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| "Choices, Choices..." Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] | | Pages (7): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 › » ] | Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: Iceberg60 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you've outdone yourself! Great chapter, and the thorough smex scene was a very nice touch. One would wonder if you could ever really be happy with sesshomaru, seeing as he's master of coldness and brutality. I mean, he was considering to kill kagome if she responded badly (to the youkai thing)! Besides the promises of sex, there isn't much depth to a relationship with him. I hope Kogas not down and out, and I know your a fan of Koga/Kagome because of your other story! And Inuyasha is just so cute! Anywho, i put all my faith in knowing you will choose the right couple in the end. But the suspense, it kills me! ^_^ Keep writing, you're great at it. Love the story, and hope you update soon! Sorry for the long review BTW!
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... so kagome and sesshoumaru spent time together... they seem to get along fine... and they've slept together already now too... who's next for kagome... will it be inuyasha's turn... he seems to be left out... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
| Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
tba- shocking. ~sessh- tratior! ~koga- how could u kagome? ~inu- i knew it! ~kag- ah! -runs away- ~boyz- looks at tba- now we r stuck with u! ~tba- runs of 4 no apparent reason- update sooon! bye~ boyz- girlz-start fighting eachother 4 no reason- ~TBA~
| Reviewed By: OreoGirl96 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 12:15 CST
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no it's ok i just love this story
| Reviewed By: handypup [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this. i'm not a big fan of the AU fics for the most part, most of them are written very poorly and centered around the characters at a very young age, but i do enjoy how well thought out and original your story is. of course my first choice would totally be kouga,lol, i always fall for the stalker-y, clingy type guys :D but i like how well you write the characters out and the situations. Very good, can't wait for an update!
| Title: Love it!!!
Reviewed By: Inkotoma [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 01:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this freakin' story man!!! When you writing more?
| Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 14:41 CST
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Oh, no! I was really hoping Kouga would turn out to be her choice. You know, that Kagome would go out with Sesshomaru and find him overbearing, conceited, and too expressionless, and find Inuyasha to be too angry, moody, and insensitive. Kouga is, of course, very determined and sure of himself, but as we know from the manga where Kikyo dies, he can also be sensitive and tactful in a tough-guy kind of way. And he's the only one who sees Kagome as the awesome person she is--something he saw right away, I must add. Well, anyway, it is still an awesome story, and I will keep reading as long as you keep writing!
| Reviewed By: MaraJade116 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 20:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can I just say I'm quite glad I opted for the smexed out version, lol. Not that there was any doubt ;) I loved every minute of the Kag/Sessh interaction. Everything from when he immediately called her back to him seriously channeling Ulquiorra with his "Onna, do not speak unless you have something intelligent to say." lol! That has to be my favorite line in an Inuyasha fic ever. I can just imagine Sessh saying it all sexy and stern like he is. And when she tries to get him to the bedroom despite having a date in 10 minutes. Don't blame her, though :D Okay enough Sessh-worship (for now) Despite the heavy amount of sexual tension and lusting she's currently got going with Sesshy I feel like, even though it's currently complicated and painful, her relationship with Inuyasha is something deeper. Maybe I'm reading too much into it though. Just like in the original, I do like them together, even though they often make me sad. And Kouga.... I was annoyed at how psychotic he turned out at first, but then I realized that is pretty much how his Feudal-era behavior would transfer into the real world. He is possessive and somewhat self-centered so his actions demonstrate that. Though I do like that she's now indoctrinated (that's totally the wrong word) to the idea of youkai so that when Sessh/Inu reveal it she won't be shocked. Longest review ever - gomen!!
| Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: January 22, 2008 17:46 CST
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Great job! I wanted to let you know that I got so excited that you updated that I danced around the room....yes I am a bit on the eccentric side, but can you blame me? I liked this chapter alot even though poor, thick headed Kouga got his feelings hurt. I like the soap opera effect that is beginning to happen since everyone is starting to question and find out about each other...ah it reminds me of high school drama. Well, I would like to thank you for another great read and for keeping me away from doing lesson plans. Adieu!
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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interesting chapter update... kouga being his stupid self... sesshoumaru & inuyasha going for the same human girl... and kagome is still undecided... and another family problem arises for kagome... wonder what happens next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
| Reviewed By: OreoGirl96 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 22:39 CST
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UPDATE PLEASE
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2008 19:50 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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nice updates... things are getting complicated with kagome... wonder what will happen next... update as soon as you can... please and thank you... HAPPY NEW YEAR!
| Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: January 03, 2008 19:57 CST
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WOW just WOW! Again you have surprised me with this chapter. I am humbly honored that I was one of the people that you dedicated your this chapter to. So it is my turn to blush. I love Kouga, as you know, and am glad that he got Kagome first, but I have a feeling that he will not be the only one. I particularly enjoyed the discussion about his tail. Honestly, where could he have hidden that!?! I mean they were rolling around in bed was she blinded by lust? Oh well I hope that Kouga does not get his heart stepped on again, but that is for you to decide. I also chuckled that Sesshoumaru was nervous and bothered because Kagome has slept with another youki. I know that you have mentioned Sesshoumaru not wanting to bite her before, but is that due to the marking of Kagome as a mate or that she would find out that he is a demon? I state once more that you are a great story teller and I eagerly await the next installment of both your current stories.
| Title: WOW!!!!!
Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: December 05, 2007 16:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can not compliment you enough on your story. Just when I think I know what is going to happen BAM you put in something that takes me off guard and for that I thank you. I love Sesshomaru and InuYasha in this chapter don't get me wrong, but I am a big fan of Kouga. If I where Kagome I would defiantly go for the tall, dark, and handsome type. I will in no way try to influence you by stating who I believe should end up with who because this is your story. Please update your story as soon as you can. I am suffering from the anxiety that your cliff hanger ending has posed so if you could throw me a bone (no pun intended) it would be wonderful. Also, I am becoming fond of the Sesshomaru/Kagome story that you are writing. Please keep up the good work and thank you for such great stories!
| Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2007 20:00 CST
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Hurray!!! Go Kouga!! I agree, he does need more attention, and more credit than people usually give him. While Inuyasha and Sesshomaru both have their obvious attractions, if it were real life, Kouga would probably be my pick. I don't care if he does wear a "skirt" as most people insist on calling it. I mean, just look at his legs!! Lol. Odd thing to notice in a guy, right? Anyway, I am so pleased that you updated-- I nearly squealed when I saw that you had. Great story! I love the depth you have given to each of the characters. I can't wait to see where this goes!!
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