| "Choices, Choices..." Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: June 24, 2008 07:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... seems that sesshoumaru is trying to gain kagome's favor... and inuyasha is keeping himself busy... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Dj4056 On: April 20, 2008 01:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is fantasnic so far and can't wait to read more. The story itself and the writing are wonderful. Looking forward to see what is on tap to happen next. Believe that Yash and Kagome are the most compatible but well see. So please update soon I don't like the supense.
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Title: Ch. 13
Reviewed By: MaraJade116 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2008 09:00 CDT
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Ahaha, oh I love Sango as Inuyasha's secret advocate. Especially all her inner comments about Sessh - like when she heard the ringtone "Oh, Kagome. You don't know just how toxic he is…" Ah, I lol'd! ^_^ I love Inuyasha's dilemma over Kagome not accepting him - it's very true to the character, even though it breaks my heart. And Kagome sobbing herself to sleep also broke my heart, but I'm grateful that she didn't remember it in the morning. Bad Inu! Stop making Kagome cry!! And one of them (Sessh or Inu, I don't care which!) had better rescue her from this bad idea about getting a job at the strip joint. As Hideki once taught Chi - "Get good job - shady job bad!!" Haha, and yes boyshorts are the best invention in the world of underwear IMHO. *might also be wearing some now, lol, tmi*
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: April 18, 2008 23:09 CDT
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Well hello again and thank you for the awesome update! I had to laugh at parts of this chapter because Kagome and I have a few of things in common now. I don't get hangovers at all, which I attribute to genetics. My friends used to think that I was crazy until we went camping a few times and they realized that not only could I drink like a fish (RUM=YUM), but I got up before them all and would make them breakfast. I am getting the hint that you are going to have Inuyasha move in with Kagome and he will never have the gumption to tell her the truth about him or Kikyo until it is to late. Its a bummer I think that they make a cute couple. As I have mentioned in the past this is your story so you can take it what ever direction you want, but please don't make Kouga out to be a total jerk. I am a Kouga fan as I have mentioned before and it seems that every fic that I have read lately makes him out to be either a huge, crazy jackass or a rapist. I understand that people may naturally fear wolves, but still come on. I would like to thank you again for the great update!
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Reviewed By: Michael22 On: April 18, 2008 17:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story and it's one of the best that I have read. The writing is great and the plot is too. Kagome and Inyuasha should be the couple since they seem to have the most in common.Kouga not right and Shess is just lust i think. Can't wait to read more soon.
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Title: Love it!!!
Reviewed By: Keetonie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Thwack's Miroku*" hehehehe... sorry...that was funny. Any who I love it especially the end!!! XD please continue!!!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 04:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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also wondering what inuyasha's "project" is?... i have a hunch but not quite sure it's correct... will have to wait and see for the coming chapters... update soon... please and thank you!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2008 04:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... about your poll: although i don't mind a sesshoumaru/kagome pairing but i like an inuyasha/kagome pairing more... so a vote for inuyasha/kagome please... (sorry but not familiar with deviantart)... felt bad for inuyasha he was trying to tell kagome about his past but they were interrupted... wonder how things will turn out... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2008 12:35 CDT
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Another glorious chapter! I really like how you are bringing out Inuyasha's personality, and the way you are developing and deepening each of the guys' relationships with Kagome. I also appreciate the fact that you are careful to include both positive and negative aspects about each guy. It makes for a very intriguing story!
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Title: Ch. 12
Reviewed By: MaraJade116 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2008 21:56 CDT
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So I love that they've got the same underlying tension going on as in the original - it makes them feel just like the characters - although I'm going to vote for more lemon after this, these two need to get it together! Ah, and human!inuyahsa ftw!! I can't believe I didn't pick up on it right away since I adore human!inu... though I always feel guilty about it since I don't want to be like Kikyo, lol. Of course, huamn!inu is only so sexy b/c he is sexy hanyou Inuyasha the rest of the time. I loved when they have the same Kouga argument they always have - that was infinitely cute ^_^ Plus when she's talking with Sessh and on the phone with Inuyasha at the same time was hilarious. I'm glad Sessh knows he's not the only youkai on the block... otherwise he would get [even more] conceited. On a completely unrelated note I love that Kagome wears boyshorts... I think they're the greatest underwear invention in a long time. I'm pretty sure I put Haruhi (Suzumiya) in them in one of my stories, lol. Yes, totally unrelated, but I warned you :)
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Title: Ch. 11
Reviewed By: MaraJade116 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 18:12 CDT
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Ah, I know it's great writing when I completely enjoy a chapter and its totally lemon-less, lol. This chapter was so much fun to read! Sesshomaru's attempt at making coffee was hilarious - "He had failed hard." I literally laughed out loud at that point. Although I am glad to see Inuyasha back in the picture, after that last chapter I had momentarily forgotten that there were other guys in this story, lol. And that's saying something as a (former) staunch Inu-Kags shipper. I'm definitely being converted ^_^ Inuyasha's reaction to finding out about the sleepover was everything I could have hoped for and more: "sex. Lots of it. And with his brother." Hahaha, ah, I'm so glad he was able to tell that there was "lots" - and their fight was great - especially Inuyasha out in just his boxers. And I laughed at Miroku's arousal and immediate disappointment when there wasn't a catfight. Keep dreaming, monk. ^_^
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Title: Ch. 10
Reviewed By: MaraJade116 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2008 09:48 CDT
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Oh, that was so delicious - Kagome was so cute trying to be dominant against Sesshomaru of all people, lol. Though it was nice to see her finally get one up on him (so to speak) in the shower ^^ The reveal was awesome, I laughed at "'You are not surprised?' he said wearily." That was so Sesshomaru and I can see Kagome's easy acceptance totally surprising him. And then the full reveal - while they are in doggy-style of course - was unbelievably hot. I'm way behind, so I'm off to do more catching up ^_^
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: March 28, 2008 23:14 CDT
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Another great installment! Kouga is becoming such a jerk...but he is a stubborn wolf though. ^_^ I love the fact that you finally incorporated Inuyasha's transformation night into the story. I had a feeling you were going to, but I did not know when. Please keep up the great work and I can not wait for the next chapter!
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Title: XD love it!!!!
Reviewed By: Keetonie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwww!!
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Reviewed By: Tarzan from fanfic.net On: March 27, 2008 15:04 CDT
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really great story! I hope she ends up with inuyasha even his sess is super hot!
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