| "Choices, Choices..." Reviews/Comments [ 91 ] |
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2008 03:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update as usual... like how inuyasha's character was shown in this chapter... he sure is sweet... seems that a major confrontation will occur between inuyasha & sesshoumaru in one of your future chapters... as long as kagome hasn't made her choice yet everything will still be confusing & complicated... wonder when inuyasha will tell kagome about himself and his past... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: Michael22 On: March 27, 2008 00:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story and the detail is great. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Roberta On: March 26, 2008 18:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've finally figured out how to leave a review on this website! Pitabread, I love how in this chapter you gave such a good description of Inuyasha's feelings and motivations. He is truly lovable. I can see him possibly ending up with Kagome, even though I am really a big Sesshoumaru fan. This story keeps me guessing as to how things will end up. I'm sure there will be a confrontation between Inu and Sess sometime.
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: Keetonie [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2008 18:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this story, I think I'm going to draw a little something for you. ;) Most likely I'll post it on Devart and note you a link XD Please update soon! I can't wait to see who she chooses though I might already have an idea. I know who I would want her to pick but I've got my own little fic set up for it. n.n Well take care hun!!
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Reviewed By: Michael22 On: March 13, 2008 00:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story and great job so far. The writing is great with good detail which is important. Looking forward to what will happen next. So please update soon thanks.
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Reviewed By: Michael22 On: March 12, 2008 23:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story and great job so far. The writing is great with good detail which is important. Looking forward to what will happen next. So please update soon thanks.
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2008 14:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~tba- dont wrry. i personally took care of him. ~sessh- wat did u do? ~tba- .... nothing u can prove. ~sessh- no fair! only i can KILL him! ~tba- relax. dont get stressed. he's fine. -takes out remote. presses button* ~inu- in cage. hanging from rope. with aligators beneeth him (pool)- help. ~sessh- i luv the gators. ~tba- nice huh? ~sessh- indeed. ~kags- its a good thing u guyz stopped fighting. ~inu- wait! why doesnt he get punished? ~tba- cause i like him. DUH ~sessh-*smirk* ~inu- i hate u. and u dont have any sympathy for a poor, lonely Hanyo *whimper* ~kags- awwww ~sessh- yuck. ~tba- emotionless- oh give me a break. we both know ur acting. so drop it. and might i add ur not very good at it. ~inu- damn female ~tba- wat eve. ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: handypup [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2008 12:00 CDT
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I really liked this chapter, as well as the last. You're so descriptive and i enjoy it. I like the pros and cons of the three men, but i would hate to be with someone like sesshoumaru(despite his cool name) and Inuyasha is so angsty, lol and Kouga can be an ass. but i like guessing who she'll end up with, and sesshoumaru seems pretty high on the list right now. oh to be young and have choices,lol. can't wait for another chapter!again, thank you so much for sharing. :)
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: March 10, 2008 17:12 CDT
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YAHOO!! What a good chapter! Sesshomaru making coffee, being sweet, and wearing boxer-briefs, which by the way are oh so sexy. Girl you crack me up! I love the way you play the characters off one another its great. It amazes me that even though this is set in a modern time frame how well you have adapted life styles and careers that fit the characters personality types. I hope that Inuyasha gets his turn to tell Kagome about who he is. In addition I am glad that she is giving him the privacy that he needs when it comes to his head wear. I would be curious too, but if she really likes the guy than give him some space. On a different note I can officially say that I am a 'junky' when it come to reading your stories. Not only am I excited to see what is going to happen next (and giggle like a school girl), but your responses to my comments are so great! ^_^ I am glad you got your TOMTOM. My one friend is going to get me one because "supposedly" I got lost leaving a Penguins game two weeks ago. I wasn't lost I just took the wrong exit, but I haven't lived down the BETHBETH turn here jokes yet and I don't think they will stop any time soon. Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2008 13:06 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
