| "All My Dreams Are Torn Asunder" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Reviewed By: airwalk55 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 14:35 CST
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I love it! I think my heart just died. I hope you'll continue it because this is a really good story like all of your fics are. I love the plot. ^^
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Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 06:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great story. Please continue. I realize that you tend to not continue your stories, because the rate of readers to the rate of reviews are not has high as most authors would like, however, there are those loyal readers who truly like your work, and when you do not continue your stories because of the number of reviews, you are in essence punishing your most valued readers. I do understand your point of view on the reviews. Writing my own stories, I have also seen the same thing, unfortunately, while it would be nice to make more people review, there is not much that one can do to force them to do so. Even threatening to not write any more doesn't work, and in the long run, all that happens is that you stop doing something that you already dearly love to do, and do extremely well. 'Write stories for others to read.'. Please update this story and continue some of your others.
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Reviewed By: darkenedsoul On: November 09, 2006 03:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was amazing so far. you've got to continue it, i've got to know what happens next ^_^
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Reviewed By: spitfire17268 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2006 01:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story. Please continue with it.
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Reviewed By: yu On: November 09, 2006 00:57 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love all of your stories i don't offten review unless i really like. but i can't wiat for you to update. keep writing your awsome stories.
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Reviewed By: Raizen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 20:20 CST
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I honestly can't wait till you update! It is wonderful! Keep up the awesome work!
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Title: Ch. 1
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy fucking shit... You have to continue it! I loved it soo much! The second chapter would be soo freakin awesome! I would love to see Yuusuke's reaction to Hiei having a long-lost mate! *lafs hysterically at just the thought* By the kami's you are a goddess among regular humans with your super-duper writing, and insanely tangy lemons! *does happy dance* Love all of your works, am a big fan, and I hope to read more from your wonderous mind soon! -Mitsuko
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Reviewed By: red haired demon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is way awesome please write more please and thank you
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 17:40 CST
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DOn't you dare stop! I gotta have the big reunion scene!
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: Shi-no-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job as always, dear writer. I really hope you continue with a second chapter, that would be lovely. o^^o Nice lemon, you are the hentai Queen. {+K+}
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Reviewed By: Deshanabrightstar On: November 08, 2006 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following your work for a long while, and very much enjoy it. I'd like to see where this one goes.
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Title: You are Evil
Reviewed By: DarkMe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 15:22 CST
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Oh you had to stop there, PLEASE write another chapter. Please? Ah well. Love your writing can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: Reltica_Rune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 15:16 CST
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i like it and i would enjoyit if you would write another chapter for this story it has an interesting start. the whole "where does mirokus tunnel lead to?" thing. your a good author even if your time sequences are diff. i like a good part of your works. me ^-^
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: Mistress_Yume (NSI) On: November 08, 2006 14:17 CST
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this is wonderful! =D a second chapter would be great; seeing as though this story could be finished, it would also be a bit hanging... so yes! second chaptor por favor!
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Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 13:42 CST
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o yeah i wanna read more!!!!!!!!!! i love this one already!!
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