| "Choices, Choices..." Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Reviewed By: owen765 On: October 21, 2008 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOve the story and can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work and can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Jimmy76 On: October 20, 2008 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is wondeful with a good plot and character development and build up to future ideas. So keep the good work up and update sooner then later because I dying to read more soon please.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2008 15:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... interesting that inuyasha has been doing things to himself lately - the tattoo, piercing and the haircut... why though?... seems that kohaku & rin are getting along... glad that he finally told kagome what he is... wonder what kagome's reaction will be... will inuyasha tell kagome that sesshoumaru is his half-brother too?... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Timmy77 On: September 07, 2008 02:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful job and am on the edge of my seat waiting on more. Please hurry.
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Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2008 21:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GREAT STORY! I'm not sure If I want Kagome to end up with InuYasha, or Sesshoumaru... II already think Kouga is out of the running... (too Clingy...)
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Reviewed By: Michael22 On: August 14, 2008 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great writing and love the story and am looking forward to reading more soon hopefully.
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Reviewed By: sammy56 On: August 02, 2008 16:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love it can't wait for more. Grerat job.
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Reviewed By: MaraJade116 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 21:06 CDT
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Inuyasha, you are just too much! ^_^ I love that he ended up confessing right there on stage (even if it was coerced, and even if she wasn't there to hear it!) It was still the cutest thing ever. Plus, I have a feeling it won't stay a secret forever :9 I can absolutely picture him in that shirt I was actually kinda bummed that it got ruined, lol. Oh, and he even fell asleep in her bed
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: June 26, 2008 23:47 CDT
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You are a goddess! I humbly fall upon my knees and beseech thee to update as soon as goddessy possible! I thought that I would let you know that I enjoyed your most recent updates. Could you tell? hehe... anywho, Sesshoumaru being afraid of flying and showing emotion too was a nice touch from his normal stoic self. Also, I liked the fact that Sesshoumaru may have Inuyasha teach Kagome how to surf. Talk about an awkward situation, but it has to be coming up in the future sometime. I had to chuckle that they flew half the way around the world so Sesshoumaru could out do his brother, but again he is a male. In addition I really enjoyed the 'intermission' chapter about the gig. I really liked how the details blended together. oh, I almost forgot I will be passing through your fair city on route to a conference this week and guess what.....I'm going to Sea World!! hahaha As a reminder you are fabulous writer and thank you, thank you for the stories!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 26, 2008 03:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
nice chapter... seems that inuyasha is quite busy with his band... will kagome find out that inuyasha wrote a song about her... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: catbaker [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2008 02:10 CDT
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HOT!!! just completed a marathon read of this delicious fic....I'm so hooked it borders on pathetic....(I whimpered when I got to the end of the latest chapter) I do understand that updates take time (My own fic Darkness before dawn has taken over my brain and released a hoard of rapidly breeding rambunctious plot bunnies!) but I eagerly await the next chapters...Just for the record I'm rooting for Inuyasha...while I like a good Sessh/kag fic, you have wrapped Inuyasha so intricately into Kagome's heart that I can't help but fervently hope he gets the girl! The poor guy has so many wounds, and I honestly feel in this fic that he needs her much more than sesshy....You have written each of these "relationships" so well that I continually find myself second guessing who she will choose! Great work!
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Reviewed By: Sam-34 On: June 25, 2008 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story because it's well written and has good details and characters feel real. Great job looking fprward to more.
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Title: Lovvette!
Reviewed By: Keetonie [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 22:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First and foremost I love the scene with Sesshy and the plane haha Classic!! He's doing exactly what I would do only I'm more cling to the seat for dear life type… T^T Then after getting off the pane I would say… "Never……again…..T^T"
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Title: Miu, review!
Reviewed By: Quimera-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 16:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
Another good chapter yaaaay xD i was missing to read this story. Oh, i can't even decide witch vote i may give: Sesshomaru or Inuyasha.....hmmmmm.... Maru is fluffy and does everything for her, but Inu is so much more caring, lovely and simple :7 Oh well, i hope that you can impress us with a good "Choice" LOLOL The detail of the hotel and surroundings was so outstanding! I loved every description ^____^ And the little detail of Kagome remembering his marks by the colour of the bed, was a very nice touch. I must confess though, that I was expecting a very romantic chapter, but the loving moments that they had, were thrilling too. It was also very interesting to know what Inuyasha really does for a living xD Those kids were so asking to be sketched….if the description was a little more elaborate I would consider on doing some illustrative work for your fic ;3 just for pure pleasure. And please! When will Inu tell her??? He must confess to her that he is hanyou…*snif* I so want to see her reaction, and for him to feel much more at ease around her. She won't surely question his half demonic being, and will love him for who he is. Well, once again I did a huge review xD I gotta practice on writing less, eheh. Hope to see much much more form you, also on That's the Way Love Goes! I miss the puppy attitude of our favourite youkai ^.^ Best wishes, Quimera-chan ;3
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Reviewed By: crystal strawberry On: June 24, 2008 12:39 CDT
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Interesting chapter. Sesshoumaru may be showering Kagome with extravagance, but I don't see them ending up together. Kagome seems to connect with Inuyasha at a deeper level.
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