love this story. You have to continue it. thank you in advance. I can't wait until everything gets straightened out and Hiei and Kagome get together better. Bye!
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