great update... glad that inuyasha & kagome spent some time together with miroku, sango and kohaku... liked how inuyasha's encounter with kagome wasn't all about sleeping together... but what will happen when it's just the two of them... seems that kagome still has lots of issues to consider so her choices are still undecided... update when you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: foxtale3 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 29, 2008 22:39 CST
Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! You do such a good job of keeping Sesshomaru in character, exposing sides of him that many Sess fans pretend don't exist. You've got guts, m'girl. Way to go! Also, I just wanted you to know that yours is one of the VERY few fanfictions that I actually check on on a semi-regular basis to see if you have updated. I can't think of a single other unfinished fanfiction that has held my interest for so long!! Even though I am a Kouga fan, as you know, I love not knowing who she is going to end up with! ^_^ I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: theblackangels_ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~sessh- uh.. happy almost birthday? ~kags- yeah. wat he said. ~tba-.... ditto. ~inu-.. remind me y im not here? ~tba+kags- she can do wat she wants! its her story! ~sessh- uh.... calm down ladies.. ~inu- dont yell at me! ~tba- wat the heck! -hits inu- ~inu- damn u!-hits her- ~tba- stop it u twit!-hits him again- ~inu- this is why u dont have friends!-hits her- ~sessh- seperates them- now ,now ' LADIES cant we settle this like mature people? ~inu- well we... wait a sec.did u just call me a girl? ~tba- wow. ur really slow inu. ~sessh- massages temples- agh. this is why i dont go out much! ~inu- that explains everything like y there's a icicle up ur ass. Right tba? ~tba-...leave me outta this.i dont wanna b ur life line. -walks away- ~inu- uh.. kag.. ~kags- srry. i dont wanna die. -walks away- ~inu- uh.. update soon! and put me in the next one! plz! ~sessh- or if u want to spice things up. u could make sure we all see eachother. ~inu- thats a stupid idea! ~sessh- is it b cuase u know ill beat the crap out of u and the wolf? ~inu- keh! yea right1 ill beat u up and the wolf! ~sessh- is that a challange? ~inu- u bet it is! ~both- draw swords- and gets hit with rocks- wat the.. ~tba+_kags- throws rocks- hey! no fighting in a review! ~sessh+inu- get pelted with rocks-ouch! ~sessh- truce? ~inu- truce. 4 now. ~both- advance on girlz- smirk- ~girlz- ak! ah!!!!!!!!!!!!! -runs 4 their lives- ~TBA~
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Reviewed By: buzzk97 On: February 17, 2008 11:42 CST
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You never disappoint. Although this time I refrained from dancing around the room. When I saw that you updated I instead clapped like I was five years old and getting a present. I know, I know, I am a dork. Anyway, I would like to say "Happy Belated Birthday". I sincerely hope that you had a wonderful time and got a bunch of great loot. So to answer your question that you posted; yes, I enjoyed the chapter! I am becoming quite fond of Sesshomaru in this story. Showing emotion, telling Kagome things, and all the while still maintaining control...how incredibly sexy! I have to admit I am still rooting for Kouga though. (I have this 'thing' for wolves!^_^) I am very curious how Kagome is going to raise the money to pay off her mother's morgage. Will she become a 'dancer'? I implore you to please keep writing. If you don't I will weep in bitter anguish!
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Reviewed By: xcuteanimegurlx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2008 21:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow I Love Your story i Just found it today i love the storyline how kagome just dosen't have one guy that she's totally in love with she has three shes a total player lol the and when koga told kagome about himself being a demon cute lol i'm a kag/kog fan only when inu is being a ass if not kag/inu lol great chapter update soon!!
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Title: Wonderful!
Reviewed By: Iceberg60 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 22:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again you've outdone yourself! Great chapter, and the thorough smex scene was a very nice touch. One would wonder if you could ever really be happy with sesshomaru, seeing as he's master of coldness and brutality. I mean, he was considering to kill kagome if she responded badly (to the youkai thing)! Besides the promises of sex, there isn't much depth to a relationship with him. I hope Kogas not down and out, and I know your a fan of Koga/Kagome because of your other story! And Inuyasha is just so cute! Anywho, i put all my faith in knowing you will choose the right couple in the end. But the suspense, it kills me! ^_^ Keep writing, you're great at it. Love the story, and hope you update soon! Sorry for the long review BTW!
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