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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 08:27 CST
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Oooooo...A contest. This shall be most interesting! And that's sweet of Bakunetsumaru to give Fleur and Zero a little push. XP Please update!
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Title: Oh boy, romantic stuff...
Reviewed By: Charon the Sabercat (no loggy inny) On: November 11, 2006 19:58 CST
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This is gonna be interesting... But isn't Fleur a little young? Anyway, keep writing. This is gonna be an exciting fic.
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: November 11, 2006 19:05 CST
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Good start up to the contest to be. PS, I don't know the name of Rele's father either, so I just call him King Lacroa to be safe. by the way, you misspelled Rele's full name(Relehimana Miya De Lacroa) I'm surprised you didn't include a ZakoZako Hour. I was sure those little reporter Zakos would've stowed away on the Musai, it's where their stage is. but a good chapter nonetheless.
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Title: Hi, it's me again.
Reviewed By: Sayla Gathermoon On: November 09, 2006 20:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two things. First of all, please update. Second of all, I'm going to write my own fanfiction, and I want to know if you would allow me to use Fleur as a character. Please let me know. I love the story so far.
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Reviewed By: TDAT-CrystalDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 14:58 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, your writing's improved a lot FFD! This is coming along very nicely. Loved the little game competition between GunEagle and Shute. XP GunEagle's such a sore loser. Awwwww, and I think I know what Zero's going to ask Fleur. *snickers* (I agree with Kichiko, they make a cute couple) Keep it up! I look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Cybertoy00 On: November 07, 2006 20:37 CST
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Not bad. By the way, I noticed a mistake you made in Demon Nightmare. You adressed Zeong as Emperor, but his title is GENERAL.
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Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: Kichiko_the_winged_musha On: November 07, 2006 18:33 CST
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oh, coolness, your writing another story! ^^ Im with Sayla, is Zero gonna ask what I think he`s gonna ask? *giggles* sorry, I think Fleur and Zero make a pretty cute couple though. heh, Zero has new squires? oh boy, they must be troublesome!^^ XD I cant wait to read more!! (seriouslky, I love your fanfics) ~meepu
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Title: Neat
Reviewed By: Sayla Gathermoon On: November 07, 2006 11:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Would the four little words that Zero was referring to be "Will you marry me?" And are the directed to Fleur? Cool story.
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Reviewed By: GundamCat [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2006 08:20 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
cool..i like it^^
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