| "All My Dreams Are Torn Asunder" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lily_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2009 22:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I do love this fic. I've read it a few times now, and it never loses its appeal. If you do end up expanding it, I want to see the reactions of the gang when they find out that a) Hiei ran out on them and b) his mate is a time-traveling miko (my guess is that Kuwa faints on hearing that Hiei even has a mate). That would make my day.
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Title: Panda-san
Reviewed By: White_Witch_Sakura [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! The first time I read this, I wasn't a member. Now that I am I have made it a favorite. I just can't get enought of it I hope that you continue it, I would love to see this be come a epic story. Please keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2009 14:36 CST
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this is a good story, i hope to read more soon. i cant wait for yusuke's reaction to hiei having a mate or for kagome to meet a grown up shippo
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Reviewed By: Lily_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2008 18:25 CST
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i have to say, i've never exactly been fond of crossovers, but this one was so well done i just may have to convert XP. i've now read several of your stories, and i have to say they're all very well written. and now i'm going to read some more. ja ne!
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2008 08:46 CDT
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this was a great story
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Title: All My Dreams are Torn Asunder
Reviewed By: Scarlet Butterfly On: March 27, 2008 19:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a very good one. Normally I'd protest to the story ending but this was a pretty good place to do so, I wouldn't complain if you chose to end it here. Even though it ended good I can see it continuing as Naraku hadn't been defeated and Yusuke and Kurama still haven't gotten their explaination. Also with Kagome's family and is InuYasha going to be able to come back or not? Many possibilities. I look forward to it continuing if you decide to.
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Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2008 00:20 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am among the people who would like to see this become a full story. In fact I'm on my knees begging for you to do just that.
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Reviewed By: SilverDrache On: January 28, 2008 19:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Absolutely amazing. It is always a joy to read your stories.
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Reviewed By: Hieis_rose [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 23:35 CDT
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perfect ten, I wish you would convert this from a two-shot, it could turn out quite good if continued
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Title: Chapter 2
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2007 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome for a two-shot.
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2007 07:23 CDT
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up date soon! i love it!
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Reviewed By: (sarah) On: January 10, 2007 20:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I have to say this is the most original story I've ever come across for the simple fact that...the jewel was destroyed? lol I love that. I've never read a story where the writter has done that before and I've read quite a few :) I also love your style of writting and the detail of things and how your not afraid to hurt the main characters and make them imperfect (like with sango getting injured and miroku sucking in the jewel) Needless to say I can't wait for an update and to see how the spirit detectives react to everything :) Now that I think about it this is the first story I've read where they were older than Kagome as well. Kudos!
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Reviewed By: Bloody_blades On: December 12, 2006 22:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story please keep going!
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Reviewed By: Magiknight [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2006 01:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was my first ever Hiei/Kagome fiction and I blame you entirely for my newest pairing obsession. Between the seperation, reunion and kiss I didn't know if I should cry, laugh, or light up a cigarette.
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Reviewed By: Tallia On: December 04, 2006 18:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope to God you write another chapter! This story is so freaking wicked!! I know you have alot of stories going on (all of them amzazing by the way) but if you ever get the chance to continue T really hope you take it - awesome story!!!! I love it!
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Reviewed By: Kielle On: November 19, 2006 21:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this story is freakin brilliant!!! Please, please, PLEASE continue this fic - it has to by far be one of the best/ no the best hiei/kag fic I've ever read - heck its one of the best crossover fics ive read - please consider continuing this! (alright fan-girl mode off) Your writing style is consistently beautiful and your story ideas are amazing - I bow to your greatness! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Bombi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2006 22:59 CST
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Its not a prob staying with you as a fan, your a great writer! Thanks for putting another chap up for this! I really can't wait to see what you'll dish out next!
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Reviewed By: PhantomAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 12:47 CST
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i love this story ^.^ it ends so sweet
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2006 01:04 CST
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Please make this into a real story! You never said Naraku died so he can still be the enemy! I think it will be really good. Especially with all the things that you can do when Hiei meets the family! KUKUKUKUKU! Please do an update, and soon!
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Reviewed By: KagHieiLuver On: November 12, 2006 00:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i luv it!!
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Reviewed By: airwalk55 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 23:41 CST
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Yet another wonderful chapter. I hope you'll turn this into a long story; it would do nicely. ^^ The reunion made me all fuzzy and warm. ::sigh:: I look forward to more of your works.
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Title: Ch. 2
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 19:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:dances in joy: Yay! You finished it! :screams in joy: I loved it, and again, your wonderous writing has me insnared within it's wonderous grasp! I love all of your fictions, and hope to one day get up there on your level! :sighs: The storm scene when Hiei slammed Kag against the car, and kissed her had me squealing in glee! I was lyk, YAY! HE FOUND HER AGAIN! And I loved how you had Yuusuke thinking The world is going the hell in a basket Very awesome! :giggle: Well, i hope you get your other one-shots out, and get to finish your wonderous stories too! :dances again: From your loyal fan, Mitsuko
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Title: Excellent Ending
Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another excellent piece of work. I have many favorite stories on a number of different sites that are bookmarked in my favorites or saved to my computer for the pleasure of reading when ever I want. I have very few favorite authors even in my bookmarks, and you are one of those few. Please keep up the great work. I am glad to hear that you have not stopped working on your stories, and although impatient, I eagerly await seeing some...any...of your longer works being update, including "Night of a Blood Red Moon".
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Reviewed By: Reltica_Rune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 13:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i love this fic truly as i love hiei/kagome fics cuz they balance together. granted i think they got together a little quick but do to your streak of one-shots that isnt surprizing, but at least you made it good. i would like it if you contiunue this and wouldnt it be interesting if thier was some sort of side effect of the jewel that was bonded to her soal being destroyed. like idunno the jewels power becomes her own, her life is extended something. but whatever i look forward to your new stories as well. after all you are one of my favorite authors. ja ne
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Reviewed By: Shi-no-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 12:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter, so cute and teeth-hurting sweet. I can see this coming into a full blown story, but as long as you keep posting your delectable Hiei/Kagome stories, i will love you forever, and im sure many others will as well. And im also glad that you got so many reviews, i wish my stories would start getting this type of feed back! {+K+}
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 05:07 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Another good one! I was so surprised that you brought Maya into it. And I still just love the "jewel sucked into the wind tunnel and is GONE" idea. I would have loved to have seen Kurama's face when he got home and found them gone! (And found the girl's wet clothes still there!) Ha!! I love your long stories AND your one-shots! Write it, I'll read it. Hope you finish up the "Explosive Chemistry" two-shot starring Hiei/Kagome soon, too.
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Reviewed By: Raizen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 05:00 CST
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Still like it, but haven't read any "night of the blood read moon" Lately, this has got me craving that...how ever weird that may sound
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Reviewed By: KagHieiLuver On: November 10, 2006 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another great job!!cant wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Natsumi Tsuchi-Ookami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 22:12 CST
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Very nice! Please do make it a two-sho! PPLLLLLLEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSEEEEE!!!!!!!
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Title: More Please!
Reviewed By: Kagomechan13 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 20:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please write more! I want to read the conclusion!
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