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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: January 15, 2007 11:40 CST
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Oh Nooo! Don't tell me the Gundam FOrce lost again! Why're they losing?! I've noticed that when the Gundam Force loses, it's because the enviroment gives the other side a 'home field advantage'. Doesn't seem like a fair contest in that sense. No fair! Also, what happened to Zapper's gang and Cobramaru? They seem to have vanished...
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Reviewed By: Kichiko_the_winged_musha On: January 13, 2007 15:18 CST
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WOW!! I that was AMAZING! poor Baku, poor Gundam force!! They gots fried!! DX ehhh, I must know what happens..... and I think Riley ish pretty cool, though he now makes me want to draw water gundams again >_> aweome chapp, I really can't wait for the next one XDDD
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 13, 2007 11:54 CST
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Gah! Poor Baku! ;_; Very clever, though you need to re-read the chapter and fix some grammar errors, dear. :3 i wanna know who wins-- or is it a tie because everyone got fried? Marina didn't mean to electrocute everyone now, did she? Well, regardless, excellent chapter, update soon! IWANNAKNOW D:
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Title: Cliff Hangar! Hanging from a cliff...
Reviewed By: Charon the Sabercat (I hate capslock) On: January 13, 2007 09:10 CST
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I liked Marina. It's about time there was a character that used that strategy. I am looking forward to the exciting conclusion!
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Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon (no log in) On: January 05, 2007 11:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Bakunetsumaru - his armor = SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE EEEE!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: May-VeggieGirl1 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2006 10:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Hmm, the summary turned me off for a long while, but it seems there's definitely going to be plot- and action. :3 So I guess that means I'll keep reading! n.n Can't wait to see the battle underwater! I think Zero should finally get the chance only to have Fluer propose to him instead. xD Coz that would just be so frusterating and romantic.
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Title: Eh...
Reviewed By: Charon the Sabercat (sorry for the wait) On: December 25, 2006 15:11 CST
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It's good storywise... I'm a little put-off by the present tense, though. It makes it really hard to read. Otherwise, the story's fine. And I always love a little fanservice. (Nakedness, EE!)
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: December 23, 2006 10:11 CST
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Oho, now it's getting interesting! What could be in store for the Gundam Force? And for the underwater challenge, maybe they could use the Dark Axis equipment the SDG confiscated?
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: December 13, 2006 10:24 CST
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Oh no! The Gundam Force lost! I can't believe it! Usually when Shute refuses to give up against impossible odds, like in his fight with Cobramaru at Blanc Base, Captain's Soul Drive powers up. So why didn't-? Also, the Zakozako Hour is dissapointing. I suggest you watch real ZakoZako Hours to recharge.
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Title: Brrrrr...
Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon (not logging in) On: December 13, 2006 10:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Poor Shute, he nearly froze to death in there! Nice chapter. Update soon.
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Title: Poor Zero
Reviewed By: Zero101 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 29, 2006 09:54 CST
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Poor Zero, will he ever get a chance to propose to Fleur? Well anyways, this story has gained my undiveded attention ^_^ I cant wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: November 20, 2006 16:42 CST
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So the first round is over...Sand Warriors- x, Gundam Force- o! And is Thief, the little Rap-Robber(raptor robber hybrid) a member of their species? will he be showing up? And good job bringing ZakoZako Hour back! those little guys are so funny. so the next match is against the Snow Warriors, huh? Why do I have images of snowball warfare dancing in my head...? (PS: Bakunetsumaru's attack is called Tenkyo-Ken, thought you should know.)
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Title: Yay!
Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2006 11:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The Zako Zako Hour is back! And I loved Guneagle and Loki's introduction. Update soon!
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Title: Sweet
Reviewed By: Shiva_Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 19:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have sparked my interest my friend. I like this, especially since Zero is in it...*day dreams for a minute* oh right, continue with this, you have got something going here. Just that you might want to read your story over before posting it, you have some minor errors in the story, but it's nothing that can't be fixed. Good luck. Update soon...I know I will! Ja ne. Shiva ^_^
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Title: Thank you.
Reviewed By: Sayla_Gathermoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for letting me use Fleur in my fiction. She'll still be with Zero. Cool story.
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