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Title: Brrrrr...
Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon (not logging in) On: December 13, 2006 10:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Shute, he nearly froze to death in there! Nice chapter. Update soon.
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Title: Poor Zero
Reviewed By: Zero101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 09:54 CST
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Poor Zero, will he ever get a chance to propose to Fleur? Well anyways, this story has gained my undiveded attention ^_^ I cant wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: November 20, 2006 16:42 CST
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So the first round is over...Sand Warriors- x, Gundam Force- o! And is Thief, the little Rap-Robber(raptor robber hybrid) a member of their species? will he be showing up? And good job bringing ZakoZako Hour back! those little guys are so funny. so the next match is against the Snow Warriors, huh? Why do I have images of snowball warfare dancing in my head...? (PS: Bakunetsumaru's attack is called Tenkyo-Ken, thought you should know.)
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 11:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Zako Zako Hour is back! And I loved Guneagle and Loki's introduction. Update soon!
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: Shiva_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have sparked my interest my friend. I like this, especially since Zero is in it...*day dreams for a minute* oh right, continue with this, you have got something going here. Just that you might want to read your story over before posting it, you have some minor errors in the story, but it's nothing that can't be fixed. Good luck. Update soon...I know I will! Ja ne. Shiva ^_^
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Title: Thank you.
Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for letting me use Fleur in my fiction. She'll still be with Zero. Cool story.
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 08:27 CST
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Oooooo...A contest. This shall be most interesting! And that's sweet of Bakunetsumaru to give Fleur and Zero a little push. XP Please update!
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Title: Oh boy, romantic stuff...
Reviewed By: Charon the Sabercat (no loggy inny) On: November 11, 2006 19:58 CST
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This is gonna be interesting... But isn't Fleur a little young? Anyway, keep writing. This is gonna be an exciting fic.
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: November 11, 2006 19:05 CST
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Good start up to the contest to be. PS, I don't know the name of Rele's father either, so I just call him King Lacroa to be safe. by the way, you misspelled Rele's full name(Relehimana Miya De Lacroa) I'm surprised you didn't include a ZakoZako Hour. I was sure those little reporter Zakos would've stowed away on the Musai, it's where their stage is. but a good chapter nonetheless.
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Title: Hi, it's me again.
Reviewed By: Sayla Gathermoon On: November 09, 2006 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two things. First of all, please update. Second of all, I'm going to write my own fanfiction, and I want to know if you would allow me to use Fleur as a character. Please let me know. I love the story so far.
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, your writing's improved a lot FFD! This is coming along very nicely. Loved the little game competition between GunEagle and Shute. XP GunEagle's such a sore loser. Awwwww, and I think I know what Zero's going to ask Fleur. *snickers* (I agree with Kichiko, they make a cute couple) Keep it up! I look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: November 07, 2006 20:37 CST
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Not bad. By the way, I noticed a mistake you made in Demon Nightmare. You adressed Zeong as Emperor, but his title is GENERAL.
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Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: Kichiko_the_winged_musha On: November 07, 2006 18:33 CST
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oh, coolness, your writing another story! ^^ Im with Sayla, is Zero gonna ask what I think he`s gonna ask? *giggles* sorry, I think Fleur and Zero make a pretty cute couple though. heh, Zero has new squires? oh boy, they must be troublesome!^^ XD I cant wait to read more!! (seriouslky, I love your fanfics) ~meepu
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Title: Neat
Reviewed By: Sayla Gathermoon On: November 07, 2006 11:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Would the four little words that Zero was referring to be "Will you marry me?" And are the directed to Fleur? Cool story.
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Reviewed By: GundamCat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 08:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool..i like it^^
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