| "All My Dreams Are Torn Asunder" Reviews/Comments [ 51 ] |
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Title: Ch. 1
Reviewed By: halfblackwolfdemon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 19:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy fucking shit... You have to continue it! I loved it soo much! The second chapter would be soo freakin awesome! I would love to see Yuusuke's reaction to Hiei having a long-lost mate! *lafs hysterically at just the thought* By the kami's you are a goddess among regular humans with your super-duper writing, and insanely tangy lemons! *does happy dance* Love all of your works, am a big fan, and I hope to read more from your wonderous mind soon! -Mitsuko
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Reviewed By: red haired demon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is way awesome please write more please and thank you
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 17:40 CST
Comment/Review:
DOn't you dare stop! I gotta have the big reunion scene!
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Title: Great job
Reviewed By: Shi-no-tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job as always, dear writer. I really hope you continue with a second chapter, that would be lovely. o^^o Nice lemon, you are the hentai Queen. {+K+}
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Reviewed By: Deshanabrightstar On: November 08, 2006 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been following your work for a long while, and very much enjoy it. I'd like to see where this one goes.
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Title: You are Evil
Reviewed By: DarkMe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 15:22 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh you had to stop there, PLEASE write another chapter. Please? Ah well. Love your writing can't wait to see more.
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Reviewed By: Reltica_Rune [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 15:16 CST
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i like it and i would enjoyit if you would write another chapter for this story it has an interesting start. the whole "where does mirokus tunnel lead to?" thing. your a good author even if your time sequences are diff. i like a good part of your works. me ^-^
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Title: amazing
Reviewed By: Mistress_Yume (NSI) On: November 08, 2006 14:17 CST
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this is wonderful! =D a second chapter would be great; seeing as though this story could be finished, it would also be a bit hanging... so yes! second chaptor por favor!
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Reviewed By: tessie_fanfic [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 13:42 CST
Comment/Review:
o yeah i wanna read more!!!!!!!!!! i love this one already!!
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Reviewed By: mrskcgoodman [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 12:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First I want to say that was GREAT. I love it. It tugged at my heart strings. I would love for you to add more but if you dont I still love it.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! Nice one! I love what you did with the jewel! I hope you finish with another chapter so we can find out what happened to the Inu Gang after the jewel and Kagome were gone. And, of course, gotta know what was keeping Hiei from her in the future -- Koenma, perhaps? You've been on a one- and -two-shot roll lately. It's nice to be able to read a whole story without having to wait so long for new chapters! Thank you!! (Just hope you DO add one more chapter to this one, and that you finish up Explosive Chemistry soon, too.) You're one of my all-time favorite authors!
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Title: review
Reviewed By: Sphinx_Inuyasha On: November 08, 2006 10:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it it's one that hasn't been tried before please continue....
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Reviewed By: Bombi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 09:55 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw C'mon another chapter would be great! Please, I'll give you a cookie!
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Title: SheenaW
Reviewed By: Seiai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2006 09:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Im almost in tears...that was so beautifully written, and the end was so sad...i cant wait for the rest of it!
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Reviewed By: chibes who is not logged in On: November 08, 2006 08:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow this chapter was amazing...I'd love to read your part two...but now I have class to get ready for
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